One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]

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JunRaya

Dunno if I wrote a Review on this FF yet but ill do it now just in case. (This wont be a good review btw). Best thing to tell you guys is READ Synopsis, This FF Is unique in its way of using One piece. Don't expect Author dropping his Mc into canon or anything of that sorts.Instead everything is going to be developed, I mean the world and the characters so It might turn down a few people but if you want a good FF then Read It, I highly recommend it. Writing Quality is 5/5, Hard to find anything wrong on how author writes this FF. Story Development and World building is A very Big thing on this FF, instead of placing a MC in A Animie/Manga, the author builds upon The story and lore of One Piece. Also the author makes the world itself feel real with the characters and the world around it. Character development is Awesome and you can really see this bc of how well he developed his own characters instead of using Canon. Mc and those around him are well developed and we havent even met the original Mc's yet. The updates are great and im not complaining bc it isnt few and he isnt on Hiatus! So Overall Its a great FF if you are looking for a Good and well develop FF. (Just hoping it wont be dropped anytime soon)

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Tbone_Steak93

At like chapter 100 saw the author say in one of the chapter's that people had been calling thus mediocre so I'mma keep it 💯. This story is honestly comparable to Endless Path: infinite cosmos for me with the detail the pacing so I get that fanfiction is wish fulfillment but this story honestly makes me wanna recommend people that wanna get into fanfiction .Might put pressure on the author writing this review but calling story mediocre sorry but your entitled to your opinion as anyone is but Mark my words this fanfiction will be one of the top 10 of one piece fanfiction . Seriously it is a bit slow-paced but honestly if yall like a face paced op Mc that is ridiculously talented and barely struggles I'mma keep it real this ain't for you . So to wrap it 5 stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 from me.

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Caizhi568

I actually prefer adventures more than kingdom building but this story definitely deserves place in the top. I can feel the author's hard work in writing this, just the details in the story really hooks me like roaming pudge looking for victim. In the early chapter's, It would be hard to think of it as a fanfic because everything sounds original although it is derived from other stories. I'm at chapter 100+ and there's no sign of canon events which is commendable because the author has to think of his own scenarios and obstacles the mc has to face. It's really unique fanfic, most I've read has OP mc who achieves his goal without much problem and becomes godlike which is definitely entertaining but not realistic while this is slow story and the mc is not so strong but has lot of potential to be unlocked. The characters also acts like real person except for retards. This story definitely has lot of potential and it is a precious diamond, I'm glad I found it. Now all I can say is.....

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TheEnlightenedSage

Pfff, this is a solid beginning. This is what you call character development. You're really hyping me up for this story. This is a really unique approach to OP. Hope you don't suddenly go on a hiatus or drop this. As an author, I approve of the beginning of this story. Oh and if someone who is reading this, is looking for a better OP story, you can read mine called, One Piece: Finally Free. I'm sorry Morpheus, but I had to shout myself out really quickly. Hope you don't mind😁✌️

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Not_so_pun

really great fanfic. it was a little slowe at the beginning but this helped to build up MC so it's a plus in my book. also I found this art with all three love interests (let's pretend that girl on the right has white hair)

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FACE_IS_LAUGHING

What is the point of being fanfic? Why don't you make it an original one? If there is no character that we know of so what is the point? Reader tends to be excited when they know something about your fanfic if not, make your original story and don't based it to an anime just to be hyped.

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Milk_Strawberry

Honestly the story is too slow paced. The MC is a bit bland for my taste. I am a fan of dracula, heck even my main hero in MLBB is Alucard with the Dracula skin. It's just that it's missing something, something that would get readers hooked. I don't know the right words, but it's definitely missing something.

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Jajaiabakabaianaa

The beginning is a bit slow but well written in my opinion. I cannot say anything yet about the construction of the world or the development of story as it is still early but I hope it follows a logical and intelligent path. Grammar is good especially for webnovel fanfics. As for Vlad... I don't know what to say but I like it; However I have a question for the devil fruit, will it be one already seen or will it be "invented" by you?

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sword_demon

A truly great fanfic, Vol 1 will make you drop several times but if you remain patient and read it till the end, you can easily tell that its worth your time. And vol 2 is much better. This story is litle bit different from usual one piece fanfic where a person is born get power and set sail. No its little bit different with proper history of a character, then a litlle kingdom building. and its side characters are just perfect not shallow or robots like other fics. All I can say is its best one piece fanfiic and you should read it.

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Poison_Tester

Writing Quality- I haven't seen triggering mistakes or obvious ones. Stability of Updates- So far stable. (Chapters 1-17) Story Development- A bit slow so I gotta give you a 4. Other than that it seems very good. Character Design- Vlad The Impaler is not as brash as you make him. He would have not made that request about food. He would have realized the merchant is greedy and flattered him to get a easy job. and slowly rise up the ranks and kill the merchant. Other than that good job. World Background- One piece with one of the (previous) strongest vampire's. Overall I think this fan-fiction has a lot of potential and I hope you keep up the good work. So you get a 4.6

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WebReaderPub

Writing quality: there is no bad point here i haven't found any problem of grammar. story development: the story is intersting cause rather than being centered on the exploration like others fanfic or the original. it is a kingdom building where MC try to make the condition of his kingdom better. The first volume speak of him working in the mines as a slave, the second will be about MC and the kingdom and from what author said in the third MC will leave for the sea. character design: the MC is cruel with his enemy, but also kind hearted with innocent people and make friends with people. he is openminded and he is educated, no trash MC who start conflict from nothing just for nothing. Other character are also well explained and two of MC friend from th start will even have some chapters that explain how they are doing in the marine. You can find immages of them on discord. Updating stability: there is practicaly a chapter every day and sometimes bonus chapters too. The author is also very active on answering comments and om discord. world background: the world of one piece, but there is a lot of original parts in fact the whole starting kingdom is original, the story about it will be also original and intersting. it is about fight for power between noble and royal family. the part about MC two friend who join the marine is also intersting since they train with characters like smoker, hina, ina, isuka and draw. for the timeline MC is 6 years older than luffy. MC has neither cheats nor knoledge of one piece, but only memories of his past life and a power he gained by dying and he isn't op to the point of being able to do what he want from the start, but more like a genius who is learning and training to become stronger. for those who are curious of sofiya ( the original female target) she is beautifull and her character is very good. the story may appear slow, but it is very good and tough in the first volume he sometimes lost himself in dialogue he resolved this in the second volume. i higly recomend this fanfic wich is well done and cured.

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EisenCrown

Just perfect..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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kukulkhan

this is almost an original with One piece world settings.. fabulous writing quality. it's a gem 💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎

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Easy_Tiger

Wow, that was a intense opening. I'm not familiar with One Piece at all but that didn't affect my enjoyment of the content. Vlad the Impaler is indeed a fascinating character and you have captured his essence perfectly. Loved the opening as I was always a big fan of studying history and your knowledge of sword-fighting techniques and combat was clearly a highlight in the early action scenes. Eager to see what the reincarnated Vlad gets up to later in the story! Great stuff.

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haremphobic

I am the exp of my sword… Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood… I have created thousands of useless reviews… Unknown to authors, nor known to readers… Have withstood pain to create thousand of reviews… Yet these hands never type anything… SO I PRAY UNLIMITED EXP WORKS!

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Sage_of_Heaven

Hello author I really enjoy your story,but I have critique for this story. -The story is very slow pace. Usually this will not be a problem for me,but I have hard time getting through chapter due to how slow it is. -The Romance feel rush. I felt that there should have been more time developing the romance aspect. -Author you have a problem of over explaining the dialogue. This contribute to the story feeling slow and boring for me. Well that all my critique for this if you fix these issue. You will certainly create one of the best or the best One Piece Fanfic that I ever read. But you have to overcome challenges like the Fanfic This Bite. Well who know you might surpass that story someday and became my number one favorite one piece fanfic. Well that all have a wonderful day and good luck.👋👋👋👋

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KING_IN_YELLOW

the only thing i hate about this is the very slow paced story the other thing is great!, again the only thing that tick me off here is the bery very slow progress in story i am like 50 something chapter he is stil a slave for god sake, anyway that's all, if you can tolerate a very slow paced story this is for you if not then at least try a 10 or 20 chapter cuz this was a slow story oh well,

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DakzyAdv

Pentru un frate roman 5 stele chiar dacă nici nu am citit, dar sa faci despre țepeș in op esti cineva ......................................

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dukkeh

Unique fanfic where we get to see someone who actually doesn't know the plot of One Piece being sent there which is a huge plus, however it might a little bit too slow for some people taste... I mean one piece is kinda about exploring and going on adventures while Vlad is stuck in a kingdom on one of the 4 weaker seas dealing with some annoying nobles after almost 90 chapters of growing up.