/ Fantasy / Oliva The Lost Princess
摘要
Oliva the lost princess, her mother died when she was seven months old, to be adopted by a couple of witches, who take her to live with them in the world of magic and paranormality.
Oliva dared to caress the most handsome and fearful man in the magic world _Price Kiderak_
just to prove to her sister that she has no problems with men.
Prince Kiderak the tough, bloody shutter falls in love with her.She accepts to marry him to save her family from his brutality, only to be surprised that she is not their biological daughter, and her husband just in love with her hot body like any other man.
Despite her mysterious beauty, she possesses powers that allow her to ruin the whole magic world. All of the owner's masters in the magical world are looking for her.
Will she be able to find her father in the Kuns land?
Will she confess her feelings to her husband?
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As this review is being written, it was still at Chapter 1. Nonetheless the Author did make some brave choices on which direction the story would be heading. Please do try the novel as it does offer some interesting possibilites. Will check on this again once more uploads are made..
The storyline is excellent. I hope you can correct some of the most noticeable grammatical errors. I suggest... You edit the story's description to attract more readers. You can really feel the emotion in the first three chapters of the story. I wish you could be more consistent with the time of your updates. Overall, the quality and content are very satisfying!
Thats actually a good story. To be honest ı enjoyed reading it. Im waiting for new chapters!
Writing was smooth, easy to read and chosen words have emotional depth making the sentences attractive to readers. overall, it's good, I'm speechless like I'm in heaven .
interesting story.Some chapters have their own storylines and don't make the reader feel bored.Hopefully you can maintain the storyline and be able to create a scene according to what you want. because in several chapters, I found several unexpected scenes and was able to make me curious and keep reading.Good luck, author.
This story is nice and beautiful. The writing is good and the characters are very interesting. Keep up the good work! Thank you for sharing a good book with us.
The first chapter got my attention and am already in love with the book, wait for more episodes, good work keep it up .
Wooow😮, your story had me in tears by the 1st chapter!It's truly Impressive❤I'm glad I stumbled upon your work❤.
I hope this book gets more attention from the readers. It's the classic romance tropes of princess and prince but its storyline has its own uniqueness. Keep working on the book and upload more chapters that would show its difference from the other usual tropes.
Wow✨ this story is really amazing! It's make me fun to read it.. I want to recommend this book to read! Keep writing, author
the story is alright and very pleasing but the grammatical errors needs to be checked by the author. over all it is a great story, such excitement and anticipation awaits in this book 🤩
Good and catchy synopsis and title as well. The story is good so far but the author should check on grammatical errors.
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The book is one of the kind to be honest. It has a lot of intriguing scenes and all, the writing quality only needs to increase, apart from that, it is a good book!
Based on the early chapters of the novel, it has potential, but the writing and grammar could use some improvement. The premise and introduction are promising. However, the author should definitely consider adding a synopsis and hashtags to help people understand what the novel is about and make it more discoverable. Overall, it seems there is a lot of potential here and I hope the author continues to write and grow!
The book is nice. I'm adding it to my library. Also, the first chapter was so tragic. 😭. Truly, the story is nice all have to do is to stay inspired.