摘要
After transmigrating to the Harry Potter world and being reborn as Grindelwald and Dumbledore's flesh and blood, Blake had awakened the Emotional Treasure Chest System!
Make someone's blood pressure soar and you'll get a treasure chest!
So …
Blake: "Review?
You've just learned something, how can you forget it so quickly? "
Hermione (deep breath): "Hermione, you have to calm down!"
[Ding! Silver Treasure Chest 1!]
Blake: "What a handsome cat!" (Takes out a cat stick!)
Professor McGonagall: "!!"
[Ding! Gold Treasure Chest 1!]
Blake: "Professor Snape, do you want to eat hotpot together?
It's delicious! "
Snape: "That's my crucible!
How dare you!
I'll deduct 50 points from Hufflepuff! "
[Ding! Diamond Treasure Chest 1!]
Blake: "Professor, my surname is Grindelwald."
Dumbledore: "Hmm?
What did you say your surname was? "
[Ding! Supreme Treasure Chest 1!]
Blake: "Soupy, where's your nose?"
Voldemort: "Avada …"
…
Blake: "I'm just a little badger who wants to become stronger. What bad intentions can I have?" (Hands up)
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DISCLAIMER: This is a Translation of 霍格沃茨：小獾能有啥坏心思呢？
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Good fanfic, but bad translation. Don't get me wrong, the translation and grammar is understandable. The problem is that this fanfic use vague words for names, skills, items and etc. For example "invisible monster"... Even now I have no clue what kind of monster is that... Just give it a name... The same problem happens everytime some sort of name is used...
Well if u put aside the butchering of all the names of pretty much everything spells people animals its suprisingly readable. Mc gets overpowered very fast but thats not really a suprise in a system novel
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it is readable, but the problem is the name of the spell and the name if the magical animals are wrong, like the invisible animal, its seems like its a demiguise, also the transformation magic, the right one is transfiguration, also the phantasm shift isnt it apparition, he even named an acramantula spider as an eight eyed giant spider, even some of the magical plant named are wrong
first word of the first chapter is "Summon the guardian" and two sentences after that theres a "staff" not then a spell called "Phantom transportation" lol. if you don't see the problem let me help you, they are the translator's synonyms for "Expecto patronum, wand, and apparition". at least try to read what you are uploading author.
Currently in the third chapter. I am the first reviewer besides the Author. Great work so far. I hope it stays like that. Keep it up Author-San! Also if you like Naruto you could check my fanfic Naruto: Mixed Heritage
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I love that story, that can become a master class for sure ! I really want to read more Haha !
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maliiiiiiiiiisima traducion palabras totalmente diferentes y a ratos se vuelve inposible de comprender la continuidad
This fanfic is pretty funny, don't expect deep plot while reading this... Just read it as a comedy fanfic instead TL quality is decent and readable, could be better eg comprehension ability is written as brainiac ability Which was confusing to me as I thought mc got abilities of Brainiac from dc 😂
The writing is 100/10 BUT I really dislike the harem not that I hate harems in general but this one in particular sucked I just didn’t feel their emotional connection and he honestly acted like an idiot when he was with girls
I have really been enjoying this story. While the translation isn't 100% it isn't hard to follow along or comprehend. The main character may be a little over powered but it doesn't happen in away that makes the storyline boring or overly predictable.
I really like the story, although all this animals and plants strengthening thing isn't my type I admit there is originality in the idea don't take it as a critique but merely the point of view of a reader.
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Hey guys, Max1mus here! Here is my shameless Author Review. I have tried my best to enhance the reader experience of this translation work. Hope you have a good time reading it. If you do or don't leave a review either way. Also if you have questions about the novel you could comment under this review and I will gladly answer.