I know this is a story I know it's your story and I'm not bad mouthing you however I have to say that was too easy good guys when they have to defeat an artificial intelligence it's always giving him trouble usually almost killing them and it resurges up again and most of time kills a loved one or two but in this story all the bad guys has to do is walk into a building like it doesn't even have security and shoot at it and oh sorry raise hands and then shoot that's it that's all he's got the bad guy wins I'm sorry but that's just not really fair
ch 60 C60 Captain Marvel?
Movies · AlienWarlord
I'm enjoying your novel very much and I do give you Stones when I find the chapters interesting usually you asked for a review so I will try to give you some input. one I think he should come up with his own fighting technique using his doctor skills he'll take out opponents where they lethal or non-lethal. if he was so knowledgeable from his past life he should know about certain drugs or skin care products that he could make and then have patented and sold making extreme amounts of money makeup as well skin care and makeup are billion dollar Industries. third even if he was living under a rock in his past life he would know about certain disasters that they would publicize on the news in the past life several different instances such as when Hurricane Katrina happened the corruption was so bad that they couldn't maintain the dams to release water which caused some flooding you know about bombings and plain disasters now I know what you're thinking if he knows that what about it what good is it well for one thing he could simply call the FBI anonymously and save New Orleans from some flooding if he knows about airplane disaster he could tell them anonymously something's wrong the bomber is going to happen he would tell the police anonymously these are just some instances I can come up with off the top of my head I'm sure you can figure these things out and flush them out a lot better than I can right now. and lastly I just want to say you're doing a great job and please keep up the good work also please make more chapters quickly it's to much to have to wait a whole week for one chapter
ch 51 Chapter 51
TV · Maximus_Quill
I just read from chapter 1 to to this chapter since like 2 or 3 days ago and I had to say you are an excellent writer you've Blended them out of the characters and the Marvel and the Star Wars Universe very well and I am enjoying the book and please continue writing I want more thank you
ch 39 C39 Leave Or Stay?
Movies · AlienWarlord
well written good job
ch 0 9 Royal Library
Fantasy · Inexorable_Death
it's a great novel and I'm enjoying it please continue also I might not leave reviews very often but if I like to know enough I will give it Stones so your novel will be getting stones just let you know great novel thank you
ch 48 Chapter 48
TV · Maximus_Quill
please bring more chapters thank you
ch 158 A shady deal
TV · Chill_ean_GUY
I vote Rogue as well
- Other Option.(comment here)
Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh_Official
get well soon
ch 156 Notice:I have the flu
TV · Chill_ean_GUY
thank you for the chapter and I would really like you to give me some more thank you again
ch 153 A talk about the future of the kingdom
TV · Chill_ean_GUY
I tried to write a comment on the last chapter but I couldn't because it wouldn't let me but this one should count for two and I have to get a hundred chapters in one day LOL Anyway I think you're doing pretty good keep up the good work also I will give you a power Stone just like you asked
ch 152 The Royal Tour II
TV · Chill_ean_GUY
I really like your stories in this novel you know the other points of view are pretty good I do however would like the other points of view chapters to be all in one chapter just one really long instead of broken up like you do because I'd like to get on with the story you know I'm waiting several days for that to happen is a little annoying
ch 149 [interlude]The army with a state II
TV · Chill_ean_GUY
that was one of the best chapters you ever wrote
ch 136 [Interlude]The migrant wave
TV · Chill_ean_GUY
I'm enjoying the book give me more chapters please thank you
ch 22 Chapter 22- Future Plans (1765)
History · HydroG3
thank you
ch 0 9 The Chase
Anime & Comics · SirZurone
hello I've come to you today to implore you to continue giving me more chapters I need more chapters of this novel I enjoy this novel too much for it to be dropped I give you plenty of stones as the records probably show so please don't drop this novel and please continue to give me more chapters thank you for your time and effort and give me more chapters please
ch 78 Secret Room
Fantasy · CosmicQuill
you are a very good writer you're able to elicit emotions with your writing very well and I am very impressed the only issue I have with you is you take too long to put chapters out but wow you are really good and thank you for all your hard work
ch 122 Chapter 111
Star Wars: Rise of the forgotten clan
Movies · Vapidbread829