Peta is surely taking her sweet time tonight. I really have an urge to sleep, so I gently shut my eyes, getting ready to slip into a much-needed slumber.
Hello, Author. From what I've read in chapters 1 through 3, there appear to be some errors, such as incorrect use of punctuation, and starting in chapter 4, you only focus on the character's dialogue. In order to increase the readers' interest in your story, add more description of the setting as well as details about the characters' actions and thoughts. That's all, continue the wonderful job.
In a heartbeat, my life shattered and twisted, poison claiming me.
I found myself reborn as a three-year-old Princess in the Otheonate Empire.
The kingdom appeared like a painting of tranquillity and prosperity, with majestic landscapes and vibrant gardens that filled my heart with awe.
The bustling cities hummed with life and abundance, and I couldn't help but feel the warmth of this golden era.
But amidst this apparent paradise, a hidden darkness lurked, unseen by most. And then, everything changed as I suddenly awoke in this new life, memories of my past blending with those of the young Princess.
I vividly recalled the chaos that unfolded as my father, the King, made a heart-wrenching decision.
He found a secret escape for my mother and three siblings, urging them to flee to safety while he stayed behind to protect the country.
I could still hear his words,
"I love you, honey," and see the tears in my mother's eyes as she pleaded to him to join us.
But he knew his duty was to safeguard the empire, promising to return and reunite with us.
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"THE KING IS DEAD!"
the people cried while the others cheered for the new King's reign.
Kill the others," the new king commanded his knights.
During the chaos, I witnessed the resilience of my family.
My siblings and mother fought bravely to survive, even amidst the torn path.
We yearned for a place to call home—a sanctuary to heal, grieve, and rebuild our shattered lives.
Filled with grief and determination, I made a silent vow to myself.
I would rise from the ashes, reclaim my kingdom, and dismantle the oppressive empire that had caused so much pain.
The same country that once appeared peaceful and prosperous would be crushed by my own hands.
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Good day Everyone,
Finally, I can count on your support throught sending gift and golden tickets. So that everyone becomes aware of my story. If that happened, I might publish a mass of chapter for you all.
Thank you everyone.
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