I became an NPC in The Great Tomb of Nazarick

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MarAuthor

Hope you like my Fan-Fic! please put down any ideas or suggestions here. I feel very happy with the way this is looking so far and I hope you will enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it!

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Hangzoed

This review is an early one made to support the author and his promising story. The story has real potential. I really liked the start of the story, i cant write a full review for the story because there is only 3 chapters. However, i can confidently say its one of the best Overlord fics starts ive ever read. The Mc race and morals are going to be really interesting to follow as he faces the diffrent "priorities" of nazarick Residents. Good job and Keep up the good work Mr.Author !!!!!!!!!!!

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B6_12nn3

Here's my honest review. Other than few spelling and grammatical mistakes writting quality and updates are decent. Personally I didn't like the creative freedom you took for creating the lore about angels and stuff. I don't know why you made mc and aura travel with ainz as an adventurer when you could have made him to spy on other countries. Also ainz losing against mc was very underwhelming the fact mc is supposed to be a librarian and made to be a meta build is stupid you know there would have been nothing wrong with mc losing to ainz but the other way around just made the whole thing just too awkward. Did you take inspiration for this fic from yellowness? Because that story has been suffering from stagnation. I wonder what end goals does the mc have as being with nazarick would just be boring and going against nazarick is simply impossible unless you completely mess up the story.

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Yahweh_0799

The story is good. There are usually no Angel main characters in Webnovel. If so, it's usually Harem. This is annoying too. This fanfiction is hidden gold. I wish success to the author.

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LightningGodWolf

Thank you for the great story so far. I’ve read a few Overlord Fanfics that were good but were always dropped. Yours, so far, has had the best start and I can only hope and beg that you don’t ever feel the need or want to drop this story. Please be the first to finish an Overlord Fanfic!

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MrPidgey

I'll rate it 5 star from the synopsis, I usually don't care about mistakes but if I see one I'll tell y'all

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Braian_Rodriguez

La serie está bien, no es lo mejor que puedas encontrar sobre overlord, pero tampoco lo peor, las habitaciones de escritura del autor pueden mejorar, pero a pesar de algunos errores e el guión, que causan ligeras inconsistencias, es una historia divertida para leer rápidamente cuando tienes tiempo libre, si tuviera que darle una puntuación, sería 6/10, con un poco de trabajo duro, está historia entrara en el top.

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That_Annoying_guy

The author was too vague about harem And he changes his mind about stuff in the novel instead of editing it out, But if you’re OK with reading a two person harem then I recommended, the novel was good

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Kuroki_Shishiro

This book is great 😃👍. Currently one of my favorites right now. Hope the author wont drop this. Would re-read and recommend 11/10.

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Mikmj

There are a few grammatical errors and inconsistencies but it's still a fun read

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Beast_eye

man its been a great journey readin this ff. thank you every readers who have entertained me with your......antiques.... thank you author for creating such a masterpiece and again thank you for creating this masterpiece thanks again...see you soon

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DaoistdjTie0

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German_Dezendorf

I think this fanfic is one of the best Overlord fanfics. It's not finished yet, so I want to ask the author to do something about the humanity of the main character... This dude is literally an angel, he was a human in the past, but despite that he tortures and kills men, women, children and even though he realizes it's wrong, he continues to do it and doesn't even hold back in his outbursts of brutality. I don't mind violence from MC, but hell, he's an angel..... Translated with DeepL.com (free version)

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Blue_Dragon_3038

I like this so take as much time as It takes because no one else makes a OVL one better

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WulfricTheodore

couldn't help myself hahahahahahahahahaha

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Sergio_Navarrete

Pretty good so far. Keep it up author!

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Habib_Isbahani

Good!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Madara_Otsutsuki_

this story is not for me. I don't like mc acting righteously with 0 karma and should just act neutral, just because he liked Nferia...

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KingPumpkin3

I really love this keep going you are doing a good job but in the future could you make the main character personality more dominant and more bold but I am not complaining and I am fine if he doesn’t good job

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Blue_Dragon_3038

It’s good but I will have to leave this until it gets more cheaper