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摘要
[currant date] |1470|
[24 years before the great pirate era]
Ryū no Shima was an island located near the land of wano.
It was home to a clan of many highly skilled swordsmen that were said to be the descendants of the sword god ryuma, the island was a peaceful place one with amazing waterfalls, rivers, and grasslands.
One day pirates flying the jolly roger of the R.O.C.K.S pirates attacked the island leaving nothing behind except for a child... A boy no older than 5 years old
[Note] there will be no harems or anything like that this story is PG18 For it's graphic depictions of violence and death.
P.S this is my first ever time writing a fanfic or anything of the sort so don't judge me since I'm on my phone because autocorrect is a bitch
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I loved it!!!! there were somethings that were inconsistent like crocus joining way before god valley but it did not affect the storyline or developement at all there were tons of facinating concepts like people able to talk to their supreme grade sword (like a zanpaktou) and the way rocks is increasing in strenght the pacing till now is great and whitebeard relation with his crew. one last thing the one thing i loved about this novel ..............sike loved every part of it
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I've read a lot of books on this app and honestly this is a nice change of pace from the usual harem/System/reincarnation stories, So yeah keep up the good work
pretty good, but when his sword was commissioned the blacksmith asked "what type of sword do you use." MC said "wakizashi because it matches my size." make sense so far, but the blacksmith made a wakizashi over a few years(i think) when it would make sense for the MC to be using a katana to match his size. dude made a supreme grade sword even though it would make sense for the MC to not use that type of sword anymore. this just ruined it for me along with spelling and grammar mistakes as well as you swapping " and ' making it 'talking' and "thoughts"
I’m currantly at chapter 33 and the story is pretty great so far It’s a bit dark but the story telling and character development so far is ok not the best but I do recommend reading the story so I’m not going to spoil anything for everyone who wants to read but I give this story a 7 out of 5 burgers
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卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1 : Calm before the storm
- 1 Prologue 1 years ago
- 2 (Chapter 1) Trouble is stirring 1 years ago
- 3 (Chapter 2) Black Smith 1 years ago
- 4 (Chapter 3) Night sky 1 years ago
- 5 (Not a chapter) 1 years ago
- 6 (Chapter 4) Pirates and blacksmiths 1 years ago
- 7 (Chapter 5) Forest and Training 1 years ago
- 8 (Chapter 6) Pirates and friends? 1 years ago
- 9 (Chapter 7) Ship's and training 1 years ago
- 10 (Chapter 8) Capital Meeting and Friends? 1 years ago
- 11 (Chapter 9) with great power comes great res- Hush that's from spiderman 1 years ago
- 12 (Chapter 10) Marines and forgiveness 1 years ago
- 13 (Chapter 11) Delivery and Family 1 years ago
- 14 (Chapter 12) Strange fruit 1 years ago
- 15 I'm Taking a little break 1 years ago
- 16 (Chapter 13) Beast vs Samurai 1 years ago
- 17 (Chapter 14) Wano and Blades 1 years ago
- 18 (Chapter 15) Supreme blade's and admiral's 1 years ago
- 19 (Chapter 16) So it's today...? 1 years ago
- 20 (Chapter 17) Birthday and spirit 1 years ago
- 21 (Chapter 18) beginning to an end 1 years ago
卷 2 : Ashes
- 22 (Chapter 19) Under Attack 1 years ago
- 23 (Chapter 20) Destruction 1 years ago
- 24 (Chapter 21) Death and Despair 1 years ago
- 25 (Chapter 22) Black Inferno 1 years ago
- 26 (Chapter 23) Beast's and Tremors 1 years ago
- 27 (Chapter 24) Fallen Swordsman 1 years ago
- 28 (Chapter 25) New arrival 1 years ago
- 29 (Chapter 26) Found beneath the Ash 1 years ago
- 30 (Chapter 27) Dreams 1 years ago
- 31 (Chapter 28) Pirates vs Marines 1 years ago
- 32 (Chapter 29) Conclusion and Conquering 1 years ago
- 33 (Chapter 30) Failure and Stars 1 years ago
- 34 (Chapter 31) Koi fish and waterfall 1 years ago
- 35 (Chapter 32) Newest member 1 years ago
- 36 (Chapter 33) Instruments and fatherhood 1 years ago
- 37 (Chapter 34) Leaving Wano 1 years ago
- 38 (Chapter 35) Young Prodigy and victory 1 years ago
- 39 (Chapter 36) Meeting and Generals 1 years ago
- 40 (Chapter 37) frustration and journey to the blues 1 years ago
- 41 (Chapter 38) War on the Horizon 1 years ago
- 42 (Chapter 39) Figerland's and stranded child 1 years ago
- 43 (Chapter 40) Douglas Bullet 1 years ago
- 44 (Chapter 41) Capture and Recruitment 1 years ago
- 45 (Chapter 42) Training and party 1 years ago
- 46 (Chapter 43) New mission and New island 1 years ago
- 47 (Chapter 44) Wanted posters and Conquerer's 1 years ago
卷 3 : The War Of Blood Peak Island and time skip
- 48 (Chapter 45) Unwanted Guests and Declaration of war 1 years ago
- 49 (Chapter 46) Start of the war 1 years ago
- 50 (Chapter 47) Battle Rages on General's Vs Admirals 1 years ago
- 51 (Chapter 48) Recruitment 1 years ago
- 52 (Chapter 49) Ancient Weapon 1 years ago
- 53 (Chapter 50) Mayday! 1 years ago
- 54 Not a chapter 1 years ago
I say that a lot of books are good and what not, yet so far this is honestly a good book I do recommend this due to it being an entertaining slow-paced book so check it out. And....