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The book is good. It has a special plot that roles on female. She seems quite stubborn but you are going to like the book if you read on. The plot setting and world building is great. The writing style is simple and easy flowing. Great work author, good for it.
This is an interesting outline, that keeps me wondering what's going on! I hope Olivia gets her happiness, and can find balance between her powers and her emotions!
The storyline is excellent. I hope you can correct some of the most noticeable grammatical errors. I suggest... You edit the story's description to attract more readers. You can really feel the emotion in the first three chapters of the story. I wish you could be more consistent with the time of your updates. Overall, the quality and content are very satisfying!
Thats actually a good story. To be honest ı enjoyed reading it. Im waiting for new chapters!
Writing was smooth, easy to read and chosen words have emotional depth making the sentences attractive to readers. overall, it's good, I'm speechless like I'm in heaven .
interesting story.Some chapters have their own storylines and don't make the reader feel bored.Hopefully you can maintain the storyline and be able to create a scene according to what you want. because in several chapters, I found several unexpected scenes and was able to make me curious and keep reading.Good luck, author.
This story is nice and beautiful. The writing is good and the characters are very interesting. Keep up the good work! Thank you for sharing a good book with us.
The first chapter got my attention and am already in love with the book, wait for more episodes, good work keep it up .
Wooow😮, your story had me in tears by the 1st chapter!It's truly Impressive❤I'm glad I stumbled upon your work❤.
I hope this book gets more attention from the readers. It's the classic romance tropes of princess and prince but its storyline has its own uniqueness. Keep working on the book and upload more chapters that would show its difference from the other usual tropes.
Wow✨ this story is really amazing! It's make me fun to read it.. I want to recommend this book to read! Keep writing, author
the story is alright and very pleasing but the grammatical errors needs to be checked by the author. over all it is a great story, such excitement and anticipation awaits in this book 🤩
Good and catchy synopsis and title as well. The story is good so far but the author should check on grammatical errors.
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The book is one of the kind to be honest. It has a lot of intriguing scenes and all, the writing quality only needs to increase, apart from that, it is a good book!
The book is nice. I'm adding it to my library. Also, the first chapter was so tragic. 😭. Truly, the story is nice all have to do is to stay inspired.
Based on the early chapters of the novel, it has potential, but the writing and grammar could use some improvement. The premise and introduction are promising. However, the author should definitely consider adding a synopsis and hashtags to help people understand what the novel is about and make it more discoverable. Overall, it seems there is a lot of potential here and I hope the author continues to write and grow!
This is an intriguing story with a nice plotline and great character development. The character dynamics us unique, I can't wait to read what will happen next. Keep it up, Author.
The story is fast paced and descriptive all at once. The images convayed by the writer a vivid. Though there are some grammar mistakes it's still a very well planned story.
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As this review is being written, it was still at Chapter 1. Nonetheless the Author did make some brave choices on which direction the story would be heading. Please do try the novel as it does offer some interesting possibilites. Will check on this again once more uploads are made..
This is my first story of witches I would love to see how it ends ,she a strong lady so keep it up it's nice And intriguing,update early ,keep up the good work
The book is good. It has a special plot that roles on female. She seems quite stubborn but you are going to like the book if you read on. The plot setting and world building is great. The writing style is simple and easy flowing. Great work author, good for it.
This is an interesting outline, that keeps me wondering what's going on! I hope Olivia gets her happiness, and can find balance between her powers and her emotions!
The storyline is excellent. I hope you can correct some of the most noticeable grammatical errors. I suggest... You edit the story's description to attract more readers. You can really feel the emotion in the first three chapters of the story. I wish you could be more consistent with the time of your updates. Overall, the quality and content are very satisfying!
Thats actually a good story. To be honest ı enjoyed reading it. Im waiting for new chapters!
Writing was smooth, easy to read and chosen words have emotional depth making the sentences attractive to readers. overall, it's good, I'm speechless like I'm in heaven .
interesting story.Some chapters have their own storylines and don't make the reader feel bored.Hopefully you can maintain the storyline and be able to create a scene according to what you want. because in several chapters, I found several unexpected scenes and was able to make me curious and keep reading.Good luck, author.
This story is nice and beautiful. The writing is good and the characters are very interesting. Keep up the good work! Thank you for sharing a good book with us.
The first chapter got my attention and am already in love with the book, wait for more episodes, good work keep it up .
Wooow😮, your story had me in tears by the 1st chapter!It's truly Impressive❤I'm glad I stumbled upon your work❤.
I hope this book gets more attention from the readers. It's the classic romance tropes of princess and prince but its storyline has its own uniqueness. Keep working on the book and upload more chapters that would show its difference from the other usual tropes.
Wow✨ this story is really amazing! It's make me fun to read it.. I want to recommend this book to read! Keep writing, author
the story is alright and very pleasing but the grammatical errors needs to be checked by the author. over all it is a great story, such excitement and anticipation awaits in this book 🤩
Good and catchy synopsis and title as well. The story is good so far but the author should check on grammatical errors.
揭示劇透 The book is one of the kind to be honest. It has a lot of intriguing scenes and all, the writing quality only needs to increase, apart from that, it is a good book!
The book is nice. I'm adding it to my library. Also, the first chapter was so tragic. 😭. Truly, the story is nice all have to do is to stay inspired.
Based on the early chapters of the novel, it has potential, but the writing and grammar could use some improvement. The premise and introduction are promising. However, the author should definitely consider adding a synopsis and hashtags to help people understand what the novel is about and make it more discoverable. Overall, it seems there is a lot of potential here and I hope the author continues to write and grow!
This is an intriguing story with a nice plotline and great character development. The character dynamics us unique, I can't wait to read what will happen next. Keep it up, Author.
The story is fast paced and descriptive all at once. The images convayed by the writer a vivid. Though there are some grammar mistakes it's still a very well planned story.
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As this review is being written, it was still at Chapter 1. Nonetheless the Author did make some brave choices on which direction the story would be heading. Please do try the novel as it does offer some interesting possibilites. Will check on this again once more uploads are made..
This is my first story of witches I would love to see how it ends ,she a strong lady so keep it up it's nice And intriguing,update early ,keep up the good work