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Now for this chapter i really love it, curious to see what is happening with mc, i only hope you dont have second thoughts about charmcaster with this new plot, if you want you can make her mc's new sidekick and gwen's magic teacher but leave it there, BTW love the funny drama with Shego asking what happend to Kim. Personally i think Kim got her hearth broken since she surely saw the Episode where mc reveals he is dating an alternate version of ben, although she is though so she will go through this, specially with ron there. Actually next time you show her it will be a good oportunity to show the reaction of common people to jen.

Epic Chapter i have a lot of things to comment so i will be quick, First of all for the Reactions we want, i think i speak fr everyone when we i said that we would love to see the People's/Media Reaction to both Jen and Alistair, the tennyson's reaction is meh, what we really want is to see how the Public react to 1)paralel universes 2)a new User of the omnitrix 3)the fact their Home hero is dating this user from another dimension, not just to see the common people's thought but mainly in Jen's Universe, someone with a new OP Variant of Jen's omnitrix that comes from another universe is huge, not just to see the fans of jen and exes gets triggered by mc or seeing mc gets female fans in jen's universe but mainly what are the villains thoughts about this, what are they going to do with this info, once you present a omniverse villain to mc it would be good to see this. Of course the reaction of other omniverse characters, like the fem william harange, the alien empire, etc. you can simply start with showing some comments from the Internet and extranet and slowly introduce some characters and show us what they think, take it easy with those specific reactions.

BTW bro what are your thoughts about making a Danny phantom fic?? hear me out ibhad an idea of a SI MC that got reincarnated in a Genderbend DP universe and he got into male clone body of Danielle Fenton(female danny), basically making mc look like og danny phantom but with a diferent backstory, Danielle will be the single love interest of course and mc will use his knowledge to be at the top. I always thought about having a genderbend fic of this since i saw the art

Hmm fair enough

If its not ethical then my guess is that mc is either older or her brother, also never said harem, just love interest since i read the sinopsis, so can i ask who will be the 2 love interest? Or at least from what world they are?

thats true bro, i just have seen this o many times im halfway to drop this, but i guess you deserve the benefit of the doubt, meanwhile i think i will read your Owl House fanfic, not quite sure about the Scott pilgrim world (mainly because i dont like patel as a character), so one question, in your owl house fanfic, is mc going to end up with amity or Luz? maybe both? or the love interest will be another waifu from star vs the evil forces or anphibia, just wanted to know if possible

Honestly a shame since this arc was perfect, don't listen to the first comment, the problem is not dipper getting strong too soon, with mc's cheat its impossible for him to not be this strong so soon, and it will look like you made MC dumb on purpose to not make him OP so the FIC stayed ''Interesting''. Sighhh at the end authors always find a way to ruin a perfectly ok novel, Sure you needed more interaction with mabel and pacifica but the rest of the novel was perfect, mc getting so strong so soon made sense and at the end MC change gravity fall plot so much that now it looks like a ''rick and morty'' Sci Fi vibe plot that revolves only on MC. But now that one comment in the last chapter says '' he is sick of the current arc'' (which can be easily olved by making longer chaps and ending the arc in less chapters) you started doubting of yourelf and wanting to rewrite, well im sorry but if a few comments can mae you rewrite the novel then i dont see a point to read any of your fics with an author so undecisive.

Well sorry too but i dont see myself reading this fic in a few months at least, i have been here a lot of times and it always the same ''i reread the novel and it was bad i will rewrite'' then the authors either drop the rewrite and never get to the last chapter they upload before the rewrite or they do reach to that point but decide to rewrite once again, and then they stock in a cycle of rewriting until they drop, Mean while we are here stuck waiting for the rewrite to reach the last chap we were reading.

nice, love this slice of life part, keep the good work

Thx for the announcement xd

thx for the awesome chaps, love this side Stories, really help to show us how much impact mc has in the galaxy, keep the good work man :D

dont do it, its perfect :

Really love it, sure there was no alien smut but lets be honest it too soon to go into that, they haven't even explored their human bodies yet, also it's not like we didn't have time to reach that part, we are barely in ben 10 classic plot right now, there is a lot of plot just for Ben 10 multiverse much less adding some travels to other worlds later. Not worried about that, although kinda sad that Jen's mom already caught them off. But that aside really like how good is Mc's interaction with Jen's parents which make total sense, for her parents MC must be a Respectful, responsible and Smart young man, that also happens to be the only one that can Protect Jen and join her super hero life without any problem, Also they must know how MC is a good Influence for Jen, keeping her safe and motivating her to be better, MC is like Every Parents Dreamed Son-in-Law.

Although I love MC and Ainz interactions and relationship I don't like the fact you are ending the novel here, I was kinda expecting mc to continue to explore other realities and expand Nazarick to other anime worlds while getting slowly stronger, instead he got Stupidly OP so soon (although I understand its logical and possible due to the context of his cheats) and destroyed Yggdrasil, also he got so strong it will be hard to show MC exploring other worlds (although not impossible). It felt like if you were tired of the novel and wanted to move on to a new one, but you didn't want to drop it, so you kinda rushed the ending. Sure it's not bad because it's justified, and you will have a few chapters more to close things, but still this has a lot of wasted potential, anyway thx for the awesome chaps so far man, Loved it while it lasted

Ths exactly what im refering to, sure maybe mc cant resist casually todd's attack with haki and aura but mc's true strenght is magic and again mc has more fire power, not to mention mc could transmutate to kill todd. Mc's magic and skills in oarticular are simply too annoying for todd to ignore.

Also finally Todd arrives, honestly he is screwd while mc is not that strong physically, right now he has enough defense to take Todds worst hits and survive well, and mc's power fire is too much for Todd, anyway, keep the good work bro cant wait to see more :D

Thx for the chap bro, Absolutely love the idea of mc going this path, honestly it fits mc perfectly, with his class and system he can easily create all the potions without all the hassle people there had to do, not only that but thx he could not only level up his alchemy class but im sure that his potions will be perfect thx to his class, sure he probably won't get that much of a power up compared to the normal potions but im sure mc's potion will be perfect in the part where he won't have any secondary effects and will digest that potion smoothly. Also, this fits mc perfectly and once he reaches the 0 tier he will be an Eldritch God/Cosmic being.

nice a lot of progress in both LD's growth and mc's relationships, EDI has a body now and Grunt will soon join MC's team, nice, keep the good work bro, cant wait to see more

love it, cant wait to see why is mc fighting bills, BTW bro, can you make the SCP something like the Spider Society, or the council of ricks?? it would be basically the same concept of the SCP but in the multiverse with mc dominating and infiltrating realities to get resources, items, talents, etc.

You would be surprise by how many people do this