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My biggest gripe with these fics is the use of modern words or slang. It's immersion breaking and its just cringe reading it.............. ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............
The start of the fic was great with how the MC getting back at those who see him weak. Love the revenge vibe. But I just hope that you would continued updating it since it's been months, almost half a year as it's getting good on the plot.
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Very cool job. A great idea for ff and a good implementation. Yes, there are small flaws in spelling and a couple of plot holes, but you don't pay attention to it. Yes, the main character is already too MC at the end, he is already in fact not in danger and in terms of the plot, unfortunately, everything comes down to came, saw, won. In general, I recommend
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Eu adoro essa história. Não tem 😔 muitas histórias do Baelon Targaryen Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmkkkkkkkjjjjjhhhhhhhgggggvhhhjibbnbvcfhhhjjhjjjbhjkkjjjjjjjjjjjjj
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Me encantó el fanfic, sin duda uno de los mejores de House of the Dragon!... La trama se desarrolla de forma rápida y fluida, la gramática es bastante buena, sin mencionar que el protagonista es un zorro astuto, no se puede pedir más!! Absolutamente lo recomiendo, simplemente léanlo!.
Estou impressionado lendo essa historia, a escrita está impecável, uma boa fanfic de house of the dragon que merece 5 estrelas, estou ansioso pelos próximos capítulos.
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Great story I really like the idea of a vampire mc and having him have dragon's blood kind of feels like Skyrim with the dragon born being a vampire. The story is very well written, really looking forward to reading more
An amazing and unique work overall. Writing quality is pretty good and I'm always eager to read the next chapters. My only problem is the length of these chapters but other than that this is a very nice work. Keep it up author 👍
Another GOT or Ice and Fire FF added to my collection this one has a great potential to grow more hoping for more chapters to ready author keep it up 👌😊👍
very good stuff also house of dragons also a Plus,also you said this is serious work u drop am gonna meme that. also author dishing put chapters left right and center .
Noice, just found this new fanfic by oink!! It's been amazing so far!! I just really hope there aren't as many crossovers like your last fanfic. God of Valyria started off amazing but the MC got OP too fast and the multiple crossovers made the story harder and harder to read. So far, this fanfic has the same amazing start as God of Valyria but none of its later issues!! I can't wait for more!!
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Very interesting concept. The grammar and writing quality are very good. The only potential issue that I see with the character is that he could get very strong very fast, and then it would not feel worth it. Maybe remove some of his powers or change them to suit his Valyrian heritage? Please implement challenges and obstacles for our MC to face that naturally flow with the story and further the plot. I just wish you would post longer chapters more frequently because this is a great story with great potential!
10/10 would recommend. The story telling is all there - dialogue, characters, pacing, etc. And does a good job at using the GoT world So it ticks all the boxes if you want another fic. All you have to decide is if you feel like exploring a character with Vampire vibes.
My biggest gripe with these fics is the use of modern words or slang. It's immersion breaking and its just cringe reading it.............. ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............
The start of the fic was great with how the MC getting back at those who see him weak. Love the revenge vibe. But I just hope that you would continued updating it since it's been months, almost half a year as it's getting good on the plot.
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Very cool job. A great idea for ff and a good implementation. Yes, there are small flaws in spelling and a couple of plot holes, but you don't pay attention to it. Yes, the main character is already too MC at the end, he is already in fact not in danger and in terms of the plot, unfortunately, everything comes down to came, saw, won. In general, I recommend
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Eu adoro essa história. Não tem 😔 muitas histórias do Baelon Targaryen Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmkkkkkkkjjjjjhhhhhhhgggggvhhhjibbnbvcfhhhjjhjjjbhjkkjjjjjjjjjjjjj
Reveal Spoiler Me encantó el fanfic, sin duda uno de los mejores de House of the Dragon!... La trama se desarrolla de forma rápida y fluida, la gramática es bastante buena, sin mencionar que el protagonista es un zorro astuto, no se puede pedir más!! Absolutamente lo recomiendo, simplemente léanlo!.
Estou impressionado lendo essa historia, a escrita está impecável, uma boa fanfic de house of the dragon que merece 5 estrelas, estou ansioso pelos próximos capítulos.
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Love it. ..................................................................................................................................
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
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Great story I really like the idea of a vampire mc and having him have dragon's blood kind of feels like Skyrim with the dragon born being a vampire. The story is very well written, really looking forward to reading more
An amazing and unique work overall. Writing quality is pretty good and I'm always eager to read the next chapters. My only problem is the length of these chapters but other than that this is a very nice work. Keep it up author 👍
Another GOT or Ice and Fire FF added to my collection this one has a great potential to grow more hoping for more chapters to ready author keep it up 👌😊👍
very good stuff also house of dragons also a Plus,also you said this is serious work u drop am gonna meme that. also author dishing put chapters left right and center .
Noice, just found this new fanfic by oink!! It's been amazing so far!! I just really hope there aren't as many crossovers like your last fanfic. God of Valyria started off amazing but the MC got OP too fast and the multiple crossovers made the story harder and harder to read. So far, this fanfic has the same amazing start as God of Valyria but none of its later issues!! I can't wait for more!!
Perfeito! More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Very interesting concept. The grammar and writing quality are very good. The only potential issue that I see with the character is that he could get very strong very fast, and then it would not feel worth it. Maybe remove some of his powers or change them to suit his Valyrian heritage? Please implement challenges and obstacles for our MC to face that naturally flow with the story and further the plot. I just wish you would post longer chapters more frequently because this is a great story with great potential!
10/10 would recommend. The story telling is all there - dialogue, characters, pacing, etc. And does a good job at using the GoT world So it ticks all the boxes if you want another fic. All you have to decide is if you feel like exploring a character with Vampire vibes.
it's a good story. So far, keep up the good