Nefistoteles

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2017-06-26 Joined Spain
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Nefistoteles
Nefistoteles
2 days ago
Commented

more, more, more

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Nefistoteles
3 days ago
Commented

Dear Author, I don't know if you'll read this, but I thought it was appropriate. Sorry, this work is not for me. I find the protagonist and the story in general much more boring than your other works. I can't explain it well, but it just doesn't have that "spark". I'll be looking forward to your next work or if you decide to pick up any of your previous works. Until then, good luck.

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Nefistoteles
Nefistoteles
4 days ago
Commented

What the protagonist has set in motion is basically a war economy, which inevitably leads (as history has shown) either to the rapid annexation of resource-rich territories or to the bankruptcy of the Ducatún within 2-5 years at most (it all depends on national reserves). Moreover, such a level of repression always leads to the uprising of sections of the population, unless social measures are quickly implemented, which, returning to the previous point, will empty the coffers even faster. Keep that in mind, writer.

Nefistoteles
Nefistoteles
7 days ago
Posted

This is a good novel with great writing, but unfortunately it's not for me, why? Because it's dense like nothing I've seen before, be prepared for 50 chapters to advance a week's worth of plot through endless conversations, not that I'm crazy about fast paced action but for me this is just too slow. However, I reiterate what I said at the beginning, it's a good novel and if you like dense plots you'll like it.

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Nefistoteles
9 days ago
Commented

con sinceridad me preocupa mucho que el protagonista haya creado una especie de especie tyranida, si la araña roja fuese independiente con algo de tiempo conquistaria el bosque oscuro y seria un autentico peligro

Nefistoteles
Nefistoteles
10 days ago
Replied to DRACULAVONDEATH

And I can't convince you to keep releasing chapters even from time to time? And in another order of things, are you going to continue "For The Goddess Imperatoress!"?

Nefistoteles
Nefistoteles
10 days ago
Commented

Why did it fail? It's a good book, please don't put it down. I know what I'm going to say is pure selfishness, because I like this book and I want to keep reading it, but you don't write to please people, you write to tell the story you want.

Nefistoteles
Nefistoteles
10 days ago
Commented

more, more, more.When will we see a reunion of all the wives? (cyberpunk and warhammer)