Pokemon Battle System: I Reincarnated As A Charmander

LV 1

NightroPulse

The story is decent, but leans too much into the explanatory style, where every little thing needs an explanation behind it that it gets annoying. Even reminders to some degree from previous chapters. I mean, they CAN be summed down a bit. There's also a lack of character description, only mentioning clothes and gender. Naming sense is also poor, from regions (people names) to cities (animal or object) and even some people (gender confusing names). ____________________ Grammar is great, but there's an obvious use and over reliance of [Ai] on that front, with a lack of human proof-reading. Made obvious with the types of repeated mistakes. Such mistakes happen during pokemon relates topics, such as moves, types and evolution, as well as the MC phrasing stuff in a way where he is the trainer and not the pokemon. Such as mentioning Treecko or a Pikachu instead of himself when referring to his evolution. ____________________ It doesn't seem like the author reads comments to know this or they just couldn't be bothered to fix these mistakes. Looking at their profile and their 10 so called "original" fanfic novels, started 4 months ago or less with each already being at 50+ to 100+ chapters already, it's easy to see why their isn't much quality control and likely preferential treatment. I will say this however, it's one of the better AI made fanfics I've read so far.

LV 3

XERNOBOKA_OFFICIAL

I love the style of this fanfic, i wanted to see the mc Iv's and ev's so i can calculate how rare He is. I don't know if mutations exist in this novel/fanfic. Well I'm going to read the Author's history

LV 15

wolfphantom

It's an alright story just to much move and Pokémon explaining and not enough story for me.. also the introduction of working with a trainer ruined it for me..

LV 12

thesacredmenace

It's boring, it just feels like reading a Pokemon play-through rather than an actual story with a reincarnated MC. early in the story, humans get much more dialogue than the actual MC & Pokemon. I have gained no joy from this story

Скучно сюжет ужасный не чем не отличается от других пападанцев в мир пакимонов почитала где-то 20 глав дальше не смогла гг скучный и его спутница тоже скучнее

LV 14

Stephen_Minson_

Enjoying it so far… I hope author doesn’t drop.

Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent—your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare

LV 14

CDude

Awesome sauce :D [img=recommend]! Its cool to see an mc be a pokemon, and he is overpowered with balanced progression. Also his dynamic with his trainer is not annoying, and she herself is also not annoying.

LV 14

NeMsIS

a good story to read. will look forward for more chaps