Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]

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Riverchalice441

I mean lets be honest with ourselves. Nobody writes and gives us such complete stories like Mister Immortal, our Gorilla Savior. Even having read the two preview chapter some weeks ago I know this is gonna be a fun journey.

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racecarsthegodcar

haven’t even read one chapter but knowing the arthor u get 10/5 if i could give u it but i guess u get my stones and a 5/5 review.

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CouchPotatoDandy

It's finally out 😆😆 A 5 star review for this novel also, no need to hesitate after 3 awesome finished stories💪 Now all that's left is to wait for more chapters 🤤🤣

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Theowl

If you are not an American, you will feel annoyed by reading this novel. The hero takes advantage of every opportunity to increase America's power and show it as a country of peace, even though it is not, while other countries such as Japan, Germany and Russia appear as villains in the main. It is similar to Chinese novels, but it is an American version

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SageOfSins

Nice story bro... But I don't know why, I can never seem to read past the first dozens of your chapters in all your fics. After some pages, something in my mind just says 'enough' and then I can't seem to enjoy the rest of fic anymore. Is it just me? I feel it is just me. Anyway seem to be progress toward a dope future plot based on first couple of chapters.

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godie

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ThePandaCritic

Let's start off with the positives. The grammar is excellent. The story is somewhat unique in a way, in that it doesn't follow the whole cannon timeline wholesale but has its own twist. Now, these are the areas I don't like. First, this story has a ton load of history, like a lot which I guess if you're into that it's fun but for me, it was boring why because he's already op and most of the interaction was him beating them up so I skipped most of it. Secondly, the story is biased toward the Americans which was slightly annoying. Third, why make a character so op but the villains he faces so nerf, either he kills them off-screen or they fight him with no sort of expertise. For example, the ancient one, are you telling someone whose master of the ancient arts is defeated so easily like she didn't even investigate his being an anomaly. please she should at least give him a run for his money. By no means is the story great, is ok at best to me. If you have nothing to read and wanna kill some time but it becomes a drag after a while.

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Selectials

Boringly done. People act like NPCs and don't notice anything. For example, how their old president does various tricks. ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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MAIDENLESS

Ukraine : "Vladimir- Kun please be gentle ". Vladimir-kun : "sorry Ukraine-chan ,I can't hold back anymore" . *squirts the entire 2nd Guards Motor Rifle Division into Kyev *

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Red_Gaming_6847

I like it but it feels to force at times and there are factual errors that annoying but base research would fix it such as the us Air Force was founded on 18 of September 1947 before it was know as United States Army Air Forces and before that it was United States Army Air Corps so you know research a bit I mean I didn’t that the USAAC was a thing I always thought that it was just USAAF and it took me five seconds to find that out Again I like it but I think it could be better

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KeiJu

Once i realised who the author is i just had to rate it 5 stars. this man has NEVER disappointed".............................................

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_Kioshi_Michio_

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FlowerOfEternity

The last time I posted a review on one of your stories was on Grandpa Universe...So hi 👋 😃 Anyway, here's my rating for the first 28 chapters so far (Coming from a Flower whose first language is not English, so don't hate on my grammar.): WQ: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ As always, it is top-notch. There are some exceptions to this, but in no way do they distract- or make the story unreadable. SoU: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 28 chapters in one day?! I'd give it 10/5...Bad jokes aside, based on the update schedule of MisterImmortal's previous stories, I can only assume this one will be the same. 1-2 chapters a day. SD: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ At the start, it was a bit rushed, but that is mostly because of a massive information dump happening in the early chapters to build Hector's background. After the first 4-6 chapters, it will slow down a bit. CD: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ As always, MisterImmortal manages to pull off a very likeable main character. Personally, I love when the MC is an old man/woman. I feel it adds a sort of mystery and uniqueness. Besides that, Hector has been shown to be absolutely ruthless to his enemies, but loving to those he views as family. (I am looking at you Moony...and Satan 😉) Furthermore, he uses his knowledge to his advantage, planning ahead for the future. WB: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ It is marvel. What could go wrong? I know it is an AU, but that is exactly right up my alley. Concerning the changes Hector has made - I can only say that I enjoy them 😃. This is the first time I have seen a fanfiction with an MC being REALLY involved in politics. Usually, they just use their knowledge about the future to invest and become multi-billionaires and not much more. Furthermore, MisterImmortal has clearly (to the extent of my knowledge) done his research concerning WW2. Total score: 4.8 PS: Can't spoil much in the review. If you want to know what changes Hector has made and how it affects the MCU, please read it yourself. I promise you (most likely) won't regret it. Thanks for taking the time to read through my review/rant. I hope you have a nice day 😅.

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_Artemis69

I would really like it if Peggy Carter slept with the MC at least once, so knowing she didn't, I'm a little bit disappointed ---------------------------------------

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HentaiElderVampire

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DaoOfWeed

So it has begin……

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Shadow_1245

Man this dude is a complete package instead of giving us half assed stories. I enjoy what you do keep it up. Looking forward to this one. Good Luck.

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trueidiocy_577

I'm not american and I still love this fic. Great storyline, likeable MC

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SORCERERSUPREME_7

I read your stories and they are really great.... I hope this is also great.... I just have question why is mc in your story is old man, are you perhaps a old person or some one old inspired you to make nice stories.... Just thought in my mind......

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_Jo1Jo2Jo3Kurdi_

Writing: OK with little mistakes (4star) Story development: It is good but some things would be better if it was different in my opinion sind the development is little to slow for me.(3stars) Character Design: OK but would be little better (4star) update stability: Don't know am still new and not at latest chapter so thats why a neutral good 4 star. World Background: Well its Marvel with little changes so 4 stars (Am about chapter 45) Overall Currently REVIEW: 3.8