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Kaz, your average 15-year-old, socially inept weeb, suddenly wakes up in the middle of a forest in the body of a ten-year-old with a magic Gi and healing powers. However, unlike normal teenagers, this was actually the first time he had left his house, and he strongly "disliked" his parents, so he got over it pretty fast.
He spent a year living somewhat peacefully (most of the time) and training using exercise regimens he remembered from the internet. He quickly notices that he was able to train at inhuman speeds with seemingly no limit. The speed can be chalked up to his healing powers repairing his muscles the second they tear during training, but the no-limit thing confused him. And when he finally decides to venture out of the forest (kind of), he finally figured it out.
Right in front of him, towering thousands of kilometers into the sky and reaching well above the clouds, was Korin's Tower.
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There will be no romance involving the mc, as he couldn't care less about that. However I will be writing a lot of romance between the side character (at least Ill try to).
Also, the mc is one of those types that doesn't like to kill his enemy, I know that a lot of people don't like that, but there is a good reason for it. They are in the world of Dragonball after all, and death basically has no real consequences, so he thinks that its better to either make them his friend, or seal them away, because killing them will just make them mad and more of a threat when they inevitably return (Frieza).
Please leave criticism, just make it constructive, and don't be an Asshole about it. Thanks for reading.
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Good story so far with a nice development. I also how the mc is human with no overpowered cheats ( to many saiyan mc dbz fanfic) so keep up the good work author
That kind of story is a good example of why I still endure and read badly written or translated fanfics. For shot, I just want stuff to happen. This fanfic doesn't have that and you can feel it, the boredom is real. This fanfic is of high quality for this website and I hope the author won't drop it. Reject humanity, become monkey.
I love the story and the progressive of the character your mc is that he given a gift but not something op lol hope kaz stay human then realized he can change race which make the story full again I lose interest in it.... Anyway great stuff!!!
So in my option, the story is pretty good! The main character doesn't feel like a mary sue, at least not yet. But I wonder why he didn't tell Korin the truth about how he knows King Piccolo will return.
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The story has a good potential. Keep up the good work author!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Very good story , I recommend reading it.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.