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I found myself reading this out of pure curiosity. As I read through the chapters I've realized that the standards that I had for the current story fanfic that I am reading what above myexpectations. I laughed so much. Please Don't Drop!
I absolutely love how the MC is of the black house its a create story that protreys dumbledore as a more evil charter while also keeping it intressting since some of this might be spoilery I'll add the spoil thing but the chapters are so long I've been read this for over 10 hours and have just reached chapter if you like long books I can not recommend this enough its greater and I absolutely love although at the start I was kinda iffy if I wanted to continue to read this but then it just got better and better and better I hope the author never drops this as its super good with its writing and keeps ya hooked.
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great fiction for fanfiction and I like the way the author is taking direction of his characters and made them more realistic alive. I like paper cut-outs they are always being willing to be more engaging reader
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This is a righteously ball-bustingly brilliant take on the Harry Potter verse!! There’s sciences in here that I think every hp fan would have loved to have seen happen and some really clever turns as the story has progressed. The author has wonderfully portrayed the beginnings of an alternate path from canon which has flowed consistently so far. Love this book and want to see it continue!!!
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The story is lacking character depth. There is no emotional context to the dialogue, which is otherwise well written. The MC decides a minimal interference approach so as not to change canon too much, but it doesn't hint at what he plans to use the knowledge for... so we end up reading about unmade decisions and untaken actions rather than actual story content.
This is amazing so far. The main character is not presented in the typical fan fiction way and is not overly powerful. Over all the development and progress of the story shows that the author knows what they are talking about and does not make it seem rushed.
Best harry potter fanfic with a harem.💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯
🌹💎 Good so far and I don't have to translate bad grammar. It is very well written and easy to read. And so far has a good story. Please don't drop like so many others.
Simply an amazing story! The writing quality is great, character development is very solid. Chapter length is much appreciated,a lot of these books just have the them as pages not chapters, hope this story keeps hoing for a long time!
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This is a REALLY great HP Story!. I hope you will continue to finish this because i was just sucked into it. Loved it so far! I love the take on Dumbledore, a very different and interesting way. I hope it continues. But i also hope that Magnus will turn him to the proper path somewhere. That would be cool! I hope you will include Granger more in the story. She would have plenty of reason to alaign herself with Magnus, and magnus should see the power of having her on his side. Maybe even a love interest? Anyways.. Please more frequent updates... This is a must read.
Не, ну тут шедевр и никак иначе. Персонажи прописанф хорошо, действий и боев тоже приличное количество, радует постепенное развитие сюжета и самих персонажей. Нет резких перегибов в какую либо чторону и это прекрасно. Лойсирую
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I stopped on a cliff hanger!! T_T i want more more more more more more mOre more more mire more more mkre more more more mOre more more more please
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Hope dumbles fall. Hope peter tells that dumbledore knew he was the secret keeper. Hope dumbles fall. Hope peter tells that dumbledore knew he was the secret keeper.
This is a decent fanfic; it has an interesting MC and the flow isn't bad. However, I find it a little bit boring, as it is too cliched for my taste. There's Dumbledore and Ron bashing, of course, and the main character is quite predictable. On another note, I feel the story focuses too much in pureblood culture - which can be interesting, but isn't, actually, as every concept presented isn't new at all. Moreover, in my opinion, the story is too slow-paced. But I guess that isn't a bad point per se. Overall, this fanfic is decent, but it isn't too engaging, as it is clear that Dumbledore attempts in manipulating the MC won't be successful.
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Awesome HP Fanfic. Definitely different way to go about it which I love. I hope you go all the way with the story and don't give up. Thank you for the great work and keep it up!
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5 em tudo menos atualização pq li todos os capítulos em dois dias, creio. O personagem é perfeito. Passional e elegante. Parece muito fofo como ele defende a propria casa. Adorei. Por favor continuem postando.
Pls drop. This book is a disgrace. LalalallalalalalalalalalallalallalalaallalalalaLLLalallalaallalalalalalalalalaal tralalalalallalalalalalalalalaall
I found myself reading this out of pure curiosity. As I read through the chapters I've realized that the standards that I had for the current story fanfic that I am reading what above myexpectations. I laughed so much. Please Don't Drop!
I absolutely love how the MC is of the black house its a create story that protreys dumbledore as a more evil charter while also keeping it intressting since some of this might be spoilery I'll add the spoil thing but the chapters are so long I've been read this for over 10 hours and have just reached chapter if you like long books I can not recommend this enough its greater and I absolutely love although at the start I was kinda iffy if I wanted to continue to read this but then it just got better and better and better I hope the author never drops this as its super good with its writing and keeps ya hooked.
Reveal Spoiler great fiction for fanfiction and I like the way the author is taking direction of his characters and made them more realistic alive. I like paper cut-outs they are always being willing to be more engaging reader
Superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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Reveal Spoiler This is a righteously ball-bustingly brilliant take on the Harry Potter verse!! There’s sciences in here that I think every hp fan would have loved to have seen happen and some really clever turns as the story has progressed. The author has wonderfully portrayed the beginnings of an alternate path from canon which has flowed consistently so far. Love this book and want to see it continue!!!
Muy bueno Very good JfgjhdghdgjfhjvchfhjsjjhjfGdgcsfsgsgtsysygsgsgsfgsgsfsggsvscaggwfwhwccqgwfwfgwfwvavvacwhwggwywfsgeufgsjsgsnsvsfwhsvwnwvshs shsgsvgshwbevs
The story is lacking character depth. There is no emotional context to the dialogue, which is otherwise well written. The MC decides a minimal interference approach so as not to change canon too much, but it doesn't hint at what he plans to use the knowledge for... so we end up reading about unmade decisions and untaken actions rather than actual story content.
This is amazing so far. The main character is not presented in the typical fan fiction way and is not overly powerful. Over all the development and progress of the story shows that the author knows what they are talking about and does not make it seem rushed.
Best harry potter fanfic with a harem.💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯
🌹💎 Good so far and I don't have to translate bad grammar. It is very well written and easy to read. And so far has a good story. Please don't drop like so many others.
Simply an amazing story! The writing quality is great, character development is very solid. Chapter length is much appreciated,a lot of these books just have the them as pages not chapters, hope this story keeps hoing for a long time!
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Please don't drop this masterpiece Please don't drop this masterpiece Please don't drop this masterpiece Please don't drop this masterpiece Please don't drop this masterpiece Please don't drop this masterpiece
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Reveal Spoiler This is a REALLY great HP Story!. I hope you will continue to finish this because i was just sucked into it. Loved it so far! I love the take on Dumbledore, a very different and interesting way. I hope it continues. But i also hope that Magnus will turn him to the proper path somewhere. That would be cool! I hope you will include Granger more in the story. She would have plenty of reason to alaign herself with Magnus, and magnus should see the power of having her on his side. Maybe even a love interest? Anyways.. Please more frequent updates... This is a must read.
Не, ну тут шедевр и никак иначе. Персонажи прописанф хорошо, действий и боев тоже приличное количество, радует постепенное развитие сюжета и самих персонажей. Нет резких перегибов в какую либо чторону и это прекрасно. Лойсирую
One of the best harry potter fanfic ever. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I stopped on a cliff hanger!! T_T i want more more more more more more mOre more more mire more more mkre more more more mOre more more more please
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Hope dumbles fall. Hope peter tells that dumbledore knew he was the secret keeper. Hope dumbles fall. Hope peter tells that dumbledore knew he was the secret keeper.
This is a decent fanfic; it has an interesting MC and the flow isn't bad. However, I find it a little bit boring, as it is too cliched for my taste. There's Dumbledore and Ron bashing, of course, and the main character is quite predictable. On another note, I feel the story focuses too much in pureblood culture - which can be interesting, but isn't, actually, as every concept presented isn't new at all. Moreover, in my opinion, the story is too slow-paced. But I guess that isn't a bad point per se. Overall, this fanfic is decent, but it isn't too engaging, as it is clear that Dumbledore attempts in manipulating the MC won't be successful.
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Awesome HP Fanfic. Definitely different way to go about it which I love. I hope you go all the way with the story and don't give up. Thank you for the great work and keep it up!
One of the best harry potter fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
5 em tudo menos atualização pq li todos os capítulos em dois dias, creio. O personagem é perfeito. Passional e elegante. Parece muito fofo como ele defende a propria casa. Adorei. Por favor continuem postando.