Task System of the Incubus

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Treyon_Daren

The only things that need working are, the grammar... DUDE pls use COMAS!. The second would be world background, try adding more explanations of the surroundings. MONSTER GIRL COLLECTION TITLE CARD IMAGES HERE!. CHECK OTHER RESPONSES: FIRST ONE!

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KingParadox

the only reason to be an incubus is his looks because because he doesn't use racial powers at all because he's a nice guy, so what's the use of being an incubus if he fights in a totally different way with his fists? It is in the title is your career and is not relevant to the plot? And according to his race it is affecting him to make it more violent but he spends his time being cupid joining couples everywhere God is a high incubus they are lustful as well but in that it does not affect his race and he is cupid everywhere he goes

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

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LoverOfGula

would've been good if he wasn't being a matchmaker for a character i dont care about, is he the god of kindness and love or something? mc only got like 2 monster girls yet you made him start in that world like hes gonna be pokehunting. wish he was actually an incubus, mc should change his race to cupids spawn😐

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ANIME_LOVE

I put 1 star. Gg does not use his incubus abilities. Acts like virgins. The author made gg an incubus to attract readers. Very disappointed with such stupidity.

LV 14

Emetaro

I totally recommend this story. I find it really entertaining and so far, the interactions between the characters in my opinion are spot on. The author has really captured the personalities of the characters from their anime worlds and I'm looking forward to the progression. So far the MC has these op skills, it would be nice to see him use them, I can understand the lemon 🍋 skills, they must be passive like his charm. I'm wondering if he has the capacity to target an enemy with them and sexually enduse them. If he can do this I think it should only be used on enemies as if uses on nice characters it might spoil it. But overall loving the work. Please keep it up.

LV 6

WoofWoof

grammar is bad english.. no punctuations, no separations. the sentence just keeps going whatever is convenient, whatever, heavy plot armor .

LV 4

Blank_Ninja

I hope the author reads this and knows that this is one of, if not the best fanfic I have read and really hope will start to get updated again.

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AlexVv_Gamer

I'm loving this fanfic. Unlike some people, it doesn't bother me that the MC reveals that he is a demon and is from another world. Why would it matter when the people of that world don't even pose a threat? My only problem, sometimes it even stresses me out, is that he uses a lot of "after all" in every paragraph. I'm not good at English, so I had to rely on the translator.

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Vail_

pretty good. I would like to see Demolus with zombie girl in monster masamune. keep up the great work author, your work is very entertaining. there are some text errors like weary(very) and such but it isn't a big deal so iits okay.

LV 12

ShiningProminence

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asaqapa

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LV 1

Diky_Maulana

I like this. Ceritanya bagus dan sangat menarik untuk di baca. Wkwkw, khususnya bagi yang halunya tinggi cocok buat baca fanfic ini . Saya akan tetap memberi bintang dan mendukung, semoga cepat update dan semakin bagus ceritanya

LV 2

SOMMO_ARCANO

the story is not bad just that the author keeps making time jumps every 5-10 chapters and ruins the whole story, the statistics are confusing (almost useless) and the system is omnipotent from so op skills that not even the mc knows how they work or because, even if he is an incubus he is like a normal person and nothing changes, the interactions with the characters are unclear and not very detailed or skipped, the author continues to skip important pieces of the plot and suddenly mc and the characters they get along well, it doesn't even seem to read a complete story but it seems to read only the beginning and the end, mc has an armor where he replaces mc of that world for no reason or because, even the characters of some characters are different from the canon, even some powers have changed for no reason, beautiful story but the author needs to work harder

LV 10

AndrewUchiha

Hmm desculpe se a avaliação não vai ser em inglês.. gostei muito desse livro, e recomendo muito! simplesmente por ser diferente de outros que já li. algo novo.... 5 estrelas em tudo pq sim haha.

LV 4

89Mouraai98

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LV 6

TFH

Monster Musume FF!?!?!?.... After reading it... dude, my friend, you deserve 5 stars. Its to bad that I couldn't score higher because crippling Shido deserves 10 stars.

LV 10

Cabelinho

I totally recommend this novel, you'll like it more, very good story, great plot, character of the protagonist and heroines is amazing, I liked it a lot because of the moster museme

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jeanpierregerardo

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Syazam_Daniel

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