TWD: A New Beginning From the End of the World

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SrCuervo

Hello everyone. First of all thank you all for reading this novel, if you like the Twd universe this will be your home. I can be sure that as the story progresses, I will try to do my best for everyone to enjoy it. English is not my first language, so it would help me to receive advice. If this story is well received, I will try to write until the end as in my previous novel. Don't forget to support me on my P_treon: SrCuervo

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Newnoob

*sigh* I know sooner or later this will be dropped. It's just how it is, there are tonnes of TWD fic's but they all get dropped down the line. So this time, even though the expectations are high, I'm still reluctant to believe that it will continue for a long time. So please prove me wrong and write the best walking dead fic in webnovel history.

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Kirito_Gaming_9280

Lot of expectations for this fanfic because there are not many TWD fanfics

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WoahBuddy

I'm disappointed, but the author does an excellent job in terms of writing. I only read chapters one through eight. What I like about this story are the background and world-building. The author does a great job of giving us an image of the environment. I also like the storytelling and flow of the story. But it can be rigid and forceful. What I dislike most is the dialogue. It would have been better if the story had a Southern writing style. It's difficult for foreigners to understand, but it's what I wanted to see. Unfortunately, this story has an Asian resemblance, almost like an MTL. It would have been better to add strategic locations, like Wal-Mart, back when you could buy guns in the good old days. I would have liked to see more realism involved and fact-checking. Lastly, I didn't enjoy the repetitiveness of certain words and expressions. Expanding your vocabulary and finding other ways to express the MC would help. Overall, it's a decent 3.5 for me.

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DetachedDreamer

A really good story about a robot named Airon. I've wanted to read another walking dead fanfic for a while since the last one was dropped. Nice origin story, a well developing story that isn't too slow. almost a sense of kingdom building in his haste to prepare for the fall out which I like. The two problems I have are the MC is just a smart robot. Literally zero emotions, the author goes out of his way to point this awful aspect out over and over. Idk who would want to write about someone like this, who's only redeeming quality is he is smart. he does feel anxiety but thats manufactured from his past lives we have no comprehension of. His personality may be tributed to how his past lives went but that still doesn't justify why someone would want to read about him, so boring 😴, must make writing easier i guess tho. but at this point, he probably should of went to the afterlife since any personality has been sapped from him, he must of gone thru a lot. Second issue is his whole life and this plot seems to revolve around just surviving?.... well then what? whats next for a guy who's never happy or sad? Is there more to it or will he just be murdering, scheming, and building over and over again? lol im hoping some semblance of life returns to this man-robot because everything else about this story is topnotch.

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Marcia_05

the way the story is written gives a lot to be desired, it's what I see to improve, For the rest, it seems to me that the story is progressing well so far with an acceptable update speed

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streiz

I love this story. I actually like the MC, he is not stupid with just mindlessly saving others. He use his knowledge to the future wisely. And what I also love about this is the update stability. I wish the author wouldn't just drop this like other fan fiction stories.

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Fito

An interesting story, but normally very few The Walking Dead fic are finished, there is still no romance, nor any interest from the mc. It would be better if the mc had more emotions, sometimes he seems like some kind of terminator that wants to save humanity.

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RetMod

Must read for every TWD fan and Zombie fans MC is stronger then normal humans and I like that and he also gets **** done

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Quidanstealsnovels

Its never a good sign when the literal first word of the novel that being the chapter one name is spelt wrong. Gramma is horrible, the flow of reading so messed up. Keep using the characters full name for some reason. Its not really readable. Also the world is described like a cultivation novel, bunch of unneeded exaggerated describing words. Again Its barely readable which makes the entire story to me pointless.

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Kw0z

Thought I’d give this a try since it has so many chapters, but the grammar is genuinely just unbearable. Characters say things way too unnaturally, and even after skipping all the way to chapter 50, the robotic dialogue still hasn’t changed. Every character seems uptight, and never relaxed even in situations where they should be. I personally just think the author needs to improve his English so that everything doesn’t sound so formal.

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dannibell_wolf

❤️❤️❤️❤️ awesome I absolutely loved it! ❤️❤️❤️❤️ one of my favourite stories! I will definitely be checking out your other stories after this

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DaoistEKNXFw

Muy buena historia de TWD y muy buenas adaptaciones las que hizo, tiene más realismo del que pensaba originalmente, ésta si que es una historia que vale totalmente la pena leerla

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MightBeGay

Ok so this story has various problems but the story seems somewhat intresting so ill continue reading. The problem with grammar- Grammar in particular the sentence structure can be all over the place and confusing, the words used on the otherhand are generally spelt right. Also the author really likes to use full names, the full name of the Mc, his computer friend, Rick Grimes, and the other side characters which generally adds unneeded fluff to the text. Problems with formatting-Theres quite a lot of repetition and it can be quite unclear on whos speaking and to whom with random breaks in between speech, for example: "The cdc blah blah blah and that one doc blah blah" "And so and so on" This being cut in two despite it being the same character speaking which makes no sense. The author could really make great use of somekind of spellchecker like grammarly or get an editor to read his work before he published so that said editor could point out the mistakes in the chapter for the author to fix. Sorry for the long review just wanted to make one. Tldr: Lots of grammar mistakes(mainly sentence structure), kinda reads like a translation but seems intresting so ill continue to read

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Pablo_Lopes_1613

very good story continue[img=update][img=update]

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Lector567

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Daoist9QuQ3Q

Çok güzel bir hikaye zombiler hakkında şimdiye kadar okuduğum en iyi fankurgu sadece baş karakter fazla op gibi geldi ama diğer herşeyini ćok beğendim. Konuya uygun ama herşeyin daha güzel gelişmesini çok sevdim. Korku yerine insanlara umut vermesini umut olduğu sürece bir şekilde başarabileceklerini ve herkesin iyi yönlerini diğerleri ile paylaşmasını bayıldım.

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Marcus_whatever

Definitely worth your time reading..........👍😁👍,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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LGK_maore

no comment on the author's marvelous writting so here is my 5 stars from the begining cuz i know there is something awesome waiting for us🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Aj_Jason

amazing work ...can u make one where he's not so emotionless..,also love interest Maggie ..... again great work