Ravven2769

Ravven2769

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Ravven2769
Ravven2769
5 days ago
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I feel kinda bad but at the same time, was she meant to wait 2 years for someone she didn’t even know for two weeks? They weren’t even technically together and all they did was kiss like once. Her kissing him after he returned after she got aethered was actually weirder imo

Jane gave him a tired look. "You were gone for two years, Thor. Two years with no news, no explanation. What was I supposed to do?"

The Guardian chosen by the Moon

The Guardian chosen by the Moon

Movies · Josden

Ravven2769
Ravven2769
6 days ago
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There wasnt even an explanation as to the world she was now in, her age. the surprise of being Daphne now. It was instant. The MC has no character at all and whoever wrote this should be banned from writing ever again

Ravven2769
Ravven2769
6 days ago
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Poorly written MTL with absolutely nothing going for it. 'Courting Death.' Chapters are crazy short and one conversation dragged out over the first like 7 chapters.

Ravven2769
Ravven2769
7 days ago
Commented

This makes no sense No one would let their daughters stay at Hogwarts then if they got sorted there It also makes arranged and political marriages impossible Half assed ‘slytherins are evil’ plot

Hope could hear a deeply disturbed sigh from an expressionless voice that reminded her of the Greengrass'. 'My House needs a lot of help, there's no denying that. The older years break into the younger years rooms and terrorise them by dismantling their wards and throwing spells at them. If the wards aren't strong enough from 3rd year or higher, the children are usually raped, although the girls receive this… abuse more than the boys but both genders are put through this trauma.'

A Hope through time/ Hope Mikaelson in hp and teen wolf

A Hope through time/ Hope Mikaelson in hp and teen wolf

Movies · creambunn

Ravven2769
Ravven2769
20 days ago
Commented

As if you wouldnt call him Wade

Arthur looked down at him, satisfaction flickering in his expression. "From now on, you are Blade." 

Shadow Monarch in DC

Shadow Monarch in DC

Anime & Comics · FrenzyAren

Ravven2769
Ravven2769
20 days ago
Replied to DaoistZofHeaven

And presumably the Japanese at Mahoutokoro

Wizards in the Harry Potter world are overly reliant on their wands.

Hogwarts' White Lord

Hogwarts' White Lord

Book&Literature · HornyFBI

Ravven2769
Ravven2769
20 days ago
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"Congratulations! You my dear fellow are now deceased, dead as a door nail, pushin up daisies, you kicked the bucket, so on and so forth but you get my drift." said a being who was humanoid in shape but seemed to be composed of space and stars swirling in a vortex

HP: The Gacha Archmage

HP: The Gacha Archmage

Book&Literature · ShadowRose13

Ravven2769
Ravven2769
22 days ago
Commented

A greatsword only weighs like 2-3 kg, so it's really not that heavy

Arthur took cautious steps forward, his greatsword resting heavily on his shoulder. The eerie silence of the distorted city weighed on him like a physical force. His eyes scanned the surroundings, sharp and unyielding, but there was nothing to hint at immediate danger—just the unsettling stillness and flickering lights. 

Shadow Monarch in DC

Shadow Monarch in DC

Anime & Comics · FrenzyAren

Ravven2769
Ravven2769
28 days ago
Commented

He didnt learn it because Snape didnt teach him anything. Shouting 'Clear your mind,' while ripping his mind apart and humiliating him (from someone he doesnt trust and despises, no less) is not teaching

In the original story, the impulsive Harry was unable to master this spell even by his fifth year for this reason. Even though Soren's mental maturity was far beyond Harry's, he did not believe he could fully master this skill at the age of 11; at most, he could grasp only the basics, which would be better than nothing.

Harry Potter: The Rise Of Malfoy

Harry Potter: The Rise Of Malfoy

Book&Literature · Theuntamed

Ravven2769
Ravven2769
28 days ago
Commented

Well that's obviously not true. Hermione has a vinewood and dragon heartstring wand and she doesnt seem to stop showing off and is incapable of shutting her mouth

"It is well-known that Thestrals are considered a symbol of bad luck." Ollivander fixed his milky-white pupils on Soren. "This is a very strange material; only wizards who can master death can control it. Moreover, vine wood wands are quite rare, and I can't help but notice that their owners are always those ambitious wizards who do not wish to flaunt their talents."

Harry Potter: The Rise Of Malfoy

Harry Potter: The Rise Of Malfoy

Book&Literature · Theuntamed

  • Born of a Star (HP FanFic) original

    Born of a Star (HP FanFic)

    Movies ACTION ROMANCE REINCARNATION R18 MAGIC HAREM HARRYPOTTER

    INDEFINITE HIATUS If you would like advanced chapters or just want to support me, come here patreon.com/Ravven. A fanfic reader ends up in the Harry Potter world...but is it the one he remembers? Studying magic and having new experiences, how will Rigel face his future? I've tried to be fairly accurate to the canon but I may add or change things whenever I need to. If this is similar to any other fanfics out there I do apologise, but I haven't come across any like it so far.

    20 Chs 1.7k Collections

  • Legacy Incubus original

    Legacy Incubus

    TV ACTION R18 MAGIC HAREM SUPERPOWERS OVERPOWERED

    4.53

    INDEFINITE HIATUS For advanced chapters of my stories come check me out on Patreon. patreon.com/Ravven Dominic was always alone, isolated even, but after a terrifying incident at his youth group, he was sent to Salvatore Boarding School for the Young and Gifted. Arriving at the same time as Landon and Raphael, can Damian overcome his trauma, and his isolation? The cover and Legacies are not my own

    19 Chs 1.2k Collections

  • Monstrous Hero original

    Monstrous Hero

    Movies ACTION ROMANCE REINCARNATION R18 DARK SUPERPOWERS

    INDEFINITE HIATUS While watching anime, Nathan Cross is pulled into the world of the MCU, with powers derived from Tokyo ghoul. Coming to grips with his hunger was bad before, but now...it's monstrous. Can Nathan survive in a world of mutants, heroes, and gods, or has he bitten off more than he can chew. Crossover MCUx Some aspects of Mutants Patreon- patreon.com/Ravven for more content and advanced chapters. Sorry guys but I need money too

    33 Chs 626 Collections

  • Gifted with Destruction original

    Gifted with Destruction

    TV ACTION R18 SUPERPOWERS MARVEL SUPERNATURAL

    4.59

    INDEFINITE HIATUS A casual viewer of the Marvel franchise, our MC finds himself in the place of Andrew (Andy) Strucker, of The Gifted, a mutant with great power. Can Andy control his power and his fate, as he faces schemes, Sentinel Services & his arrogant family? Patreon- patreon.com/Ravven for more content and advanced chapters. Sorry guys but I need money too

    26 Chs 2.3k Collections

  • Monstrous Hero (Fan-fic with same name will be my future upload source original

    Monstrous Hero (Fan-fic with same name will be my future upload source

    Action ACTION REINCARNATION R18 SUPERPOWERS MARVEL SUPERNATURAL ECCHI

    Re-uploaded to the Fanfiction side of the website. Sorry for the inconvenience. While watching anime, Nathan Cross is pulled into the world of the MCU, with powers derived from Tokyo ghoul. Coming to grips with his hunger was bad before, but now...it's monstrous. Can Nathan survive in a world of mutants, heroes, and gods, or has he bitten off more than he can chew. Crossover MCUx Some aspects of Mutants Patreon- patreon.com/Ravven for more content and advanced chapters. Sorry guys but I need money too

    31 Chs 286 Collections

  • All Consuming Beast System original

    All Consuming Beast System

    Fantasy ACTION WEAKTOSTRONG TRANSMIGRATION VILLAIN SURVIVAL CONQUER IMMORTAL EVOLUTION ACADEMY EGOIST

    DROPPED DUE TO UNI/WORK They say we should be happy with what we have, but that's unacceptable. Not after what they put me through. But after agreeing to something I didn’t understand in an attempt to escape my fate, I'm transported to a new world. What a pity, revenge will have to wait. The cover image is not mine

    17 Chs 32 Collections