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Spirit Orbs : Chronicles of Ra'as

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Penulis: R_F_T_S

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A twist of fate or more like an unexpected turn of events send four individuals on a journey across the realms of Ra'as, a world of superpowers and extraordinary individuals.

An adventure that will put them against powerful foes and will enable them uncover the secrets behind the real origins of their world is about to begin.

Unknown to our protagonists though is the fact that the threat of war looms over the Planet Ra'as with several factions getting into a struggle for the possession of the omnipotent device known as the Spirit orbs.

An epic tale of love and loss, pain and suffering, despair and revenge awaits all those willing to embark on this adventure with our protagonists.


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this book is noice, but there is no major romantic conflict between the three main characters, a love triangle to clarify,[img=update] romantic conflict

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The_Procrastinator

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4yr
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notsosure

The character build up is awesome. The characters are very realistic and I like the pace of the book. I'm looking forward to more chapters.👍👍👍👍

4yr
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John_Uzochukwu

Overall I'll say it's a really good book, top notch characters, uhhhhh, not so shabby character design, and piece of the art world building,dan howbeit quite similar to most protagonist is one of the few main characters that actually seeks vengeance but doesn't let go of basic morality, illara isn't a pushover and actually stands out unlike most female leads, and sai isn't the dumn jock boyfriend, all in all I think it's a great story.👍👍

4yr
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Jimpaly

First of all, I’m going to point out that this story is around 70% action and 30% mystery. If you’re looking for action-packed scenes and descriptive fights, then this story’s for you. Other than that, I love the world-building you did in the beginning and as the story continues. The plot is eventful and interesting, but it feels like a lot of the mystery is already spoiled since it tells you who the bad guy is (but idk there might be more to the story that hadn’t been revealed yet). The supernatural abilities are placed well in the combat, though it might be nice to see them used outside of fights. The characters have nice interactions and there is a strong female lead, but you could give them clearer and more distinct personalities. The major issue is probably that you should work on your punctuation, sentencing, and paragraphing. Your word choice is great but there’s a lot you can improve. But overall, I love where the story’s going and I can’t wait for more!

4yr
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AJPaturde

I liked this book, cool setting, and storyline. I have reviewed this book I hope the author comes and does it to mine also, lol kidding.

4yr
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Zanyyy
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I haven't really gotten far in reading this book but from what I've read I can tell that the author put a lot of work on the characters. The action is really too notch and I can't wait to read more!💯

4yr
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GeorgeOfTheCity

Would love to read more. Good work with developing the characters. If you're new here and love books with a lot of action, this is the book for you.

4yr
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wild_imaginatorII

I ****en love the starting line of your book! Nice writing style, Unique story line, Not clichè, What more could I want in a book? This is a recommended read!!!!!!!

4yr
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Alanala

The Prologue was a lil' bit of an info dump, but it's alright, probably. Grammar can improve, I already saw the author's comment on it- I won't fault :pensive: Otherwise, the story is so far- heating up, great setting, ez collection

4yr
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Jozan
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OMG! 😭😭😭 THIS AMAZING! The crime fighting romantic duo, dead parents avenger metal dude, corrupt politicians and police force, nice power scaling and PERFECT transitions of scene as well as the EUPHORIC description of (fight and flirt) scenes. My two fav scenes were the fight club battle (SO GOOD! 😭🙌) and the when llara teased lover boy into making him go back on his promise about no *** (I started blushing) Llara is best girl without a doubt!!🙄💅🥵💕 Author-sama congrats on 100k viewers keep up the AMAZINGLY GREAT work (I'm on chap 13 btw🤪 I'm loving so much) To anyone who is reading this review.... PLEASE!! Give this a read or at least at it to collections. 🙏🙏🙏 If it helps. you can use this app's audio feature to listen to the story while you do something else and still enjoy how great this novel is 😃👍🥰🥰🤩

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MITCHIEWilliams

This is a very interesting book. The plot is interesting. The characters are also well developed. The author did a good work with the discription, it draws readers in. I really enjoyed reading this book

4yr
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asdgvcxz

A very solid webnovel in it's current state. There are a few things that should be worked on such as punctuations and whatnot but the overall story is quite engaging, I like the world building and the characters aren't all that bad. The character design really doing it for but maybe that's cause I lack imagination. Overall has a great story and plot, looking forward to future chapters and what's to come.

4yr
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Dante_Luca

In all honesty I didn't read enough chapters to give this kind of score. But I've got to say this novel has a lot of potential, there are a few grammar mistakes here and there but at the same time every novel that you will read will have these small grammar mistakes so it's alright. the author makes sure to update this novel frequently giving us a lot of chapters. as a said before I didn't read enough chapters yet, so I don't know if the story development is good or not, but at the first couple of chapters the story does progress in a nice and easy way helping the reader understand a bit about the history of the characters but not revealing too much. the character Design is very good as all of main characters in the beginning are described well and are talked about in an interesting manner. the world background is also very good at the first chapters from ancient times to current time. I'm going to continue reading this and give a better review with better details - I believe that if you have free time you should read this, the story is already very interesting in the first chapters. author-nim please keep up with the good work!

3yr
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R_F_T_S

Shameless author review here, this is my first novel and I see great things coming out of it. So read and leave a review. I'm open to constructive criticism so lay it on me coz I know that my work ain't perfect in the slightest 😅

4yr
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JdCreates

Book is great, has plenty of variety and overall has a good plot. Keep it up! I only have a few complaints, but they are minor and don't ruin the book.

4yr
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Samcrowned00

@R_F_T_S Going through your book, I remembered I have once reviewed it before. But it wouldn't hurt to review again. You have used a technique which is beautiful especially when you are describing the fighting scenes. What can I say, I admire your bold step in writting a book even out of your own culture. This Signaled to me that you have really done a lot of research to come up with this great work.

4yr
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Diamond_Air

Naisu! Naisu! Naisu! I'd say these three words only buh this is a review sooo I wuv this novel! Everything's great! Characters, plot and all. Heck, those fight scenes keep me tied to it. 👀 Who knows, I may borrow your writing style. Welll, novel's great and I'm sticking with it! Keep up the good work author XD

4yr
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pen_inker

This book is. Hmm...Breathtaking. It is the action for me. the author is well versed at active storytelling. He successfully glue the reader to the stories. I'm more than impressed with the character development. keep up the good work. also I love the rate of update.

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Jilid 2 : Defense Exams

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    Private investigators 4 years ago
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    Total waste of time 4 years ago
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    D.O.D 4 years ago
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    Invitation 4 years ago
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    I think we should accept the invitation 4 years ago
  6. 41
    Search for Crow and Acceptance 4 years ago
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    Kanamara family dinner 4 years ago
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    Kanamara family dinner II 4 years ago
  9. 44
    Hello, stranger 4 years ago
  10. 45
    The third member 4 years ago
  11. 46
    Crow versus Clark and Tara 4 years ago
  12. 47
    Crow versus Clark and Tara II 4 years ago
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    Reunion 4 years ago
  14. 49
    Reunion II / A wounded man out for blood 4 years ago
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    Mission Report 4 years ago
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    Welcome to Maracas Island 4 years ago
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    Welcome to Maracas island II 4 years ago
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    Bonfire night 4 years ago
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    Bonfire night II 4 years ago
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    Orientation 4 years ago
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    Orientation II 4 years ago
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    Defence Exam Teams 4 years ago
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    A familiar name / Team exercise I 4 years ago
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    Team exercise II ( King of beasts) 4 years ago
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    Team Exercise III 4 years ago
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    Intruder alert / Confrontation 4 years ago
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    Confrontation II 4 years ago
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    Nice to see you again 4 years ago
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    A matter of principles 4 years ago
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    Crow's return 4 years ago
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    Crow's return II 4 years ago
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    Crow's return III 4 years ago
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    Crow's return IV ( Apocalyptic Attraction) 4 years ago
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    Crow's return V ( Arrival of Yakob and Mae ) 4 years ago
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    Crow's return VI ( A frontal assault) 4 years ago
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    Crow vs Yakob 4 years ago
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    Crow vs Yakob II 4 years ago
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    Crow vs Yakob III ( Compatibility) 4 years ago
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    Crow vs Yakob IV ( A lesson in compatibility) 4 years ago
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    Crow vs Yakob V 4 years ago
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    Crow vs Yakob VI ( Sunken lands) 4 years ago
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    Crow vs Yakob VII ( Finale) 4 years ago
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    Taken into custody / Flashback 4 years ago
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    Recuperation 4 years ago
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    Administrative summons 4 years ago
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    Administrative summons II 4 years ago
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    Girl talk 4 years ago
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    Lofty dreams / My closest friend 4 years ago
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    A slight warning 4 years ago
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    Markov's revelation 4 years ago
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    A 'minor' slip up 4 years ago
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    Girl talk II 4 years ago
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    A traitor amongst us 4 years ago
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    A traitor amongst us II 4 years ago
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    Lamentations 4 years ago
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    As long as you are with me 4 years ago
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    Future goals / A little chat between old friends 4 years ago
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    Administrative Assembly 4 years ago
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    Flashback ( Han) 4 years ago
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    Animus 4 years ago
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    The Ninety seconds rule 4 years ago
  62. 97
    What was the mission description?? 4 years ago
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    A burning question / A walking disaster 4 years ago
  64. 99
    Test Day 1 ( A test of wills) 4 years ago
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    Test Day 1 ( Test of wills) II 4 years ago
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    Test day 1 ( Test of wills) III 4 years ago
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    End of Test day 1/ Test Day 2 ( Obstacle course) 4 years ago
  68. 103
    End of Test day 2 / Test day 3 ( A test of mental fortitude) 4 years ago
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    Test day 3 ( A test of mental fortitude) II 4 years ago
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    End of Test day 3 / Preparations for the appointed time 4 years ago
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    The masked man 4 years ago
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    One day till the combat test 4 years ago
  73. 108
    A storm is coming 4 years ago
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    Combat test day 1 4 years ago
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    Combat test day 1 ( Ilara vs Animus) 4 years ago
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    Combat test day 1 ( Ilara vs Animus ) II 4 years ago
  77. 112
    Han Solomon 4 years ago
  78. 113
    Do not read!!!! ( Duplicate chapter ) 4 years ago
  79. 114
    A shocking discovery 4 years ago
  80. 115
    A distraught man 4 years ago
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    We need to talk 4 years ago
  82. 117
    Combat test day 3 ( Nia vs Sai) 4 years ago
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    Combat test day 3 ( Nia vs Sai ) II 4 years ago
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    Combat test day 3 ( Nia vs Sai ) III 4 years ago
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    Okoye vs Sysal ( Combat test) 4 years ago
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    Okoye vs Sysal ( Combat test) II 4 years ago
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    Okoye vs Sysal ( Combat test) III 4 years ago
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    Do not read !!!!!( Duplicate chapter ) 4 years ago
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    Okoye vs Sysal ( Combat test) IV 4 years ago
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    Dusik Chim 4 years ago
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    Jericho 4 years ago
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    Combat test day 5 4 years ago
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    Combat test day 5 ( Dan vs Piper) 4 years ago
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    Combat test day 5 ( Dan vs Piper) II 4 years ago
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    Combat test day 5 ( Dan vs Piper) III 4 years ago
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    Mira's resolve 4 years ago
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    Mira's resolve II 4 years ago
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    Mira's resolve III 4 years ago
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    Mira's resolve IV 4 years ago
  100. 135
    A suicide.... bomber?? 4 years ago
  101. 136
    Maracas lounge 4 years ago
  102. 137
    Combat test day 7 4 years ago
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    Combat test day 7 ( Ilara vs Kira ) 4 years ago
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    Combat test day 7 ( Ilara vs Kira ) II 4 years ago
  105. 140
    Knife fight 3 years ago
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    Knife fight II / A wolf and a giant 3 years ago
  107. 142
    Do not read !!!! ( Duplicate chapter ) 3 years ago
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    Knife fight III 3 years ago
  109. 144
    A career in lumbering 3 years ago
  110. 145
    Tension mounts 3 years ago
  111. 146
    Combat test day nine 3 years ago
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    Sai vs Ake 3 years ago
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    Sai vs Ake II 3 years ago
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    Threat of Jericho 3 years ago
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    Threat of Jericho II 3 years ago
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    Dan vs Urch 3 years ago
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    Dan vs Urch II 3 years ago
  118. 153
    Dan vs Urch III 3 years ago
  119. 154
    A Match for The Eater 3 years ago
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    Case study 3 years ago
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    Pan's awakening 3 years ago
  122. 157
    Ilara vs Killian ( Combat test) 3 years ago
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    Ilara vs Killian II ( Combat Test) 3 years ago
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    Rematch ( Boa vs Han) 3 years ago
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    Rematch II ( Boa vs Han) 3 years ago
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    Rematch III ( Boa vs Han) 3 years ago
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    Rematch IV (Boa vs Han) 3 years ago
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    And the plot thickens... 3 years ago
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    A monstrous aura 3 years ago
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    Room ten 3 years ago
  131. 166
    Going all out 3 years ago
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    Invisible sword style 3 years ago
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    Do not read!!! ( Duplicate chapter ) 3 years ago
  134. 169
    Going all out II 3 years ago
  135. 170
    Going all out III 3 years ago
  136. 171
    Confessions 3 years ago
  137. 172
    Memories of regret 3 years ago
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    Clash of swords ( combat test ) 3 years ago
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    Clash of swords II ( Combat test ) 3 years ago
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    Mirror wonder ( combat test ) 3 years ago
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    Clay twins ( Combat test ) 3 years ago
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    Clay twins II ( Combat test ) 3 years ago
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    Clay twins III ( Combat test ) 3 years ago
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    Clay twins IV ( Combat test ) 3 years ago
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    Clay twins V ( Combat test ) 3 years ago
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    Kick - ass 3 years ago
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    Bold assumptions 3 years ago
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    A bargain 3 years ago
  149. 184
    We are Jericho 3 years ago
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    Suspicions 3 years ago
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    A chat between strangers 3 years ago
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    Chat between strangers II / Okoye vs Sai 3 years ago
  153. 188
    Okoye vs Sai / Under surveillance 3 years ago
  154. 189
    Under surveillance II 3 years ago
  155. 190
    Sai x Okoye ( Last leg ) 3 years ago
  156. 191
    An unexpected guest / Mira x Dan I 3 years ago
  157. 192
    Mira x Dan II 3 years ago
  158. 193
    Mira x Dan III 3 years ago
  159. 194
    Mira x Dan IV 3 years ago
  160. 195
    Plans for the Final third 3 years ago
  161. 196
    Flashback ( Group A ) 3 years ago
  162. 197
    Banquet Hall 3 years ago
  163. 198
    Banquet Hall II / Pairings for the final third 3 years ago
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    Han x Okoye 3 years ago
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    Han x Okoye II 3 years ago
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    Han x Okoye III 3 years ago
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    Han x Okoye IV 3 years ago
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    Disciplinary committee 3 years ago
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    Disciplinary committee II 3 years ago
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    Training session 3 years ago
  171. 206
    Hype for the final match 3 years ago
  172. 207
    Awaiting the final match 3 years ago
  173. 208
    Final Match day 3 years ago
  174. 209
    Final Matchday : Dan x Han 3 years ago
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    Final match day : Dan x Han II 3 years ago
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    Final Matchday : Dan x Han III 3 years ago
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    Final Matchday : Dan x Han IV { Festival of blades } 3 years ago
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    Final Matchday : Dan x Han V { First dance - Vengeance } 3 years ago
  179. 214
    Confrontation ( Markov x Dusik ) 3 years ago
  180. 215
    'The right thing to do' 3 years ago
  181. 216
    Selection ceremony ( Welcome ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony II { The appointed time is nigh } 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony III ( No retreat, No surrender ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony IV ( Monsters ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony V ( Goddess of the string ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony VI ( Survive ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony VII ( D.O.D's might ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony VIII ( Suspicions mount ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony IX ( An insurmountable wall ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony X ( Worthless existence ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XI ( Betrayal ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XII ( Hiyori x Roman ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XIII ( Hiyori x Roman II ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XIV ( Blood and gore ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XV ( Tactical retreat ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XVI ( Tactical retreat II ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XVII ( Urch's resolve ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XVIII ( Urch's resolve II ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XIX ( Eruption ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XX ( A big issue ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XXI ( Mercy killing ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XXII ( Monstrous awakening ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XXIII ( A bad joke ) 3 years ago
  204. 239
    Selection ceremony XXIV ( Dusik ) 3 years ago
  205. 240
    Selection ceremony XXV ( Yakob vs Dusik ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XXVI ( Next course of action ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XXVII ( The Eater ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XXVIII ( The Eater II ) 3 years ago
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    Selection ceremony XXVIV ( The Eater III ) 3 years ago
  210. 245
    Selection ceremony XXVV ( Conversations with a child ) 3 years ago
  211. 246
    Selection ceremony XXVVI ( A new... Recruit?? ) 3 years ago
  212. 247
    Selection ceremony XXVVII ( Crow ) 3 years ago
  213. 248
    Selection ceremony XXVVIII ( Showdown ) 3 years ago
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