The chapter is what it is. Any edits after release will happen within 24 hours. After that, I see no reason to expend any more effort. After all, a lot of love went in to the process up to that point. To go back and painstakingly edit, after doing the painstaking labor BEFORE release, edits and reads and internalizing… it’s a bit much. I’d rather let it be. You’ll understand as a fellow author. You get so much hate and people that clown on your writing. At the same time, you get a bunch of love. Thus, what is the difference between the love and hate? The answer is nothing. Readers have their own opinion. You have your own opinion. Therefore, I don’t pay too much mind into being perfect. You offer good points. No doubt this story would perhaps benefit from your feedback. And no doubt the story will benefit from me ignoring you. All I can do is LOVE and APPRECIATE your thoughtful comment, and take it however I can. In the perfect world, I do so with intelligence and empathy and with the goal of self improvement. However, the chances of me doing that, is the same chance of a reader like yourself leaving such a thoughtful comment. But as a fellow author, I’m sure you already know how rare such comments are. Thx for reading
Maybe when this story is done and I move on to writing originals. A discord server is more likely at this point tho. Thx for all the support 🔥
Rhaenar kissed with rouge fervor.
Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)
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I meant to say rogue, but this French vine is cool also!
Rhaenar kissed with rouge fervor.
Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)
TV · ssyffix
Totally understandable We’re all on the journey. Best of luck out there my bro
Thx for reading ❤️
I understand your perception now. I’ll admit you seem to think you have things figured out. Good for you
He could berate me in the training yard all he wanted, but he knew his place outside of that.
Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)
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Dude was wrongfully imprisoned, killed the first step he took outside. Gets reincarnated after not wanting to come back, all because some happy go lucky voice in the darkness annoyed him to the point of doing so. Idk who you are to the the arbiter of correct behavior, but if we use a bit of humanity here, we might find room in our heart to give the man a pass LOL
He could berate me in the training yard all he wanted, but he knew his place outside of that.
Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)
TV · ssyffix
Yeah, Rhaenar’s early years weren’t the most well received. The idea was to make him super flawed so that there could be character development. However, I might have leaned too hard on the flaws, causing him to trigger readers with his childishness despite reincarnation, entitled/sad boi attitude, overly artistic vibes, and so on. It gets better, but I won’t blame you for any misgivings. I mainly vibe with geopolitics and lore. These early days were mere housekeeping
He could berate me in the training yard all he wanted, but he knew his place outside of that.
Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)
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This fic is in the TV section so it’s fair play
I know that Kingslanding does not have a Weirwood and that's something HOTD added in, but it may be kind of necessary, anyway Thoughts on this chapter?
House of The Dragon - Greenseer
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A 27 year old struggling artist dies and reborn as Rhaenyra's twin. ---- *** Skip to Volume Two: SUMMER if you want to read events from the start date of the TV show96 Chs 7.5k Collections
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ONE PIECE OFFLINE
When One Piece Online announced its shutdown, the gaming world was stunned. Enter Jack "Swiss" Swissanger, legendary for his PVP skills and eccentric personality, was among the elite invited to the game's final farewell. A madman who willingly gave up the powers of the Glint-Glint Fruit, Jack played nearly three days straight, reliving old times. But when the server blinked off and Jack dozed right there at his keyboard, he had no idea what was in store for him. The only clue was the last words he heard as closed his eyes... ["SET SAIL!"] Awakening in a different bed and a different body, Jack quickly suspects he has been transported to the world of One Piece! Embark on an epic adventure as Jack navigates the seas in search of answers. Can he survive in this world? Will he ever make it back to his previous one? And if he could, would he want to? Join as along the way we make friends, battle foes, and discover amazing places. You can only hope this wondrous world created by Eiichiro Oda might teach Jack a thing or two. Will the line between game and reality won't tragically blur? Each wave brings a new challenge! --- [ssyffix: Hello, author alert. Some users here on WebNovel might recognize this work from a year or two ago. To you I must give a disclaimer that this will be a rewrite, or remix, of the prior version. Names may be changed. Characters may be different. Events mished and mashed around. The curious reader might have fun with comparing the old version with the newer. The astute user of a search engine will be able to find the old one. There's 140k words of crack content to be had there that might give clues of where the story is going. I don't recommend it though. There's a reason for the rewrite, after all. Thanks for checking this out. All praise to Oda's talent and creativity. ]1 Chs 9 Collections
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Reborn as Jon Snow's Twin - (Game of Thrones)
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A 27 year old owner of a food truck dies and reincarnates as Jon Snow's twin. How will our burger flip extraordinaire fare in his new world? Let's find out! ——-36 Chs 6.5k Collections
We lit 🔥
Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)
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