My Daemon System

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Zurbluris

Its nice to see another author from Nigeria here, hay check out my novel.

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Zurbluris

Bro your book is amazing, but I this k you should change the book cover, to attract more people, because it kinda sad not seeing this book get the attention it deserves

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QuantumVoid

The plot is interesting! Writing style is awesome! Chapter's are too less author, upload more! (was trying to rhyme but failed miserably )

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Amera_Mee

This is not bad, the story is promising not gonna lie, it's good. It may be a bit early to write a review but am not a picky reader. please write more chapters.

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Moon_light16

Men! thank God it was a dream 😂😂 Hikes! Your writing is top notch, expressing in simple words that are easy to understand. The book all good. Must say Jacob is really a tough one. Good luck in your book. This book is going to reach great heights.

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Dixerqua

Dive into a realm of boundless imagination and exhilarating action with this remarkable fantasy novel that boasts a world-building prowess beyond compare. From the very first page, I was captivated because the novel is so well-written, keep up the good work!

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little_black_horse

The story is interesting, but somehow there are some paragraphs that seem too short, and there are some sentences that are repeated. Maybe adding details and reducing repetitive sentences will make the story much more interesting. Keep up the good work author!

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_Casper_

Looks like I need to change my review, so yeah, here's a new review, [1] Writing quality » Awesome, the author has a large and diverse vocabulary and provides a detailed Description. 5stars. [2] Story Development » It's still in the growth stage, but I have high hopes. 4stars. [3] Character Design » Growth phase, but up until now, he is definitely not a wuss and can talk normally to others, {Not like those dumb MCs who bite their tongue while talking}. 4 stars. [4] Updating stability » 11 chaps a week what else do you want? 5 stars. [5] World Background » A little different, { In the past, there were some alien species waging war against humanity, but later they patch up, and the government doesn't want the same shii to happen again, so a military school type thing was created to train students.} 4 stars. Now what I did not like. First, the conversation sometimes feels unnatural. So does the MC, not always but sometimes. And I guess that's it. If I find any mistakes in the future then I'll make sure to point them out.

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Mel_goddess123

An intriguing read with great writing skills, a really nice job done. A read I'll totally recommend

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Tama_Kun

I will give a short review.Overall everything is OK.after reading 5 chapters. there is a point made me thinking.about stat and skill. the author really hard work for that because I think it's not easy like-----------------Attack : 50Defense: 25Speed: 30etcI guess it's hard to make and hard to memories them. Great Job bro

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ChaosZefnir

I really like the descriptions of character’s emotions and the plot is capturing me so far. The only negative criticism I could give you, would be to re-edit your chapters to make sure there isn’t any unfinished sentences or mistakes.💯

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BLACK_KIRITO

this is really confusing sometimes I wonder who the main character is is it Adam or Jacob also some point the story changes entirely I don't understand what's happening the characters are really confusing and its just world background is confusing and everything about Adam is just weird story makes almost no sense I mean most of the characters I don't understand what is going on with them

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Aug_ust15

woah, the novel is amazing, I can almost feel the tension on the battleground, thought it was real😂🤣. Jacob's persistence is what we need in the world, the book is amazing, keep the chapters coming

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Junethephatcat

Regressor Mc, system, deamon, expansive world building and great action. Plenty of room fro great development the only problem is the updates!! upload more author!!

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ReyRizS

suuch a fire book cant wait for more good plot fire chapter 1 to 2 i hope for more chapter cause it realy was good i reccomend this book!! i hope others would enjoy reading................................ lez go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Vee_Uzomah

Story line is really nice. And I'm already falling in love with this story. Great work author😊😊

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ArcyWaterson

Nice plot, i like it i really like the writing style, but i want each chapter to be longer tho

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IncognitoAngel

It's an interesting concept with cool aspects and elements. I think you should work on the length of the chapters. Grammar is element you could work on as well. Great stuff though. Hope to see more.

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BLACK_ALPHA

To begin with the story is interesting it's like you get curious to know more and turn pages to read further by way great work.

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Ewu_Rama

I like the story plot and I did enjoy it from the first chap.