Last True Remnant of Old Valyria

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ANANTAVIJAYA1961

If you do not have content to write then don't write why make us waste our time . you wrote one chapter about him and wasted 6 chapters for your stupid and chapter numbers.

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Daeranyx_Drakonar

This is first work so be magnanimous forgive my shamelessness. If you like my work do leave reviews here

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Nfkmfh

It looks promasing I will edit this review after chp 30 ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..………………

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YourDad_

The World Background and character Interactions are top notch but the Story Development ruined this Masterpiece. I know it was a bad decision to Ally with Targaryens but it still continued believing Author's abilities and he miserably failed me. Whatever i guess. Read it if you want the author have putted enough time in this but the MC is not up to my tastes

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m3gah1tss

Three paragraphs and I can see the heavy lack of punctuation marks. Grammarly free can easily solve that problem. Ps: how you write reviews with less than 150 characters?

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Typgamer456

good start can't wait to see how it goes

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Bhrigu_Bhola

Don't you drop! I am already interested reading the title.

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AlexPendragon

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Kavindu_Ruwanara

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💞💞💞💞💞 so far so good though a bit slow. But I suppose it is necessary to make the story. And it was a nice and enjoyable reading for me. Keep it up. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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wizard_kitten

Es muy interesante por eso me gustaría seguir leyendo, es todo lo que diré y porfavor sigue actualizando más capítulos🙏♥️♥️♥️🐭......................... ..........................................................................

LV 15

Aris82

as a game of thrones fanfiction this one premise about a dragonlord is new one for me. the MC character is good with a nice storyline and waiting for more.

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BEAST_OP

More of this fanfic. And 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁plzjshsgshshshbshsgsgshshdgdgdhdhdhdhdhdhdbshshshshshhshshdhdhdhdgdgdgdgdgdggdgdgdgdgdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdggdgdgdhegehheheheheheheheh

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Andreaus_SinClaire

if there is any lower than 1 star, please tell me... this is boring, really boring, extremely boring, abominably boring, too slow, dunno what else to say... boring and slow

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Seito_Morningstar

Hey man ! Your fic is very interesting for many reasons but the main reason is that magic is used and the rituals are very interesting. Keep updating and keep cooking brotha !

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Oleg_Nikitin

Поначалу мне было интересно читать, но когда начались эти пространные рассуждения и витиеватые описания, желания резко убавилось. [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

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DaoistqkxYgY

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Agora1

Very nice start to the story. I hope you are involved more in the story and character interaction, as the last few chapters were just general info and power boot up. anyways I really hope you continue the story...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Halvard_Ulf

Daha hızlı güncelleme bekliyorum . Dragon un güçlendirmeden sonra yüksek zekalı zihinsel olarak konuşmasını istiyorum. Merhaba Merhaba Merhaba Merhaba Merhaba