/ Movies / Marvel: Elysium (Old)
摘要
As You all know, A guy gets killed in a fantastic way
Meets God
Reincarnates with Gifts
becomes ridiculously OP
Turns the entire world into his plaything cause he knows no one can hurt him
Please Note, It has been rewritten under the name/
Elysium [Marvel]
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Started with logic but ended up breaking the same logic it's like the author puts no thought into what he's writing. If you establish rules you have to abide by them, for example, u don't want him to be super smart cause he's going to above people and not be able to connect with anyone yet when he's powered up he gets super smart also being able to recall stuff and understand anything he reads...wasn't that you were trying to avoid. Every single chapter mentions the cosmic entity guarding the multiverse yet the Mc does nothing to either kill it or fight. He has all the resources known to marvel n Dc so the only thing stopping him is u the author with your lack of creativity. If you can't comprehend that don't make your Mc so Op that you can't utilize their powers in a way that is not a brain drain.
Very bad just repeat and repeat baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad baaaaasd baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
This is a good fic in my opinion I hope that it doesn't get dropped.........................................................................
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Yes there are some cliches.. and yes he's got a ridiculous gift.. but that's what makes this fun.. if the author continues in the same pace he's moving.. he can make a fine 300 or 350 chapter fanfic.. but he needs to very careful regarding this fiction.. every fiction with OP MC gets boring way too fast.. you'll have to carve out a unique plot.. greatly deviating from the storyline.. Like Cornbringer does.. this definitely has potential... the wish was unique.. and his choice of powers are different from a standard MC.. so let's see.. and I hope you maintain this pace of updates.. 20 chapters in a single day it just made my day
very good story and hope you continue it 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✌✌✌🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅
this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
Welp if you like forced plot, plot holes the size of galaxies and general asinine nonsense you'll love this story. Otherwise run away and don't waste your time on this trash.
I would really like to see more of the kingdom building stuff and its interactions tho, you dont really so much of these
It's entertaining and fun to read, don't let negative people get you down and use it to improve yourself and prove them wrong. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!
love it, hope the author post more for me it's perfect hope the fanfic get more popular and may the wish of the author come true. Smiths!!!!!!
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This is a good fic in my opinion. please do NOT drop IT......................................................................................................................................................................................
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surprisingly good fic for now (22chapters), some might say he is op too fast but that would be stupid if he was not, with his cheats he should be around that power level he is now. this is all i have to say for now. give it a try
WHERE IS THE REST?!?!?! WHERE ARE THE OTHER CHAPTERS?!?!?!?! Moje more, moje more Moje more, moje more Moje more, moje more Moje more, moje more Ni do zadnjeg leta, ni do kraja sveta Sudbina je moja kleta Moje more, moje more Moje more Niko neće džanum Ni za živu glavu Da mi leči ranu Niko neće džanum More! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hmm it's quite good actually, maybe it's derived from fanfiction.net marvel: path forward but just a little bit selfish.
Where you at? it's been a while you posted a chapter so what's taking so long? And make it a harem HAREM!HAREM!HAREM! HAREM! HAREM!HAREM! HAREM!
simply a mixture of repeated things from other works, neighbor of the spider man, gods coming to give things to him FOR NO logical reason, super genius that befriends a fantastic quartet and of course could not miss the super perfect appearance that makes him attractive, literally a lots of clichés together and all this happens in less than 10 chapters, honestly if I continue reading sme doubts there will be some moment when he becomes a woman's slave and makes a harem easily with his super perfect body