Alex Wayne arrives at Marvel

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NoobLad

not much to comment here, overall it's good. just probably need some work on the pacing of the story. some arrangements to the events would be great, don't focus on battle

LV 4

Dreamer_1297

too much forced plot, eg. he defeated kingpin who had help from hydra, hand and Skrull but he did not kill him even knowing how vile Fisk is. and he is continuously fighting where he can kill and finish it all together.

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Ashwatthama

super short, rushed plot, author is after more chp instead of content. writing is ok. but plot itself is trash. u can try if you have not read many novels in this genre or some good books like, hyperspace transmigration, otherwise this book will just eat your brain cells

LV 4

Im_Tired_Of_Living

I haven't read the fanfiction yet but with the mc being the wielder of imagine breaker the mc should not have any lucky encounters and if anything could go wrong it with because the mc has no luck. imagine breakers ability is to cancel out anything supernatural natural even including luck and maybe plot amor, also the mc wont be able to use magic . so the mc should be the unluckiest person in the whole fanfic. P.S also you cant get rid of imagine breaker it picks it wielder and sticks to then even if you cut off their arm it grows back. Does imagine breaker have the seven dragons sealed with in it?

LV 4

daoist_yang

I have a very serious question, why does MC not try to learn magic. His 1st power is 'imagine breaker', or whatever. it makes sense for him to search Kamar-taj. The most basic thing to do when you land in MCU is to check whether you can learn magic or not and even if not you will learn to tackle it.

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Underworld000

Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Had a great time reading it.

LV 4

MonkeReviewer

I just want the chapters to be complie because the chapters are too short but overall this is a pretty good read if you can complie the similar chapter then it would be even better.

LV 14

DetachedDreamer

good story..... nothing bad to say.... gotta really appreciate the update speed and stability.... can't complain when you get to read something new so often

LV 4

ShadowMonarch21

if you are a marvel fan who loves ff's then this is a must read for you. The mc has a good character, a family man of i must say. Even though this is a harem fic it is very well organised. In many harem ff' you forget if the particular girl was in the harem or not, but that is not the case here. personally i enjoyed reading this.

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SORCERERSUPREME_7

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Dorian_Marzec

this fanfict It IS Gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold

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adrian_jason11

I've never read any of the marvel comics before, but just from the movies I've watch, i can still follow along pretty easily. love that the author has pictures of just about every single character in the comments where they're first mentioned!

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SORCERERSUPREME_7

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ANANTA

To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it step by step Thanks- Reader!

LV 13

Microy4

30 chapters in and there is pretty much no story yet. Character hasnt been developed at all. Just randomly steals corporation research materials to give himself spidermans strength and senses with none of physical changes. First person he meets he immediately tells them all his powers and how he uses them. Tried to get into this but there is nothing here.

LV 4

darren123

Well worth a read its not talking but if you just want to be entertained for a bit it will do...............................................................................................

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ReaperE

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Alex_Hunt

One Of The Best Marvel Fan fiction Ever, It Is So Well Written, Although There Are Some Plot Holes But Overall Story Is Great. Thank You So Much For This Fan fiction!!!! 🥰😘😁

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Kufufufu

Good story tho the plot is slightly forced. I know this isn't your book but can u continue the book or try to end it?[img=update]