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Quite surprising turn of events with MC becoming a powerful werewolf to getting Rosalie Hale being his mate to creating his own pack and forming a alliance with The Quilete Tribe reading this book and all of the things that have happened especially to The Cullen Family is quite surprising and even more so intriguing way u did this book along with the different characters do love the personality and jokes of Ocean look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
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it was quite short but a beloved read of mine in a long while I did like what the author did that changed the story from just a basic copy and paste kind of thing basically making it their own anyway might a well check it out. Imma miss this one I think.
My favorite book on this app 🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾😐🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾😐😐😐😐🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾
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Usually I don't read twilight ff since I've left the fandom long time ago, but I see this in my recommendation so I decided to try and boii I'm not disappointed, this story is fast paced and I love it, at the beginning it's a little weird for me but it's only for the first two chapters, after that I can't stop reading I like Damon personality so much, and how he interacted with his pack, such a beautiful bond they have, I would say more but I'm not good with words
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J'ai déjà écrit une critique dessus mais comme c'est toujours aussi merdique je remets la note qu'il mérite 🤩😗🙂☺😂😗😂☺😂[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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character is garbage, absolutely unlikable unnecessarily detailed af and the details are useless i cant go a single second reading without cringing if i could given negative stars i would i understand that a fanfiction is supposed to be like a dream like or scenario for the author to share to others but at least try to make it good
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Reveal Spoiler Une fic merdique comme tant 'autre sur le thème de twilight Franchement un vampire paradis d'origine aurait sûrement eu des enfants vampire parfait et pq elle est pas curieuse des sorciere qu'il évoque C un menteur et un chien le mc on le vois au début de l'histoire Il déteste les cullens il y a aucune raison ,il le dit lui-même
I've seen a lot of people commenting about how "forced" the romance is and to that I say... Try reading any other twilight fic, they are literally just as forced if not even more, and while there are quite a few spelling mistakes and relatively lazy moments "like 'u' instead of 'you'." but overall it's really not bad.
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bro you made twilight so good I love it hoping to see more a good detailed background nice character development complex yet straight storyline
Trying to balance the spam reviews. This is not a good story anyway,........ nope cringe. so much cringe. .
I think the author wanted to give the story some spice a plot twist to entertain the readers and failed miserably He is hostile against the cullens for petty reasons like them favoring edward another (it's nunya business why do you care?) The forced romance and bonding, bonding. And even more bonding This is a hot piece of garbage that you can read if you are bored to death
well...I am reviewing this story reading it to the latest chapter.... the initial start was a bit bumppy....and the authour didn't get stuck at the mc getting used to his powers like most author do till the 100th chapter....he skipped in the time skip, and I do think it was a good choice..but the seems that the MC is sometimes is unaware of all the powers of the werewolf or in this chase the original werewolf.... the story build is consistent...there is no sudden flux in the character design apart of the initial 3 chapter... over all the story is good and has potential to be completed....ofcourse considering the author doesn't drop it midway.... there are alot of plus points that have not been mentioned in the review....for those please give this book a read😅😜
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I had to say that this story is... Strangely...good... It would be better if some correction could be made and some holes closed...but Strangely fit with the rest. At the start, the grammar was horrible but became better with the story... so a bad start with a not really but strangely good end. Some part are funny and enjoyable...other let you scream for the cringe. Well all things put together...thanks for the story and be better with the other ones!
Quite surprising turn of events with MC becoming a powerful werewolf to getting Rosalie Hale being his mate to creating his own pack and forming a alliance with The Quilete Tribe reading this book and all of the things that have happened especially to The Cullen Family is quite surprising and even more so intriguing way u did this book along with the different characters do love the personality and jokes of Ocean look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
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it was quite short but a beloved read of mine in a long while I did like what the author did that changed the story from just a basic copy and paste kind of thing basically making it their own anyway might a well check it out. Imma miss this one I think.
My favorite book on this app 🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾😐🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾😐😐😐😐🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾
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Usually I don't read twilight ff since I've left the fandom long time ago, but I see this in my recommendation so I decided to try and boii I'm not disappointed, this story is fast paced and I love it, at the beginning it's a little weird for me but it's only for the first two chapters, after that I can't stop reading I like Damon personality so much, and how he interacted with his pack, such a beautiful bond they have, I would say more but I'm not good with words
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J'ai déjà écrit une critique dessus mais comme c'est toujours aussi merdique je remets la note qu'il mérite 🤩😗🙂☺😂😗😂☺😂[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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character is garbage, absolutely unlikable unnecessarily detailed af and the details are useless i cant go a single second reading without cringing if i could given negative stars i would i understand that a fanfiction is supposed to be like a dream like or scenario for the author to share to others but at least try to make it good
..................................m.... m.. m. m... .......m.... m. m..... ....m..... h...... . h.. j.. .. ......... ............on.........
Reveal Spoiler Une fic merdique comme tant 'autre sur le thème de twilight Franchement un vampire paradis d'origine aurait sûrement eu des enfants vampire parfait et pq elle est pas curieuse des sorciere qu'il évoque C un menteur et un chien le mc on le vois au début de l'histoire Il déteste les cullens il y a aucune raison ,il le dit lui-même
I've seen a lot of people commenting about how "forced" the romance is and to that I say... Try reading any other twilight fic, they are literally just as forced if not even more, and while there are quite a few spelling mistakes and relatively lazy moments "like 'u' instead of 'you'." but overall it's really not bad.
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bro you made twilight so good I love it hoping to see more a good detailed background nice character development complex yet straight storyline
Trying to balance the spam reviews. This is not a good story anyway,........ nope cringe. so much cringe. .
I think the author wanted to give the story some spice a plot twist to entertain the readers and failed miserably He is hostile against the cullens for petty reasons like them favoring edward another (it's nunya business why do you care?) The forced romance and bonding, bonding. And even more bonding This is a hot piece of garbage that you can read if you are bored to death
well...I am reviewing this story reading it to the latest chapter.... the initial start was a bit bumppy....and the authour didn't get stuck at the mc getting used to his powers like most author do till the 100th chapter....he skipped in the time skip, and I do think it was a good choice..but the seems that the MC is sometimes is unaware of all the powers of the werewolf or in this chase the original werewolf.... the story build is consistent...there is no sudden flux in the character design apart of the initial 3 chapter... over all the story is good and has potential to be completed....ofcourse considering the author doesn't drop it midway.... there are alot of plus points that have not been mentioned in the review....for those please give this book a read😅😜
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God gives me wishes story... only 10x more cringe. ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ......
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I had to say that this story is... Strangely...good... It would be better if some correction could be made and some holes closed...but Strangely fit with the rest. At the start, the grammar was horrible but became better with the story... so a bad start with a not really but strangely good end. Some part are funny and enjoyable...other let you scream for the cringe. Well all things put together...thanks for the story and be better with the other ones!