D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad

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ProfessorofCulture

it's good, I hope it's Yuri and with a harem. just to fill space mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LV 14

AvidReader962

So far the story definitely shows potential, it has a fun premise, good writing quality, and an enjoyable main character. Not many chapters released yet, but the story definitely has me looking forward to new releases. I think it’s worth a try to see if it’s your cup of tea.

LV 15

keldarr_0280

Great plot. The author knows how to bring others into the story, has great descriptive ability, and is making the plot advance just right to keep readers interested. All in all I highly recommend this novel

LV 10

Terra_Parker

This story has a lot of potential but the dialogue is so poorly written that it's almost painful to read. A skilled editor cutting out about 30% of the words and tightening the phrases would bring it from a good idea to an enjoyable read.

LV 10

jordon

Honestly the most glaring problem with this story is the pacing, not gonna lie it has horrible pacing. Over a hundred chapters spent in a dream, 10s of chapters on pointless small talk that doesn’t drive the story forward at all… yeah that’s an issue.

LV 11

Arkturion

Overall nice but slow story. Unfortunately due to webnovels changes to acquisition of fastpasses/free chapters I can no longer follow this story. The price is simply not worth it.

LV 3

Willis8rock_S

Overall this Story is sImply amazing. I’m a major fan of non evil demons. Especially because the first demon lore wasn’t evil until christianity made it that way. if you ask me the way the greeks and the way you have it makes much more sense and it is a refreshing view of demons I Don’t see too often.

Go to Fiverr a hire a cheapest English spell checker FFS. It's just horrible. Sentences are a complete mess which too often are hard to figure out. Commas do not exist for author, at least in correct places, and that's besides much more serious problems.

LV 15

Hypnoticyuna

I personally love this story. The thing that pains me the most to say is that, despite being able to easily overlook the constant grammar mistakes, I can't overlook the pacing. It started out really nice, but as the story goes on it grows to be too slow. The world building is amazing and it gives plenty of personality to each world. Especially as she revisits them, however this is also my biggest quip with it. Each mission feels super drawn out and personally I enjoy the shenanigans from earth and the hub more. The punishment arc was probably the most captivating part of the story for me. The rest of the missions outside of the first few just made me want to skip them in their entirety. Overall it's great just wanted to say this first. Now, my favorite part of the book is Kat's personality and her interactions with those around her. As someone who feels the same with sexuality as Kat and is equally as dense, I love the representation and personally feel that you hit the nail on the head. My girlfriend and I have an eerily similar dynamic to Kat and Lily. While I would love to see everything develop just a bit faster I do see how the pace is perfect for a well written novel on that front and I am just impatient. The friendship between Kat and Sue is well written as well, it is clearly shown in daily life how the friends around you have an impact on what you're comfortable with. Sue for example making so many sexual jokes and Kat reciprocating them just shows how certain situations have an effect even on asexual people such as myself. There's more i would say but it's overall just an amazing book with plenty of ups and downs. It shows the characters feelings clearly and is an overall great read. Would definitely recommend if anyone is just looking for a good book.

LV 4

King_Sayda

Pretty chilled start without anything too big . I enjoy this laid back writting that's actually very good and witty. I'll stay for more chapters

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DefinitelyNot

Please review description, typos galore. Well, I hope they’re typos. Feel free to delete this review once those are fixed. 140 characters tm.

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Dragonia

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LV 3

Creyd1317

Really nice story, especially the premise and general idea. I like the multiple and regular mini arcs with the summonings and with her life on earth in the center. I'm also very curious about what the MC will further learn about her race and abilities. Slight problems are: (I'm still at around chapter 100 so it's definitely possible that these only apply early on, MINOR SPOILERS AHEAD) 1. Some minor grammar issues (especially there/their/they're switch up very frequently.) 2. Lacking seriousness and over the top comedy efforts. What I mean by that is the lack of serious attitudes. The most mild of those is the MC just taking her transformation with nothing much more than calm acceptance. More importantly though is the lack of response towards serious danger, pain and stakes. In several of her summons she faces serious risk of getting hurt or even dying. At one point she even takes injuries that would be crippling to any normal human. All this and MC just shrugs it off and treats it like any other day. No reaction whatsoever. The same applies to stuff that could potentially put several other people at risk and still there is no real genuine reaction even if it could cause people harm either physically or 'just' to their livelihood. To top that off, since this is a comedy, the seriousness of all these situations doesn't just get ignored they are even made fun of. Comdedy to me (at least in this type of novel) should never exceed certain boundaries and there is always a time to joke and a time not to. And in this one it's very often exceeding that boundary. 3. Often times unbelievable characters. This is mostly seen in the characters on earth. Besides the MC there is Gramps, Sylvie, Lily, Vivian and Callisto (also Chekov). Every single one of them is an extremely rare type of character, which seem impossible to exist in so close proximity. And without exception no one has any problem with MC being/transforming into a demon. Not a single shred of conflict because of it. And on top of that, it seems all of them have at least something special. I get that characters should be distinguishable but it just seems implausible/convenient that everyone MC meets is like that. Do note that despite the majority of that being critique it's still a very enjoyable read.

LV 2

SealDeity

It would be five stars if the story progression wasn't as slow as a literal slug. If you look over the writing errors (but seriously did the author even graduate like middle school English??) otherwise it is good. The only other problem is that Kat is like: 'Oh... I'm a demon now... cool?' Literally nobody would react like that...

LV 14

markio6a

This story reads like a catchy pop song that you are hearing for the first time. The author has created a wonderful story that has so much plot potential. As I am reading I am constantly trying to guess which way the story is going to go and am surprised again and again. This author has taken the time to properly fill in the story with descripted writing allowing the reader to be fully immersed into the story. I am further impressed with how well side characters are being develop without slowing down the plot. This story is by far one of the better works on this site and I look forward to reading more.

LV 13

Kat_Lex

Kat is my nickname and I just laughed when I saw that. I love supernatural stuff with slice of life. Lilly's habits are similar to mine and I just love that. I have a wierd way of seeing everything as cute as can be and I love Kat's sister because she is purely adorable.

LV 13

ShieldAlpha

I actually like this story. The worlds and settings are pretty fantastic as well as the lore development. There are quite a few things I like, However there are also a few things that rub me the wrong way. I feel the MC is a bit bland. She never really reacts to anything in a noteworthy manner even though her entire world is thrown for a loop. I mean, suddenly grow a tail? Yup, just roll with it. Find yourself in a sea of flame and then appear in front of someone without knowing why? Yup, just roll with it. It's too much of a "come way may" attitude where it begins to detract from her depth as a person. It also seems that the author may have a dislike of men in general. The only good male character is mainly only mentioned as reference as the person who ran the orphanage or one craftsman that's kind of cool. That's it. The rest are crass, fools, buffoons, etc.. Not that I care much because we all have our biases, but if this kind of thing sets you off then take note. Almost ALL the characters are female. For the good parts I think the overall character development and progress of the other characters is fairly nice. The story does go a bit slow on some parts but I think the author manages to balance the speed of combat with the slowness of everyday life fairly well. Sure, there would be a lot of things I would do differently in various situations but it's interesting to see the MC make the mistakes and have to work harder for them even though it doesn't really add to her depth of character. The supporting characters are pretty fantastic, although as a father of a 10y/o, Sylvie is WAY OP for her age. OVERALL its a good story if you can deal with some seemingly almost anti-male undertones. Since the story is good, it's not bad enough for me to really care.

LV 13

valor_full_one

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MorningWood_Dao

Punctuation ❗ Punctuation ❗ Punctuation ❗ Punctuation ❗ Highly good potential. tho there is 1 bad thing. everything but the writing style is good. sometimes it break the reading flow and makes it uncomfortable to read, especially when the system talks, it hurts my poor eyes. there's already a common unofficial standardized dialogue symbols. " for normal dialogue ' for monologue * for sound effects [] for system talking and other symbols. in literature writing, caps lock is usually used when shouting/expressing anger. you don't use caps lock on normal talks