Lost soul

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TheOnlyRaiko

Very good fanfic!!! One of the best on this website.

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AlucardRP_16

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Dennis_Kievit

Love it so far.

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kamakco

Really good just 11chap and i need more but i love the start thank for write :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 5

minhazxz

Unique.............. Refreshing to see uncommon Harry Potter fanfic ........................................................................

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GODKINGASH

Man the this is gold and I can’t wait for more ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️

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thecrazy14

Overall I like this book but the Grammer can be a bit bad alot of the time if you don't like misspelled words I would not recommend this book. as for the story I do enjoy it, and the chapter release is a stable one a day.

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usui1202

Adorei, ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 5

GnawingJackal

The first chapters nice and poetic and all, which is a nice change of pace, but it's too long. Keep it short and sweet. Also it needs revising: there were quite a few grammatical errors and weird turns of phrase that kind of kill the mystical & mysterious feeling I think you were going for..

LV 3

High_Ground

...................................................................... Another great work from author-san 👏👏 ......................................................................

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Rene_Jakobsen

i think the story is very good.... i just wanna ask or rather plead you to beging writhing again pleasee..................................................

LV 4

Tupan

Really good fanfic. Although the development is fast, it is a really enjoyable read. Needs more updates as the writing has some misspelling and errors. But overall it is a really solid novel. I was just hoping for more romance and lime hehe.

LV 14

Nigga_Lzz

it's a good fanfic the bashing is satisfying the only problem I have is the fainting part it kind of ruins the immersion. don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop

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Medalha

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Medalha

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Medalha

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LV 14

stefanus101

this novel is one of the best fan-fic on this website if you like a story about war,politics and a ruthless MC (i mean that literally not like the so-called Vanlla ruthless Isekai out there) this novel is for you,not to mention the magic in this novel is being ramped up to 100/10 scale ,this novel does have some points that makes reading it really hard THE GRAMMAR AND MISSPELLING IS RIDICULOUS!!!! if you can read it despite these defects,you can definitely enjoy this novel

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juliadeaton8

Sounds like this may be an interesting read. Can't wait to be able to start reading it. I'll report back with an update at a later date and time.

LV 6

zStick21

Not a typical potterverse fanfic. Plus the face slapping is sooooooooooooooo satisfying. Other than minor spelling check, else it's perfect.