GifflarGod

GifflarGod

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A Veteran Novel Reader, Perfectionist and The Bane of all Authors. I will call out every single grammar mistake, so beware.

2019-07-07 Bergabung Global
Lencana 15

Moments 5047
GifflarGod
GifflarGod
2 months ago
Replied to CaptainBoyHole

that's not cowardice

If Ivan were a noble, he would rather waste the slot than give it to a commoner. Why wait for a commoner to become a sorcerer, and their descendants to become new nobility, to then compete with them for territory and wealth?

Sorcerer: I want to be an Academic Prodigy

Sorcerer: I want to be an Academic Prodigy

Eastern · Toward a Piece of Writing

GifflarGod
GifflarGod
2 months ago
Commented

hmm he might not be actual child of that family but an orphan adopted.. that would explain why the father doesn't teach as it is only taught to the bloodline

While maintaining a regular rhythm with his sword steps, Ivan casually replied, "What do you think? Who would not learn the family's Breathing Method and instead come to the swordsmanship hall? What can I do if my family doesn't teach me?"

Sorcerer: I want to be an Academic Prodigy

Sorcerer: I want to be an Academic Prodigy

Eastern · Toward a Piece of Writing

GifflarGod
GifflarGod
2 months ago
Commented

lvl*

GifflarGod
GifflarGod
GifflarGod
GifflarGod
2 months ago
Commented

in this case he should be also emotional for the parents that died

Memories kept flowing, and at that moment, his identities from two lives began to slowly merge, gradually becoming indistinguishable.

Looting the life force of demons to forge a golden body Martial God

Looting the life force of demons to forge a golden body Martial God

Eastern · Add five parts of sugar and skins

GifflarGod
GifflarGod
2 months ago
Commented

maybe use "from the predecessor" (idk how to write that word" as the training wasn't from his past life

'That reflex just now must be the result of the hard training from my previous life...

Looting the life force of demons to forge a golden body Martial God

Looting the life force of demons to forge a golden body Martial God

Eastern · Add five parts of sugar and skins

GifflarGod
GifflarGod
2 months ago
Commented

why not just call it earth..

A united governance had to be formed on Blue Star, barely maintaining mutual surveillance.

Looting the life force of demons to forge a golden body Martial God

Looting the life force of demons to forge a golden body Martial God

Eastern · Add five parts of sugar and skins

GifflarGod
GifflarGod
2 months ago
Commented

olay i know it's a game world but this breaks the immersion while reading.. you could just say "they are dharma cultivators"

Both were low-level cultivators in the second and third level of Qi Refinement, and their occupation was Dharma Cultivation.

This Sword Cultivator is Somewhat Dependable

This Sword Cultivator is Somewhat Dependable

Games · Runaway BBQ Pork Bun

GifflarGod
GifflarGod
2 months ago
Commented

should be Realm