Hiatus Marvel: Light of the Crystal

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LaurentCross

Everything is great except the mc personality sorry if this is biased but I hate heros the mc is a boyscout and nothing like his past life I was hoping he would be a bad as warrior type like his last life but this author made this mc a mommas boy and to forgiving sorry but not my cup of tea with his background he should at least be mentally stronger and mature and not be taking **** sorry but him alone rujns this story for me and made me drop it ✌ and good luck with your story.

LV 2

DavidBr

man, you really managed to make a good story, but in my opinion your decision to forgive the MC friends was a complete disappointment and I really will not but follow this story, but good luck in continuing with your story

LV 2

_Medeiros

the story was going well, but suddenly I started to get a little forced when you put the romance in the story, but so far the biggest problem has been that he lost his friends after they they were idiots with him summarizing this story it was a big disappointment i hope you are lucky with your story but i will not but follow this story (sorry for my english)

LV 5

_James_Jones_

seriously i really liked this story but since you decided to follow this path there is nothing i can do but i will not follow this story Djdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjejdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjsjsjjdjdjsjsksksmsmsmsmzzmmsmzmzmsmsmssmmsmsmssmkdmdkdmdkdkddmdmmdmdmddmdmdmdm

this story started well even having some problems when the subject and romance but it was still going well so that your decision made me lose interest in your story

LV 1

JamesBlack

Mc was a disappointment even if he forgave his friends you could have done he only forgives but doesn’t go back to being friends not like they were before Dhdhdndnnfjfjfjdndndndndndndmnssmdmnsjsjsjdjdmdmdmdmdmdmdmdmdmdmdmdmdkdmdmdmdmdmxmxmxmxmdmdmdmdmdmdmdmdmdmdmdm

LV 5

MoonSon

I have no problem with the protagonist's decision to forgive, but totally ignoring what they did and interacting with them as if nothing had happened left me with a bad taste in my mouth. Despite that, I'm enjoying the story.

LV 4

Nuns

At the time of this review it's very early on, chapter 16 to be exact. Reason for making one this early is mainly due to there not really being any helpful reviews currently. One of the most important things you need to know about the story is this is a Gary Sue story. If you don't like that brand of character this story will not be or you. Main tags so far; SI, Gary Sue, OPMC, SI, Reincarnation and possible harem. The quality of writing is better then most fanfics I've read as of late, but does have some issues primarily with the lack of details on everything from actions to the world itself. The transitioning could also use some work, as things seem a bit random at times. Update speed is great so far but what else can you expect it's super early on into the story so it's impossible to give an accurate prognosis yet. The story development is again in the infant phase so hard to really say much.  The characters in the story this far have been pretty bland. The most developed thus far is the MC and generic is the first word that comes to mind. Everyone else isn't any better, often coming off as clones of each other with how uniform their admiration for the MC is. Again it's early on in the story is there is time for this to change.  The world development is much like the story development too early to really tell.

LV 4

Ttsfih

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LV 13

GODKINGASH

This is really good even tho he got a little ntred it gets better so **** mj and Peter but this story is better with out them so keep writing hope you gain some inspiration sooooon

LV 7

starking

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yokedjaguar

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oli5

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Prometheus2000

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LV 6

Paradox41295

A rare find to get a final fantasy based novel and a great one at that so I highly recommend this to anyone looking for a great story to read

LV 5

sidekick

come on this is his story why he can't be creative about his own story this is problem with you gauys blame writter yes story a little bit forced but dont make rating go downhill like this if there are problem then he can rewrite dont discourage new writer

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Godlyghostwatcher

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LV 4

BoniLorens

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