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"Satoshi he wanted to go to the convenience store to buy things but suddenly he transmigrated to teyvat, he got a system called "Infinite Infrastructure, Science technology and alchemist" the system gave him a mission to modernize the infrastructure of mondstadt and the economy of mondstadt, the system also gave a mission for Satoshi to build a new modern city near modstadt.

The system will also give rewards every time a mission is successfully executed, such as a reward that gives extraordinary abilities or magical treasure items.

I can always develop people's livelihood technology, right?

The first era of electronics and electricity began in mondstadt "

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My First Impression Review >It has a system. >Slice of life. >MC has a progressive mindset. >MC is not confident but willing to go through till the end. >Not afraid to admit that he has a system, but in the term of "New Magic." >Humble, but IMO too humble? to the point for just pleasing the crowd. >It's like fairytail but with technological progression. Instead power of friendship, its power of community. >The technological idea/innovation explanations are too simple. Make a plan—timeskip—machine done—testing—and it works. I dunno about this, but some people will like it and some are not. >Too focus in mondstadt, I mean, get it that it will be focus in mondstadt, but really? No reaction from other places? Reading this is like reading a fanfic fairytail but with technology. All in all, it's good. Not very good but also not very bad; it's pretty much slice of life vanilla to me; just needs improvement in order to make the fanfiction flavorful.

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this story is what you imagine a fantasy world to be like and I don't mean any magic, races or all kinds of things it's more like nothing has happened yet everything changes, The main character was given a cheat and everybody kinda like getting brainwashed to trust him, a complete stranger to make change on their land there is no development to make people trust him aside from fixing a road, he has no background to show his credibility and worse the others characters are not even 'alive', they more like exist to support mc the moment his feet step on monstard this story has potential and has an interesting concept but the way the author executes the plot and world building is kinda meh 3/5 for me tho