Marcelinho_Ggazeli

Marcelinho_Ggazeli

male LV 10
2020-11-07 加入 Brazil
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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_Ggazeli
2 years ago
Posted

First of all, the power system here doesn't exist, the MC defeats enemies with 2 or 3 GREAT KINGDOMS of power difference, which makes the reader experience shit as he loses the desire to read about higher cultivation realms, not to mention that this story comes down to the MC being a babysitter for a little girl while hiding her cultivation, I can define this work with one word, BORING

Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_Ggazeli
2 years ago
Posted

I started reading and I thought it would be good, but soon my illusion was destroyed, the MC only has female disciples, that is, it is not a master-disciple relationship but a harem breeder, besides when he gains a little power that is he starts treating everyone else with arrogance like a young master, even in his own sect, not to mention that every chapter the author needs to write how handsome the protagonist is, maybe that's the way to justify the low intelligence of all the female characters of this work I just wanted a cultivation work about a good sect master, but most only accept women in the sect to fuck and have no sect development

Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_Ggazeli
2 years ago
Replied to ChatterboxV2

Here in Brazil, in our dubbing of naruto, the country is called the country of grass, I created this medicine, I didn't copy it from any Chinese, just search the chapters on google and see

"red hair, bite healing jutsu, grass earth...wouldn't you be Karin's mother-to-be?" Mune thought

super medical ninja

super medical ninja

Anime & Comics · Marcelinho_Ggazeli

Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_Ggazeli
2 years ago
Replied to CharAznable

mentiroso não é, ele é filho do caveira vermelha, se o titulo fosse herdeiro da hydra seria outra coisa

Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_Ggazeli
2 years ago
Replied to omnikinesis

He's already using it, the infinite skill basically creates a space around him, he feels things and has his senses about the space around him, but he's going to further develop his skills, I just wanted to give some focus to the main skills offensive and defensive, soon he will train other strong skills

Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_Ggazeli
2 years ago
Commented

Roger really exists, he created a robot called Box to use instead of his body, but I changed his story a little.

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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_Ggazeli
2 years ago
Commented

He could save his aunt using modern knowledge, for example, health problems and preventing blood loss.

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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_Ggazeli
2 years ago
Replied to Infinit

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A beautiful purple 1950s Ford was on the street, Adam was driving it.

i am son of the red skull

i am son of the red skull

Movies · Marcelinho_Ggazeli

Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_Ggazeli
2 years ago
Commented

30 seconds, ignore the minute there

"Fuck 30 seconds, just 30 seconds minutes I can keep infinity"

i am son of the red skull

i am son of the red skull

Movies · Marcelinho_Ggazeli

Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_Ggazeli
2 years ago
Replied to king_Gurra10

Yes, but his organization will be called Iron Cross