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Umm.....it's started off good but it felt very rushed in the end ...I feel the MC could have been more ambitious as he had potential it could have helped in his character development more .....being OP from beginning kinda made story monotonous with the MC killing everyone he disliked...
It was nice. Edward could have been dealt with more, his madness should have happened later, especially after he tried to convince Bella. Bella had another lover, Sam, who wasn't mentioned much in the story. It would have been much better if Sam fell in love with Damon's child, took it too far and brought about his own death.
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I enjoyed a few chapters but then it just went so downhill. It's disappointing honestly.
Decent book.. a bit anti climactic and more so rushed, especially at the ending.. nevertheless, a decent book and a decent read.. plot progression was stable.. Decent book
At the very beginning, I already had a call when he just wants to be a 16-year-old guy and that's it! Well, this is nonsense. You are either born and get used to your body, or then you will stick it all your life without understanding)))) Not really, why didn't he choose the old time? he could have prepared a lot in this world , and in general he does not have any ambitions . Why is he there ? He's like a degenerate!
it was a good book.it was mediocre at Best, but it was good.it's a good way to waste your time, and honestly, its cliche and simplicity were refreshing ✨️ soooyhI love it. ❤️ Great work, author
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i give this an average score. this is not a story i would usually read. it was entertaining, but probably not a book/fanfiction i would read a second time. the writing had many flaws, and many words missing in the sentences. the story was very cringe to be honest and it was going at a very fast pace, and don't have alot of depth.but it was still entertaining too say the least 3 stars.
The Mc doing unnecessary decisionss, like almost killing Edward for telling Bella what he is.
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The story overall is worthwhile reading. It does have it downs but still a decent read.Grammatically it is high above normal Webnovel standards but the sentence structure could use a little improvement.The story is pretty straightforward, die-get wishes-meet mate-trouble comes-deal with it easily-happily ever after. Predictable but still somewhat enjoyable.The characters feel a little empty, especially the OC's. Could've stretched the story a little bit and fleshed out some of the wolf pack characters and perhaps have more interactions with the shapeshifters. The MC does have the full wolf form after all. Gave one of the enemies a full chapter background only to have him killed pretty much instantly.The world is Twilight. Not much there to explain, but the travelling is done bad. At one point it the story the MC and his friend apparently travel from Forks, WA to the Volturi headquarters by running in a couple hours. That means they traveled across the US, the Atlantic ocean and half of Europe by running. So either the writer didn't do his homework or just made a mistake I don't know, but it did make the story feel sloppy.
started off good. i have no problem with and OP MC. But the meeting with Rosalie felt forced and totally unrealistic. Then when then did meet it was a whimper not a bang that started thier relationship. no passion or feeling. just hey we got a bond and shes like okay well be together forever. no passion no feeling no meet cute. nothing. then you surround the most robotic couple in the world with nothing but giant A hole robots in the form of the cullens. they are all one note you rarely ever mention whose talking so. it takes a while to even realize that edward has a sister or that Emmett is even there. not only that but she isnt even freaking out when hes crippled. then you brutalized a character for seemingly small slights that make little sense and have no real outward effect on the MC i mean at that point just kill him and be done with it. my opinion this is the author wanting to rip the story of twilight apart and NOT tell his own story with twilight as the background. if you didnt like any of the characters but a few how bout just DONT do a twilight fanfic.
Read this if you want to watch an MC that wants to be free get progressively brainwashed by a mate bond.
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Desarrollo cliche y super predecible, gramatica orrenda, personajes para nada desarrollados. El mc plantea querer libertad y estar solo y termina en lios con lo que se intenta como "el interes amoroso" el cual para mi gusto su relacion fue superforsosa
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I'm here just reading 1 -3 stars people's review and i'm having Fun Af... so i gave 5 stars for those ppeople making me wheeze like a madman. Lol
A good story to pass time. The plot is simple and enjoyable with a touch of slice of life and bloody battles and good side characters that give us the readers good laughs. I strongly recommend it for anyone who likes the twilight verse.
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pas mal du tout, j'attends la prochaine histoire, j'ai confiance que ca soi encore mieux. allez go c'est maintenant s'il vous plait. et merci pôur cette histoire
i love it at first I thought it was going to be boring cuz he's so strong from the start but there is a really good story and the characters are really good
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Umm.....it's started off good but it felt very rushed in the end ...I feel the MC could have been more ambitious as he had potential it could have helped in his character development more .....being OP from beginning kinda made story monotonous with the MC killing everyone he disliked...
It was nice. Edward could have been dealt with more, his madness should have happened later, especially after he tried to convince Bella. Bella had another lover, Sam, who wasn't mentioned much in the story. It would have been much better if Sam fell in love with Damon's child, took it too far and brought about his own death.
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I enjoyed a few chapters but then it just went so downhill. It's disappointing honestly.
Decent book.. a bit anti climactic and more so rushed, especially at the ending.. nevertheless, a decent book and a decent read.. plot progression was stable.. Decent book
At the very beginning, I already had a call when he just wants to be a 16-year-old guy and that's it! Well, this is nonsense. You are either born and get used to your body, or then you will stick it all your life without understanding)))) Not really, why didn't he choose the old time? he could have prepared a lot in this world , and in general he does not have any ambitions . Why is he there ? He's like a degenerate!
it was a good book.it was mediocre at Best, but it was good.it's a good way to waste your time, and honestly, its cliche and simplicity were refreshing ✨️ soooyhI love it. ❤️ Great work, author
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i give this an average score. this is not a story i would usually read. it was entertaining, but probably not a book/fanfiction i would read a second time. the writing had many flaws, and many words missing in the sentences. the story was very cringe to be honest and it was going at a very fast pace, and don't have alot of depth.but it was still entertaining too say the least 3 stars.
The Mc doing unnecessary decisionss, like almost killing Edward for telling Bella what he is.
Reveal Spoiler The story overall is worthwhile reading. It does have it downs but still a decent read.Grammatically it is high above normal Webnovel standards but the sentence structure could use a little improvement.The story is pretty straightforward, die-get wishes-meet mate-trouble comes-deal with it easily-happily ever after. Predictable but still somewhat enjoyable.The characters feel a little empty, especially the OC's. Could've stretched the story a little bit and fleshed out some of the wolf pack characters and perhaps have more interactions with the shapeshifters. The MC does have the full wolf form after all. Gave one of the enemies a full chapter background only to have him killed pretty much instantly.The world is Twilight. Not much there to explain, but the travelling is done bad. At one point it the story the MC and his friend apparently travel from Forks, WA to the Volturi headquarters by running in a couple hours. That means they traveled across the US, the Atlantic ocean and half of Europe by running. So either the writer didn't do his homework or just made a mistake I don't know, but it did make the story feel sloppy.
started off good. i have no problem with and OP MC. But the meeting with Rosalie felt forced and totally unrealistic. Then when then did meet it was a whimper not a bang that started thier relationship. no passion or feeling. just hey we got a bond and shes like okay well be together forever. no passion no feeling no meet cute. nothing. then you surround the most robotic couple in the world with nothing but giant A hole robots in the form of the cullens. they are all one note you rarely ever mention whose talking so. it takes a while to even realize that edward has a sister or that Emmett is even there. not only that but she isnt even freaking out when hes crippled. then you brutalized a character for seemingly small slights that make little sense and have no real outward effect on the MC i mean at that point just kill him and be done with it. my opinion this is the author wanting to rip the story of twilight apart and NOT tell his own story with twilight as the background. if you didnt like any of the characters but a few how bout just DONT do a twilight fanfic.
Read this if you want to watch an MC that wants to be free get progressively brainwashed by a mate bond.
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Desarrollo cliche y super predecible, gramatica orrenda, personajes para nada desarrollados. El mc plantea querer libertad y estar solo y termina en lios con lo que se intenta como "el interes amoroso" el cual para mi gusto su relacion fue superforsosa
Reveal Spoiler I'm here just reading 1 -3 stars people's review and i'm having Fun Af... so i gave 5 stars for those ppeople making me wheeze like a madman. Lol
A good story to pass time. The plot is simple and enjoyable with a touch of slice of life and bloody battles and good side characters that give us the readers good laughs. I strongly recommend it for anyone who likes the twilight verse.
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pas mal du tout, j'attends la prochaine histoire, j'ai confiance que ca soi encore mieux. allez go c'est maintenant s'il vous plait. et merci pôur cette histoire
i love it at first I thought it was going to be boring cuz he's so strong from the start but there is a really good story and the characters are really good
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Não tenho nada a dizer... Para mim do futuro, desista...