Avatar: Lion Turtles Champion

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skulputulurubug

had to write a review... the names are messing with the immersion why are they using white people names? don't wanna be racist but avatar is China dominated, the whites are chinese, the blacks are chinese, everyone's Chinese but then you get OCs and name them Phil.. Greg ffs... could've named them Xiao Mai, Ching Chong, Yu Suk or names more common in avatar like lee fs

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Anna_Bananaz

I like the whole plot revolving around taming Azula. Please continue this fanfic author. kkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

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DaoisteHo6ya

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LV 14

read3r_9030

pretty good read, good grammar and and interesting plot. feels a little rush here and there it other than that and the fire can control lava BS. it's good hopes the author keeps updating

LV 2

Kono_phineas_da

DO NOT READ THIS FANFIC I’ve read many fanfics on this site as well as others a lot of them fall flat even some of the good ones can start to get bad then there are those that seem too good to be true at first I thought that was what this would be but I was mistaken it’s truly a work of art from world building to characters everything is well done so there’s the problem it’s too good it’s spoiled me and everytime I read another fanfic I can’t help but think of this one It’s just too addictive 😔 so I repeat DO NOT READ THIS FANFIC

LV 1

InternetSaint

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LV 4

OreoBox

I’m really enjoying this story. It is difficult to find any good avatar fanfics and I am happy to see that someone has made one that is actually pretty good. I’m surprised that there aren’t more reviews for this story. Keep up the good work author. Please don’t drop this story. It is good.

LV 6

TFH

Well.. its not bad, but.... The grammar is horrible, i read the first 10 chapters and now i have a headache. i regret reading this...............................

LV 4

Ariga_Shhh

the story is pretty good and I like how the MC's story begins before aang or didn't start with travelling with the Gaang. I like his relationship with Azula as well, very different from the other fanfics I've read before. keep up the good work! 😁😁😁

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Xayah_for_birds

I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. a very successful avatar fanfic azula <3. . . .

LV 3

spectra_phantom

This is my favorite avatar fanfic by far. The other avatar fanfics on this site have much better characters, they don't feel fake. I give 5/5 and I'm looking forward to the continuation of the series, your fanfiction is very good dear author

LV 13

Hello101010101

This story’s great I just wish the author would update

LV 4

jonas_colon

please don't drop this bro, my mental health depends on it. don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop

LV 4

A9B

very good. azula wifu #1 <3. love u author ................................................................................................

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PaQ24k_

I really like how he goes about his character and also like how I think its going to be azula love interest and azula is one of my favorite characters so super excited for for more chapters

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AStrAl_Soul

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AStrAl_Soul

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Just_ForFun

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