摘要
Sally, in order to fulfill her original wish, entered Beast World and transformed into a little white mouse, also binding herself to the Offspring System.
[The Dragon Lineage has gone ten thousand years without new blood.]
[How many points for the Dragon Lineage?]
[Five hundred million!]
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At the beginning I didn't understand why I was so invested. I still don't get it but I like it. the MC sometimes does things a bit questionable but after reading for a while it's understandable because of the MC emotions are deleted so sometimes she is emotional other times she is rational. in the beginning i didn't like what she was saying and acting but in the beginning she was focused on her objective so it's understandable. the system was also very interesting and unique. Her husbands are a bit pitiful. one thing that's a bit frustrating is the switch between she and he in the same character. I still don't understand if the witch of the rat clan is female or male. The story it's also diverse so it's quite interesting.
I don't 100% know why i'm invested in this novel. it could be all the different ways the MC escapes her husbands, it could be the unique system used or it could be the power ups not just her but the world get constantly more interesting and better to read about. Couple items to improve on would be correcting the He/She usage, a male is a he or him, a few chapters call the husbands "she", also our MC has white hair then randomly she has black in the holy city.
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Very interesting story but she seems to treat the guys more as tools rather than lovers, which is kind of gross and seems to play favorites. She treats her kids as a way of just getting what she wants and becoming stronger not as if she’s bringing a new life into the world which is also kind of gross. Lastly it’s really easy to miss a birth if you are skipping around to the good parts.
I wanted to read some new beastworld story. Randomly I started this one. And just can’t stop reading it.
The translation is okay, but sometimes they switch the pronouns for one person, I still don't know if Grom is male or female. The reason I gave such a low review is because of the MC. She says the only reason she agreed to bind to the system is because she wants to go back to earth. But she doesn't show us this, this story is just tell not show. Which I understand a bit, since this is a novel, but they really have to explain every single thing to us. Though I understand sometimes when they HAVE to explain the MCs actions, because there is oftentimes no rational thought behind the MCs actions. I quit reading it on chapter 100. The MC SAYS that she wants to go back to earth, showing that she doesn't like being here. But on chapter 100, she gives away ALL TEN MILLION OF HER POINTS, so that she could revive her ex. Now I understand that he didn't treat her well, being cold, getting her pregnant and forcing her to get an abortion. But she is not at earth, she has and will have NO interactions with him at all. I'm probably being insensitive, but she annoys me other times as well. So that's all.
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I adore this novel c: the cute and powerful system&FL ♡(ӦｖӦ｡)the exciting world filled with potential beast hubbies -never a dull moment! the holy war is a gr8 twist ,thank you author for all the hard work you put in,i appreciate youuuuu 🙏❣️💜