In a mage world

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timeawayfromstress

how did he live 1000 years without dying with this mentality. mc without a brain. mc acting with his emotions............................................... ..

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Leema_Aon

I haven't read the book yet but the intro looks good, undying, op, system, reincarnation, system, herem, All in one book, am waiting for it to reach 60 chapter so I can start reading, I don't like waiting for updates

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Vee_High

shameless author review..... am really grateful to all those who reviewed the book, thanks to you all, I put quite some effort and also experienced a lot of stress, I only have five hours each day to write and am writing three books at the same time, still I still try my best to update this book to satisfy my readers, please keep supporting me, I will make this book legendary! !

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Anas_Ashraf_7677

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Account_nolonger

I liked the plot so far, The characters are interesting, and everything about the systems is explained briefly though I would advise you to write the events more clearly or give slight hints about the facts in the first chapter, it will help readers to understand the concept more. overall I enjoyed your story. great work.

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Sweet_Vanilla553

Hello hello,I thought it will be better if I left a review since I finished the first 5 chaps. First of all, your book cover has choosen perfectly. It's super cool and hot. That can attrack people. However, about the story I am satisfied. But I wanted to say won't it be better if you make your title as In A Mage World instead of using all simple spellings. I just got an idea like it make the quality to be law. I got an advise to share that the title should be like that. Your preference. ❤️ Keep going author...

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Ash_Smoker

I am writing this Because it's unfair that people gave it one star when it wasn't actually deserved ........... ........... Justices for the Novel

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Joethedeath

still writing this story? would love to know

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gg_gg_0642

nice story author is quite talented pacing is perfect character development is good too.

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Taylor9189

50 chapter preliminary review WQ: much to be desired for improvement, Google doc could help you fix most if not all errors, example you have a bad tendency not to space after a comma, shorthand I am or I'm to simply am, or you'll capitalize the first name but not the last i.e. John doe vs John Doe. SD: it's a slow build up that often times feels unnecessary. CD: The characters feel 2D, not really descriptive on their features. US: no real issues with updating. WB: it's laid out decently. Going out on a limb I see this is your first novel but it feels like you sampled other people's writings and tried to mesh them together, seeing as how this is your first novel it's OK, but when this story is concluded I encourage you to take some time and find your own style and build off that I've given this recommendation to a few authors and they haven't disappointed, so keep writing bud.

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Dacid_thegost

Great story so far, though I advise you get an editor to make it more understandable, not everyone understands English well and a small mistake can lead the reader astray. Still, it's an interesting book, each chapter always revolving around a single setting,I just hope you don't lock the chapters too soon

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Rena_des

It's ok, nice start for a first book, already have things to worry about even before reaching Niniola,so many people waiting for him already, though there are some typing errors I believe, it's a great book with great update speed. [img=recommend]

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Kain_Lena

What else can I say, I have to give it to you vee, this story do have substance, it's the first book am reading on this app, I don't usually have time for this and I don't know when I will come on this app again, but just know, this big sister loves your work 💓💓

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Amanda542

I only read the first ten chapters,but I think that's already worth giving a review,the story is indeed gaining light,I didn't even realize when I got to the tenth chapter. please increase numbers of daily chapters, this book is something

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Favour_Okon_5727

this is epic...so captivating, thrilling and adventurous

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Monkeysage69

Deffinetly worth the read👌👌 Good job author😺👌

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Philip_John_3596

Not bad, been interesting so far, wondering how life In school would be, don't disappoint me please,am betting on you,vee high. Although there are some things that are out of points, like characters description, environment description, it's still an interesting story. While I think the rate at which that Philip turned his son over to a stranger is a little too catchy, would you give your child to a stranger just because he's also a dad or something? hope to see more improvements in future chapters

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Kaniu

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AnotherMadKat

There's nothing too bad about this novel. Nothing too frustrating. The MC doesn't make you feel like ripping your hair off. But those kinda are the only things I could say are good. The world building is quite different and interesting I guess. But the chapters should be better wrote, the chapters are too short too. All is all is fine but it's a little too bland. And it's my personal opinion: most of the fun of the novel was stolen by the system, because it's sentient, also the system is not very well explained. The system is more powerful than the MC is every aspect, but it only tells the MC things when it 'feels' like it. In summary it's quite bland.

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Vee_High

Your author here. I just want to notify new readers because of the constant reminder I've been getting. There might be words or twist that might be mind bothering or out of place like personalities, place or speeches of various characters in the book. I want to let you know that there are definitely explanations and reasons for those things, you just have to read further and if by chance you don't find what you are looking for and you are still troubled, just leave a comment and I will clear your doubts. Thanks for reading and enjoy your time reading this story.