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The story is actually normal, considering that it is a translation, and that is a great achievement, but in my opinion it would have been great if the translator had taken each of the stories and separated them and given them their deserved development. I think I am not the only one who thinks that the simulations are more interesting than the MC's own story, although this could be fixed if more time were given to the MC. For example, there could be chapters where the simulation is mentioned in passing and if the readers are interested, the simulations could be expanded in chapters dedicated exclusively to them. But that also has the limitation that it would take too much time and work to do that.
This might be my second best favorite Genshin fic. 11/10 would recommend.
i don't get why u gave him a western name when the m.c concocted the backstories that he is from liyue in the original and it actually made sense. like him being from liyue is significant in mutiple arc like the election arc and inazuma saga.
I like this fanfic so much that I will rate it 3 to catch your eyes(who read 5/5 comments?) Anyway, the translation is great, the story line is good and well planed. Each simulation fell like a small fanfic that give you a satisfaction when it end. My favorite is Rosalyn(La Signora)/Scaramouche, and the second favorite is Barbara's (The only 2 simulation that have satisfied ending so far (chapter 50)). I've said enough now it's time for you to start reading it.
I like it___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Empieza un poco raro, con algunas cosas demaciado forzadas, pero si ignoras los detalles menores, la historia es bastante divertida, la tercera simulación del mc es prácticamente una historia individual en si misma, bastante genial, en este punto, diría que si no tienes nada bueno para leer, prueba está historia, mi opinión real es un 6/10, superior al promedio, algo interesante para leer cuando no tienes algo mejor, no dudo que en capítulos superiores, la historia sea aún mejor, he incluso alcance un 7 u 8, buen trabajo al autor.
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If you read as far as it is translated it is not so bad but then it is quite bad, the problem is not the stories, well although there are some like Barbara's that are superfluous or have some weak points of the protagonist's power to give more drama, they are not so bad . The problem is what happens in the real world, it is very frustrating to see that the character is too idiotic as usually happens and even though everyone basically yells at him that it is not a simulation, the mc is still the only one who doesn't see anything of course, then There is the typical simulation in which he is ultra powerful again and again, but despite all that the MC's growth in strength is very slow, and he keeps making idiotic mistakes over and over again when he fights. Lastly, the system that forces you to make decisions and everything seems horrible to me, it is like the typical systems that threaten to kill you all the time.
Finally a translation for this book. I think I burned through my brain juice trying to read the MTL. thank you so much for your service to society
I was reading this mtl novel, i am surprised to see someone translating here, even my english is not good i can see that this work is amazing! i recommend trying reading a few more chapters if u guys disliked the first one
THE ROSTALM ARC HAS NO REASON TO GO THAT HARD Like, it feels as if it could be a whole ahh story on its own, being fr yall, i didnt expect such a thing from a random genshin fanfic that i was reading just to pass the time
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This fanfic is god. I wait more......... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... .........
A good translation, I must say, the story itself seems entertaining and even more so the simulation that the MC of the story now has. They have errors but if you don't see them you don't realize excellent work
good story, I hope it will be long and you won't abandon it halfway through. The character of MC is interesting due to the fact that he has not lost his morality yet. I'm waiting for the next simulations.
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This novel is quite op and has a good enough background for the mc and i m currently reading the doctor arc of mc and i m loving it so yeah you can read this and it is worth it
good one not much to say other than i wanted more .............................................................................................. so you better update fast cause i'm not patience
It's a very interesting story and a good translation. I wanna see more chapters. [img=update] [img=update]......,...................... ............ ..
Just finished reading this book, and I'm really enjoying it! The translation is pretty smooth with only a few tiny mistakes, but they don’t take away from the story at all. The characters are interesting and feel real, which makes their interactions fun. Pacing is good so far, especially with the 18 chapters out; it keeps you engaged without dragging. The simulations are the REAL highlight—they each have their own twist and are way more intriguing than the main reality (can't be sure in the future, however it currently is). Overall, I’d say this is a gold in a coal mine. Will recommend.
First off, the translation is great—there are some minor mistakes here and there, but they can easily be ignored. There's almost no poison, and if there is, it doesn't ruin the immersion; in fact, it feels like it belongs in the plot. The characters are somewhat fleshed out, each with their own aspects and personalities, which keeps them from feeling bland and enhances their interactions. As for pacing, I can say it’s balanced for now, though I can't comment on future chapters (17 are out as of this review). I believe it will maintain a good balance between the reality the MC is in and the simulations he’s experiencing. Regarding update stability, that's a point of concern. Unless I personally remind the translator (which I definitely won't do by spamming her on the Discord server or in her DMs), I might be left waiting for new chapters after weeks of no releases. However, I think she'll focus more on this one compared to Time Emperor from my conversation with Nia. In terms of plot, there isn’t much to go on regarding the reality the MC inhabits, but there are some intriguing elements, especially in the simulations. Each simulation has its own unique story and might even outshine the original reality. The current simulation the MC is in has been the best so far (read the story to find out—no spoilers here). Overall, with this review, albeit half-hearted by my standards for critiquing fanfics and novels, I can certainly say that I highly recommend this book. Take this review with a grain of salt; your experience may differ from my expectations. I suggest reading the first 10 chapters to see if you like it. If you do, be sure to tell Nia to release more chapters, or Kaito might leak the group chat.
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The story is actually normal, considering that it is a translation, and that is a great achievement, but in my opinion it would have been great if the translator had taken each of the stories and separated them and given them their deserved development. I think I am not the only one who thinks that the simulations are more interesting than the MC's own story, although this could be fixed if more time were given to the MC. For example, there could be chapters where the simulation is mentioned in passing and if the readers are interested, the simulations could be expanded in chapters dedicated exclusively to them. But that also has the limitation that it would take too much time and work to do that.
This might be my second best favorite Genshin fic. 11/10 would recommend.
i don't get why u gave him a western name when the m.c concocted the backstories that he is from liyue in the original and it actually made sense. like him being from liyue is significant in mutiple arc like the election arc and inazuma saga.
I like this fanfic so much that I will rate it 3 to catch your eyes(who read 5/5 comments?) Anyway, the translation is great, the story line is good and well planed. Each simulation fell like a small fanfic that give you a satisfaction when it end. My favorite is Rosalyn(La Signora)/Scaramouche, and the second favorite is Barbara's (The only 2 simulation that have satisfied ending so far (chapter 50)). I've said enough now it's time for you to start reading it.
I like it___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Empieza un poco raro, con algunas cosas demaciado forzadas, pero si ignoras los detalles menores, la historia es bastante divertida, la tercera simulación del mc es prácticamente una historia individual en si misma, bastante genial, en este punto, diría que si no tienes nada bueno para leer, prueba está historia, mi opinión real es un 6/10, superior al promedio, algo interesante para leer cuando no tienes algo mejor, no dudo que en capítulos superiores, la historia sea aún mejor, he incluso alcance un 7 u 8, buen trabajo al autor.
Хорошая и много обещающая работа буду ждать продолжения [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
If you read as far as it is translated it is not so bad but then it is quite bad, the problem is not the stories, well although there are some like Barbara's that are superfluous or have some weak points of the protagonist's power to give more drama, they are not so bad . The problem is what happens in the real world, it is very frustrating to see that the character is too idiotic as usually happens and even though everyone basically yells at him that it is not a simulation, the mc is still the only one who doesn't see anything of course, then There is the typical simulation in which he is ultra powerful again and again, but despite all that the MC's growth in strength is very slow, and he keeps making idiotic mistakes over and over again when he fights. Lastly, the system that forces you to make decisions and everything seems horrible to me, it is like the typical systems that threaten to kill you all the time.
Finally a translation for this book. I think I burned through my brain juice trying to read the MTL. thank you so much for your service to society
I was reading this mtl novel, i am surprised to see someone translating here, even my english is not good i can see that this work is amazing! i recommend trying reading a few more chapters if u guys disliked the first one
THE ROSTALM ARC HAS NO REASON TO GO THAT HARD Like, it feels as if it could be a whole ahh story on its own, being fr yall, i didnt expect such a thing from a random genshin fanfic that i was reading just to pass the time
Please link for original story👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😍👍🏻😍👍🏻😍👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
This fanfic is god. I wait more......... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... ......... ..... ......... .........
A good translation, I must say, the story itself seems entertaining and even more so the simulation that the MC of the story now has. They have errors but if you don't see them you don't realize excellent work
good story, I hope it will be long and you won't abandon it halfway through. The character of MC is interesting due to the fact that he has not lost his morality yet. I'm waiting for the next simulations.
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This novel is quite op and has a good enough background for the mc and i m currently reading the doctor arc of mc and i m loving it so yeah you can read this and it is worth it
good one not much to say other than i wanted more .............................................................................................. so you better update fast cause i'm not patience
It's a very interesting story and a good translation. I wanna see more chapters. [img=update] [img=update]......,...................... ............ ..
Just finished reading this book, and I'm really enjoying it! The translation is pretty smooth with only a few tiny mistakes, but they don’t take away from the story at all. The characters are interesting and feel real, which makes their interactions fun. Pacing is good so far, especially with the 18 chapters out; it keeps you engaged without dragging. The simulations are the REAL highlight—they each have their own twist and are way more intriguing than the main reality (can't be sure in the future, however it currently is). Overall, I’d say this is a gold in a coal mine. Will recommend.
First off, the translation is great—there are some minor mistakes here and there, but they can easily be ignored. There's almost no poison, and if there is, it doesn't ruin the immersion; in fact, it feels like it belongs in the plot. The characters are somewhat fleshed out, each with their own aspects and personalities, which keeps them from feeling bland and enhances their interactions. As for pacing, I can say it’s balanced for now, though I can't comment on future chapters (17 are out as of this review). I believe it will maintain a good balance between the reality the MC is in and the simulations he’s experiencing. Regarding update stability, that's a point of concern. Unless I personally remind the translator (which I definitely won't do by spamming her on the Discord server or in her DMs), I might be left waiting for new chapters after weeks of no releases. However, I think she'll focus more on this one compared to Time Emperor from my conversation with Nia. In terms of plot, there isn’t much to go on regarding the reality the MC inhabits, but there are some intriguing elements, especially in the simulations. Each simulation has its own unique story and might even outshine the original reality. The current simulation the MC is in has been the best so far (read the story to find out—no spoilers here). Overall, with this review, albeit half-hearted by my standards for critiquing fanfics and novels, I can certainly say that I highly recommend this book. Take this review with a grain of salt; your experience may differ from my expectations. I suggest reading the first 10 chapters to see if you like it. If you do, be sure to tell Nia to release more chapters, or Kaito might leak the group chat.
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