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A good HP fic. Any Dumpledore bashing is good bashing. The character is good, and I like how the story is developing. It breaks canon pretty well. I just wish that updates were faster. I read this story on FF, not Webnovel, but it deserves to be read.
I usually dont like making reviews but this one of the best books ive read in a while and hope the author updates more often. I also love the fact he makes the chaps long, def awsome since most chapters in books are short!!!! You have my full support on this book dear author!!!
Its a good book, the mc is smart and the grammar is decent if you are a supporter of dumbledore though then this isnt for you as dumbledore is evil. The only really bad thing i have to say on this book is the character development the author only focuses on a few main characters so the other characters just seem really shallow without personality.
It's a very good fan fiction and hope it will continue. It's well written, characters' interaction is good, the background is explained. Do your best author and thank you.
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Amazing and well thoght out story with its own interesting plotline. The story follows branches off from canon enough to feel new, while still feeling like a harry potter story. Also, chapters are normal length chapters, not webnovel length.
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Albus to-many-middle-names Dumbldore is actually cool and maybe not the best at choses and leads to him choosing the fastest and easiest solution, but he did make sure that he was always there if it meant that either Harry or anyone else couldn't handle the situation and had to burden of doing things that he hated the at-most of thing's.
I binge read this story all at once and it is amazing. It has a few spelling errors here and there but not enough to make you want to quit reading it. The character development of all of the characters is fantastic and the author’s ocs intergrate seamlessly with the world of Harry Potter. Obviously it has its flaws, as all stories do, but it’s definitely worth reading.
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Wow. Just wow. Excellent writing and lengthy chapters which i really appreciate and enjoy. The story is developed really well in my opinion and i am just hoping there is going to be more romance in the future.
Story has been fantastic so far so I am hoping that this story doesnt get dropped but its been over a month sonce the last chapter so lets hope
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It is actually a good story, but there are certain parts about it that are too badly written for my taste. - The first problem with it I have, is the spelling of certain words, they send flags up for me because it feels like the author purposely searched for words that sound the same but are spelled differently way too often for it to be a mistake. - The second is the MCs theory validation scenes, as soon as the MC tells you his theory about the magical world another scene happens to validate exactly what he just said. Trust me you wont miss them because they stick out like a sore thumb, and they don't match the tone of the writing, they are over-dramatized. - Third, the MC is one of those that just because he read the books, that only showed the magical world through Harry's first 7 at Hogwarts btw, he believes himself to know everything about it. Honestly, the great writing parts get buried by the nonsensical ones. Its like there are two different authors writing this, and I only managed to get to Dumbledores villain speech to himself at the sorting scene because I just couldn't stand it anymore! I don't know if I will finish reading it, the ton of 4-5 reviews got me hyped only to have me wonder if we were reading the same story.
Enjoying this take on HP fanfiction. MC is not above getting power but also not wanting to take over the world. It is perhaps a bit fast moving but that is the authors job to decide. Hoping this doesn't get dropped
overall the story is great, truly not disappointed by what I've read so far, the storys development so far is just awesome!! chapters are long, and truly creative in the ways the story interacts with canon, even though some things where changed from the original i am non the less still very much willing to see were the author will be taking this. the story doesn't disappoint so give a try i assure you wont be disappointed...
It was a decent story untill the mc started telling everyone he met he was a black for no reason. The author probably never read the harry potter books cause the sorting hat can't look at someone's memories it looks at the traits cause if it looked at memories hermione would be a ravenclaw not a gryffindor plus daphne would never be a ravenclaw claw cause of her traits and she isn't pro study like a ravenclaw
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Brilliant read. Although short in amount of chapters but length of it is like several chapters in one. I enjoyed the MC's perspective and reactions, despite his foreknowledge and some interesting content! I sincerely wish the author to keep up posting more chapters and work so I can eat it up. :) Great work, author!
I apologize in advance for my bad English first the good, long chapters with a lot of content and I think it is developing a fascinating and well developed story with a new and refreshing vision of the world of "Harry Potter" and I especially like that it moves away from the typical ideal of the trio to use more secondary characters. Having said the above, I have two negative notes, first the frequency of new chapters and second, I find it very annoying those "scene change" or "after a while" take me out of the story and I encourage the writer to find more subtle ways to explain said course I thank the writer for this magnificent work and beg him not to let it fall
It's a decent story but it has a lot of underlying errors. The author lacks a true understanding of many things not just the world of HP. The fact that the protagonist tries to hide his status as heir to the Black family does not make sense. Without the authorization of the legal authorities of the ministry, no 11-year-old boy becomes heir to a family of magicians just by donning a ring. The fact that the goblins discovered it makes it impossible for him to hide it from the ministry or the other pureblood families. I also can't understand how a harem can be conceived in the world of HP. The general idea of the story is not bad but the errors in the plot that I find every time I read make it very difficult for me to give it a higher rating.Simple example: The MC calls Kretchar some time after his conversation with Walburga but the elf doesn't know who the MC is. That's ridiculous as Walburga should have told her the good news.
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I'm not even a Harry Potter fan but i have to admit that this is by far one of the best fan fictions that i have ever read, Personally i would prefer if it was a little faster paced but i still dont mind how it is written so far, i hope the author continues the great work and doesn't stop updating!
Very good. Chance upon it while looking around. Good and a strong story. Details some of the inner working and very interesting. Now i need more cause it’s really good and just finished binge reading.
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A good HP fic. Any Dumpledore bashing is good bashing. The character is good, and I like how the story is developing. It breaks canon pretty well. I just wish that updates were faster. I read this story on FF, not Webnovel, but it deserves to be read.
I usually dont like making reviews but this one of the best books ive read in a while and hope the author updates more often. I also love the fact he makes the chaps long, def awsome since most chapters in books are short!!!! You have my full support on this book dear author!!!
Its a good book, the mc is smart and the grammar is decent if you are a supporter of dumbledore though then this isnt for you as dumbledore is evil. The only really bad thing i have to say on this book is the character development the author only focuses on a few main characters so the other characters just seem really shallow without personality.
It's a very good fan fiction and hope it will continue. It's well written, characters' interaction is good, the background is explained. Do your best author and thank you.
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Amazing and well thoght out story with its own interesting plotline. The story follows branches off from canon enough to feel new, while still feeling like a harry potter story. Also, chapters are normal length chapters, not webnovel length.
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Albus to-many-middle-names Dumbldore is actually cool and maybe not the best at choses and leads to him choosing the fastest and easiest solution, but he did make sure that he was always there if it meant that either Harry or anyone else couldn't handle the situation and had to burden of doing things that he hated the at-most of thing's.
I binge read this story all at once and it is amazing. It has a few spelling errors here and there but not enough to make you want to quit reading it. The character development of all of the characters is fantastic and the author’s ocs intergrate seamlessly with the world of Harry Potter. Obviously it has its flaws, as all stories do, but it’s definitely worth reading.
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Wow. Just wow. Excellent writing and lengthy chapters which i really appreciate and enjoy. The story is developed really well in my opinion and i am just hoping there is going to be more romance in the future.
Story has been fantastic so far so I am hoping that this story doesnt get dropped but its been over a month sonce the last chapter so lets hope
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It is actually a good story, but there are certain parts about it that are too badly written for my taste. - The first problem with it I have, is the spelling of certain words, they send flags up for me because it feels like the author purposely searched for words that sound the same but are spelled differently way too often for it to be a mistake. - The second is the MCs theory validation scenes, as soon as the MC tells you his theory about the magical world another scene happens to validate exactly what he just said. Trust me you wont miss them because they stick out like a sore thumb, and they don't match the tone of the writing, they are over-dramatized. - Third, the MC is one of those that just because he read the books, that only showed the magical world through Harry's first 7 at Hogwarts btw, he believes himself to know everything about it. Honestly, the great writing parts get buried by the nonsensical ones. Its like there are two different authors writing this, and I only managed to get to Dumbledores villain speech to himself at the sorting scene because I just couldn't stand it anymore! I don't know if I will finish reading it, the ton of 4-5 reviews got me hyped only to have me wonder if we were reading the same story.
Enjoying this take on HP fanfiction. MC is not above getting power but also not wanting to take over the world. It is perhaps a bit fast moving but that is the authors job to decide. Hoping this doesn't get dropped
overall the story is great, truly not disappointed by what I've read so far, the storys development so far is just awesome!! chapters are long, and truly creative in the ways the story interacts with canon, even though some things where changed from the original i am non the less still very much willing to see were the author will be taking this. the story doesn't disappoint so give a try i assure you wont be disappointed...
It was a decent story untill the mc started telling everyone he met he was a black for no reason. The author probably never read the harry potter books cause the sorting hat can't look at someone's memories it looks at the traits cause if it looked at memories hermione would be a ravenclaw not a gryffindor plus daphne would never be a ravenclaw claw cause of her traits and she isn't pro study like a ravenclaw
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Brilliant read. Although short in amount of chapters but length of it is like several chapters in one. I enjoyed the MC's perspective and reactions, despite his foreknowledge and some interesting content! I sincerely wish the author to keep up posting more chapters and work so I can eat it up. :) Great work, author!
I apologize in advance for my bad English first the good, long chapters with a lot of content and I think it is developing a fascinating and well developed story with a new and refreshing vision of the world of "Harry Potter" and I especially like that it moves away from the typical ideal of the trio to use more secondary characters. Having said the above, I have two negative notes, first the frequency of new chapters and second, I find it very annoying those "scene change" or "after a while" take me out of the story and I encourage the writer to find more subtle ways to explain said course I thank the writer for this magnificent work and beg him not to let it fall
It's a decent story but it has a lot of underlying errors. The author lacks a true understanding of many things not just the world of HP. The fact that the protagonist tries to hide his status as heir to the Black family does not make sense. Without the authorization of the legal authorities of the ministry, no 11-year-old boy becomes heir to a family of magicians just by donning a ring. The fact that the goblins discovered it makes it impossible for him to hide it from the ministry or the other pureblood families. I also can't understand how a harem can be conceived in the world of HP. The general idea of the story is not bad but the errors in the plot that I find every time I read make it very difficult for me to give it a higher rating.Simple example: The MC calls Kretchar some time after his conversation with Walburga but the elf doesn't know who the MC is. That's ridiculous as Walburga should have told her the good news.
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I'm not even a Harry Potter fan but i have to admit that this is by far one of the best fan fictions that i have ever read, Personally i would prefer if it was a little faster paced but i still dont mind how it is written so far, i hope the author continues the great work and doesn't stop updating!
Very good. Chance upon it while looking around. Good and a strong story. Details some of the inner working and very interesting. Now i need more cause it’s really good and just finished binge reading.
Me gusta historia, es entretenida y muy buena, su desarrollo es muy bueno, al igual que la calidad de escritura, el diseño ddl personaje es bueno, aunque la actualizacion deberia sermas seguido
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