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Author, it is a good read. But for the love of God, could you use Gammerly or a sentence checking program? Your sentences constantly run on and you're not using periods or question marks for character dialog. It makes it a slog to read through since my brain has to constantly correct your sentencing structures on its own to figure out what is going on. They have free software, please use it? It will help you learn to be a better writer.
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WHERE IS THE REST?!?!?! WHERE ARE THE OTHER CHAPTERS?!?!?!?! Moje more, moje more Moje more, moje more Moje more, moje more Moje more, moje more Ni do zadnjeg leta, ni do kraja sveta Sudbina je moja kleta Moje more, moje more Moje more Niko neće džanum Ni za živu glavu Da mi leči ranu Niko neće džanum More! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am an author too back them made a lot mistakes that I only saw when I reread after a few years and I gotta say some part of the story is kinda boring and some are just so so. I have no qualms about the story but sometimes I got this boredom while reading some chapters. I like it over all.
No lo abandones 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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simply a mixture of repeated things from other works, neighbor of the spider man, gods coming to give things to him FOR NO logical reason, super genius that befriends a fantastic quartet and of course could not miss the super perfect appearance that makes him attractive, literally a lots of clichés together and all this happens in less than 10 chapters, honestly if I continue reading sme doubts there will be some moment when he becomes a woman's slave and makes a harem easily with his super perfect body
Overall it is good, it's just that MC is a bit too carefree where he can be ready make his condition at best like *Absolute-Condition* Via his *Metapotence* but he doesn't. But it going good also waiting for some action to, also if MC get little bit of Sun-Wukong playfulness and comedy would be better for story! ■ Metapotence POWER/ABILITY TO: Do anything. The power to do anything. Simplified expression of Omnipotence. Capabilities: Metapotence is purely centered on Omnipotence as the ability to "do absolutely anything and everything," rather than "being supremely almighty in every sense." Users are literally able to do anything, regardless of how contradictory or paradoxical it may be, and with ease, accomplish unquestionably impossible feats just by wanting it. The user can perfectly replicate the effects of any power, as they hold power infinitely beyond logic and understanding, fundamentally allowing them to achieve whatever they want, in any way they want, both limitlessly and perfectly. Their power automatically overrides all opposing forces and abilities completely, like they didn't even exist in the first place. Applications/Uses: • Absolute Change: Change anything. • Absolute Will: have a Will that can change and command all. • Absolute Wish: Grant any wish without any limitations. • Absolute Destruction: Destroy anything, even things that can restore anything can be completely destroyed with no way of reversing the effect. • Absolute Attack: Have an attack so powerful that no matter how great your defense is, it still won't protect you. • Absolute Erasure: Erasing anything from existence to the point where it cannot be reversed and even returning back isn't safe. • Absolute Manipulation: manipulate all absolute powers and forces • Meta Manipulation: Manipulate all meta powers • Supernatural Manipulation: Manipulate all supernatural powers. • Absolute Invincibility: Be completely unbeatable. • Autopotence: Have absolute control over their own existence. • Freedom: Be free from absolutely all boundaries and limitations. • Origin Transcendence: Transcend your origin. • Rule Transcendence: Be beyond all rules and laws. • Science-Magic Ascendancy: Have capabilities beyond what magic and science could ever hope to achieve. • Omnifarious: Take on any shape or form. • Absolute Restoration: Restore anything back to its original state. • Alpha Reality: Manipulate all realities. • Omega Reality: can create, shape and manipulate with absolute authority the Omega Reality, the one encompassing the conclusion/finale to all realities and where all concepts end. • Author Authority: Be the author/writer of existence. • Cosmic Otherness: Be completely distinct from anything and everything. • Dual Warping: Manipulate reality rationally and irrationally. • Complete Arsenal: Have All absolute, unbound and perfect powers/abilities regardless. • Etherius Warping: being able warp the ethereal on a omnipotence scale. • Indeterminacy: Have immeasurable levels of power that cannot be understood or defined. • Logic Manipulation: Manipulate logic and reason. • Logic Defiance: Defy what is logical and rational. • Meta Immunity Bypassing: Bypass all immunities. • Mentifery: Achieve any desired change to reality by thought alone. • Meta Ability Creation: Create any powers or abilities. • Meta-Concept Manipulation: Manipulate concepts that are incomprehensible and beyond understanding. • Meta Event Manipulation: Manipulate all events at any time on an unlimited scale. • Meta Luck: Have infinite luck. • Meta Power Immunity: Be immune to all powers that have existed, currently exist, and will ever exist. • Meta Power Manipulation: Manipulate any/all powers on this wiki and beyond perfectly. • Meta Summoning: Summon absolutely any object or entity. • Omnificence: Create absolute anything no matter how impossible it may appear to be. • Absolute Recreation: Recreate anything so perfectly that it is indistinguishable from the original. • Omni-Manipulation: Manipulation of all things. • Absolute Force Manipulation: Manipulate all forces on an almighty level. • Apocalyptic Force Manipulation • Primordial Force Manipulation • Omniverse Manipulation: Manipulate all universes. • Selective Transcendence/Absolute Transcendence: Selectively/completely transcend anything and everything. • Supreme Voice: The power to say anything and it happens • Ultimate Power: Have power that is the ultimate force. • Universal Irreversibility: Perform actions and cause events that are irreversible. • Unity: Be one with everything. • Tetralogy: user has the ability to use the combined forces of science, magic, divinity and philosophy, giving the user potentially unlimited power over the four concepts. • Autopotence: The power to be omnipotent over oneself. Personalized version of Omnipotence.The users are all-powerful over themselves, including their existence. • Conceptual Transcendence: The power to transcend any and qall concepts. • Ultipotence: The ability to possess truly unlimited raw power. Basic expression of Omnipotence. To summarize: Ultipotence is the potential to do anything. Variations: • Almighty Magic: Users possess and can use magic of omnipotent nature, entailing omnipotence, but in what we know as magic and everything associated, related and branched out from it. This includes the esoteric, mystical and supernatural. Essentially, the user is an Omnipotent being, which means the caliber of magic possessed surpasses all the rules. Associations/Connections: • Omnipotence Trivia • It is possible for Metapotence and Omnipotence to coexist. Example: A Metapotent being existing in relation to The Omnipotent (as an individual manifestation of The Omnipotent being). • Despite the similarities between Omnipotence and Metapotence, they are not the same powers: • Omnipotence is to be understood as the state of being truly almighty, while Metapotence is to be understood as the ability to perform almighty actions. • While Omnipotence possesses all attributes and qualities such as being absolutely perfect, eternal and all knowing, it is not a requirement for Metapotence though it can achieve them at anytime. • Omnipotence can't be attained, Metapotence can and while there can only be One Omnipotent being per fictional setting, this is not the case for Metapotent beings depending on the circumstances. Example: • There can be multiple Metapotent beings if they are hypostasis or individual manifestations of an Omnipotent being. (A specific example of this is God, Christ, The Holy Spirit, and The Angel of The Lord). • One Metapotent being had always existed while the other ascended to this position. (For example, The Law of Identity and Akuto Sai). • The story showing or mentioning multiple characters who exist in a position of grandeur and are able to accomplish anything. (Examples of this are The Creators, Featherine Augustus Aurora and Maria Ushiromiya). • It’s a rule on the wiki that Omnipotence absolutely can't be achieved via other powers or otherwise, however there’s nothing stopping an author from writing a story where a character achieves it. There are character examples of this listed in the known users (Godhead Pickle Inspector, Kami Tenchi, etc). But for the sake of the Omnipotence page's description and wiki stability, all character examples of Achieving Omnipotence will be listed here instead of the Omnipotence page. • There are five types of Metapotent beings: • Type 1: An individual character who exists in relation to The Omnipotent being, as a way for it to be understood by other characters in the setting. (Examples: Jesus Christ, Barbelo, Metatron (Unsong) and Void Shiki). • Type 2: An Omnipotent being performing any action within the setting. (Examples; God, Para Brahman, Bathala, The Supernormal State, Supreme Archetype, God (Unsong), Lord of Nightmares/L-sama, and Eru Ilúvatar). • Type 3: A character who has shown to be able to accomplish absurdly ridiculous and impossible feats with no effort or difficulty within a setting with no further context given explaining the nature of their powers. (Examples; Creasion and Minus). • Type 4: Characters with a description that may qualify them to be users of Omnipotence, however, there's not enough evidence or information to support that they truly are. (Examples; Undoubtedly First, Supreme Consciousness, and The White Light). • Type 5: A character who ascends to become the sole absolute almighty within a setting. This character must have firm evidence to prove this such as; being shown, portrayed, or mentioned to exist above all others in the setting, never being shown to have any type of flaws, limitations or weaknesses, have power over almost if not everyone else in the setting combined, etc. (Example; Godhead Pickle Inspector, Kami Tenchi). Thank You! Yours Truly- Reader.
Welp if you like forced plot, plot holes the size of galaxies and general asinine nonsense you'll love this story. Otherwise run away and don't waste your time on this trash.
I would really like to see more of the kingdom building stuff and its interactions tho, you dont really so much of these
what i dont get is why do you keep the chapters short cause we can see it's only a paragraph you separate to make " more chapters" but it's not. We aren't stupid.
hmm it's quite good actually, maybe it's derived from fanfiction.net marvel: path forward but just a little bit selfish.
Where you at? it's been a while you posted a chapter so what's taking so long? And make it a harem HAREM!HAREM!HAREM! HAREM! HAREM!HAREM! HAREM!
is this dropped ??[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP. Thanks- Reader!
Empezó muy bien , pero el autor luego lo arruino con el desarrollo , se centro demasiado en elysium y muy poco el las relaciones de los personajes. NO EXISTE Acción alguna en esta ficción , más un cumplimiento deseos de los Op que puede ser , no hay contratiempos ,enemigos de su nivel, ni obstáculos. Mediocre debo decir .
Story is good and is based on marvel comics rather than your typical MCU which is most of the fanfic is based on, MC is rather intelligent and dumb at the same time. Having fun reading it. A rather unique writing style though. Keep the good work author nim.
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interesting story and unique ideas, but the thing is that's all there is to it. The story is basically boring since we clearly have no clear antagonist to contest the MC with. Its basically a story where the MC is in Creative Mode like minecraft yet has no one to display the power to so its basically pointless.
It's entertaining and fun to read, don't let negative people get you down and use it to improve yourself and prove them wrong. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!
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*Chef's kiss* Definitely one of the best. The writing quality is good and can be understood even with its flaws, story development is slow but its okay, character design is good with all the OP-ness and etc, updating stability is good but the chapters be gone immediately T-T... World background based on marvel is good...
Author, it is a good read. But for the love of God, could you use Gammerly or a sentence checking program? Your sentences constantly run on and you're not using periods or question marks for character dialog. It makes it a slog to read through since my brain has to constantly correct your sentencing structures on its own to figure out what is going on. They have free software, please use it? It will help you learn to be a better writer.
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WHERE IS THE REST?!?!?! WHERE ARE THE OTHER CHAPTERS?!?!?!?! Moje more, moje more Moje more, moje more Moje more, moje more Moje more, moje more Ni do zadnjeg leta, ni do kraja sveta Sudbina je moja kleta Moje more, moje more Moje more Niko neće džanum Ni za živu glavu Da mi leči ranu Niko neće džanum More! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am an author too back them made a lot mistakes that I only saw when I reread after a few years and I gotta say some part of the story is kinda boring and some are just so so. I have no qualms about the story but sometimes I got this boredom while reading some chapters. I like it over all.
No lo abandones 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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simply a mixture of repeated things from other works, neighbor of the spider man, gods coming to give things to him FOR NO logical reason, super genius that befriends a fantastic quartet and of course could not miss the super perfect appearance that makes him attractive, literally a lots of clichés together and all this happens in less than 10 chapters, honestly if I continue reading sme doubts there will be some moment when he becomes a woman's slave and makes a harem easily with his super perfect body
Overall it is good, it's just that MC is a bit too carefree where he can be ready make his condition at best like *Absolute-Condition* Via his *Metapotence* but he doesn't. But it going good also waiting for some action to, also if MC get little bit of Sun-Wukong playfulness and comedy would be better for story! ■ Metapotence POWER/ABILITY TO: Do anything. The power to do anything. Simplified expression of Omnipotence. Capabilities: Metapotence is purely centered on Omnipotence as the ability to "do absolutely anything and everything," rather than "being supremely almighty in every sense." Users are literally able to do anything, regardless of how contradictory or paradoxical it may be, and with ease, accomplish unquestionably impossible feats just by wanting it. The user can perfectly replicate the effects of any power, as they hold power infinitely beyond logic and understanding, fundamentally allowing them to achieve whatever they want, in any way they want, both limitlessly and perfectly. Their power automatically overrides all opposing forces and abilities completely, like they didn't even exist in the first place. Applications/Uses: • Absolute Change: Change anything. • Absolute Will: have a Will that can change and command all. • Absolute Wish: Grant any wish without any limitations. • Absolute Destruction: Destroy anything, even things that can restore anything can be completely destroyed with no way of reversing the effect. • Absolute Attack: Have an attack so powerful that no matter how great your defense is, it still won't protect you. • Absolute Erasure: Erasing anything from existence to the point where it cannot be reversed and even returning back isn't safe. • Absolute Manipulation: manipulate all absolute powers and forces • Meta Manipulation: Manipulate all meta powers • Supernatural Manipulation: Manipulate all supernatural powers. • Absolute Invincibility: Be completely unbeatable. • Autopotence: Have absolute control over their own existence. • Freedom: Be free from absolutely all boundaries and limitations. • Origin Transcendence: Transcend your origin. • Rule Transcendence: Be beyond all rules and laws. • Science-Magic Ascendancy: Have capabilities beyond what magic and science could ever hope to achieve. • Omnifarious: Take on any shape or form. • Absolute Restoration: Restore anything back to its original state. • Alpha Reality: Manipulate all realities. • Omega Reality: can create, shape and manipulate with absolute authority the Omega Reality, the one encompassing the conclusion/finale to all realities and where all concepts end. • Author Authority: Be the author/writer of existence. • Cosmic Otherness: Be completely distinct from anything and everything. • Dual Warping: Manipulate reality rationally and irrationally. • Complete Arsenal: Have All absolute, unbound and perfect powers/abilities regardless. • Etherius Warping: being able warp the ethereal on a omnipotence scale. • Indeterminacy: Have immeasurable levels of power that cannot be understood or defined. • Logic Manipulation: Manipulate logic and reason. • Logic Defiance: Defy what is logical and rational. • Meta Immunity Bypassing: Bypass all immunities. • Mentifery: Achieve any desired change to reality by thought alone. • Meta Ability Creation: Create any powers or abilities. • Meta-Concept Manipulation: Manipulate concepts that are incomprehensible and beyond understanding. • Meta Event Manipulation: Manipulate all events at any time on an unlimited scale. • Meta Luck: Have infinite luck. • Meta Power Immunity: Be immune to all powers that have existed, currently exist, and will ever exist. • Meta Power Manipulation: Manipulate any/all powers on this wiki and beyond perfectly. • Meta Summoning: Summon absolutely any object or entity. • Omnificence: Create absolute anything no matter how impossible it may appear to be. • Absolute Recreation: Recreate anything so perfectly that it is indistinguishable from the original. • Omni-Manipulation: Manipulation of all things. • Absolute Force Manipulation: Manipulate all forces on an almighty level. • Apocalyptic Force Manipulation • Primordial Force Manipulation • Omniverse Manipulation: Manipulate all universes. • Selective Transcendence/Absolute Transcendence: Selectively/completely transcend anything and everything. • Supreme Voice: The power to say anything and it happens • Ultimate Power: Have power that is the ultimate force. • Universal Irreversibility: Perform actions and cause events that are irreversible. • Unity: Be one with everything. • Tetralogy: user has the ability to use the combined forces of science, magic, divinity and philosophy, giving the user potentially unlimited power over the four concepts. • Autopotence: The power to be omnipotent over oneself. Personalized version of Omnipotence.The users are all-powerful over themselves, including their existence. • Conceptual Transcendence: The power to transcend any and qall concepts. • Ultipotence: The ability to possess truly unlimited raw power. Basic expression of Omnipotence. To summarize: Ultipotence is the potential to do anything. Variations: • Almighty Magic: Users possess and can use magic of omnipotent nature, entailing omnipotence, but in what we know as magic and everything associated, related and branched out from it. This includes the esoteric, mystical and supernatural. Essentially, the user is an Omnipotent being, which means the caliber of magic possessed surpasses all the rules. Associations/Connections: • Omnipotence Trivia • It is possible for Metapotence and Omnipotence to coexist. Example: A Metapotent being existing in relation to The Omnipotent (as an individual manifestation of The Omnipotent being). • Despite the similarities between Omnipotence and Metapotence, they are not the same powers: • Omnipotence is to be understood as the state of being truly almighty, while Metapotence is to be understood as the ability to perform almighty actions. • While Omnipotence possesses all attributes and qualities such as being absolutely perfect, eternal and all knowing, it is not a requirement for Metapotence though it can achieve them at anytime. • Omnipotence can't be attained, Metapotence can and while there can only be One Omnipotent being per fictional setting, this is not the case for Metapotent beings depending on the circumstances. Example: • There can be multiple Metapotent beings if they are hypostasis or individual manifestations of an Omnipotent being. (A specific example of this is God, Christ, The Holy Spirit, and The Angel of The Lord). • One Metapotent being had always existed while the other ascended to this position. (For example, The Law of Identity and Akuto Sai). • The story showing or mentioning multiple characters who exist in a position of grandeur and are able to accomplish anything. (Examples of this are The Creators, Featherine Augustus Aurora and Maria Ushiromiya). • It’s a rule on the wiki that Omnipotence absolutely can't be achieved via other powers or otherwise, however there’s nothing stopping an author from writing a story where a character achieves it. There are character examples of this listed in the known users (Godhead Pickle Inspector, Kami Tenchi, etc). But for the sake of the Omnipotence page's description and wiki stability, all character examples of Achieving Omnipotence will be listed here instead of the Omnipotence page. • There are five types of Metapotent beings: • Type 1: An individual character who exists in relation to The Omnipotent being, as a way for it to be understood by other characters in the setting. (Examples: Jesus Christ, Barbelo, Metatron (Unsong) and Void Shiki). • Type 2: An Omnipotent being performing any action within the setting. (Examples; God, Para Brahman, Bathala, The Supernormal State, Supreme Archetype, God (Unsong), Lord of Nightmares/L-sama, and Eru Ilúvatar). • Type 3: A character who has shown to be able to accomplish absurdly ridiculous and impossible feats with no effort or difficulty within a setting with no further context given explaining the nature of their powers. (Examples; Creasion and Minus). • Type 4: Characters with a description that may qualify them to be users of Omnipotence, however, there's not enough evidence or information to support that they truly are. (Examples; Undoubtedly First, Supreme Consciousness, and The White Light). • Type 5: A character who ascends to become the sole absolute almighty within a setting. This character must have firm evidence to prove this such as; being shown, portrayed, or mentioned to exist above all others in the setting, never being shown to have any type of flaws, limitations or weaknesses, have power over almost if not everyone else in the setting combined, etc. (Example; Godhead Pickle Inspector, Kami Tenchi). Thank You! Yours Truly- Reader.
Welp if you like forced plot, plot holes the size of galaxies and general asinine nonsense you'll love this story. Otherwise run away and don't waste your time on this trash.
I would really like to see more of the kingdom building stuff and its interactions tho, you dont really so much of these
what i dont get is why do you keep the chapters short cause we can see it's only a paragraph you separate to make " more chapters" but it's not. We aren't stupid.
hmm it's quite good actually, maybe it's derived from fanfiction.net marvel: path forward but just a little bit selfish.
Where you at? it's been a while you posted a chapter so what's taking so long? And make it a harem HAREM!HAREM!HAREM! HAREM! HAREM!HAREM! HAREM!
is this dropped ??[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP. Thanks- Reader!
Empezó muy bien , pero el autor luego lo arruino con el desarrollo , se centro demasiado en elysium y muy poco el las relaciones de los personajes. NO EXISTE Acción alguna en esta ficción , más un cumplimiento deseos de los Op que puede ser , no hay contratiempos ,enemigos de su nivel, ni obstáculos. Mediocre debo decir .
Story is good and is based on marvel comics rather than your typical MCU which is most of the fanfic is based on, MC is rather intelligent and dumb at the same time. Having fun reading it. A rather unique writing style though. Keep the good work author nim.
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Not bad but it's not my type of story tbh .................................................................. .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
interesting story and unique ideas, but the thing is that's all there is to it. The story is basically boring since we clearly have no clear antagonist to contest the MC with. Its basically a story where the MC is in Creative Mode like minecraft yet has no one to display the power to so its basically pointless.
It's entertaining and fun to read, don't let negative people get you down and use it to improve yourself and prove them wrong. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!
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*Chef's kiss* Definitely one of the best. The writing quality is good and can be understood even with its flaws, story development is slow but its okay, character design is good with all the OP-ness and etc, updating stability is good but the chapters be gone immediately T-T... World background based on marvel is good...
not worth reading, it's dumb asf oʻooooooo