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XElenea

This review is solely intended to inform you, the current readers, and potentially those who intend to read, that this Fan-fiction is a translated version of the original and contains my personal edits. My purpose in translating this fan-fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and as I am quite interested in this fan-fiction. And as you may know, fan-fiction of this nature usually contains some rather unpleasant elements, and as I have been reading it up to now, there is quite a bit of poison and the author's personal bias embedded within. However, don't worry, I will sacrifice and act as the poison tester for all of you and make edits to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan-fiction. So, you can rest assured if you are hesitant to read this type of fan-fiction due to concerns about poison. I will provide an edited version that is poison-free and devoid of the author's personal bias. That's all, and thank you.

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XElenea

NEW PROJECT!!! --- If you like this fanfiction, you will definitely like our other fanfiction, so feel free to visit our profile to read our new fanfiction: [Fate/Magus Path] In Fuyuki City, as an average man, Roy lives a calm and stable life every day that even Kira Yoshikage would envy. Adhering to the principle of staying a step ahead of disaster and running fast enough to avoid trouble, he leads a safe life in this dangerous world. However, his life trajectory begins to deviate drastically after being drawn into the massive magical ritual of the Holy Grail War. The Avenger known as the King of the Cavern extends a hand to him, and the Magus of Flowers offers applause for his story; the excitement of the tale is just beginning to unfold. The King of Knights, the King of Heroes, the King of Conqueror... stories continue to develop as he encounters countless heroes and writes new chapters of his life. Since being ordinary can no longer be guaranteed, it's time to start writing his own story. "The ending of the story will be decided by me."

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Mystero

This is a translation, what it means is that while translator did a good job, the novel it self is about a chinese protagonist in a japanese setting. Need to say more?

LV 13

Kiradeux

Good translation, but the source material has issues. Realistically, this should be called "Is it wrong to have Zero Creativity with Gate of Babylon in a dungeon?" because all the MC does is copy Gil and waste money. The irony about GoB is that it could kill most level 1 monsters with stones found in a field or firing a single Valis - but the MC never actually tries anything except copying Gil and being broke. Outside Context Powers on an OC or SI are fun, but if they're just going to mindlessly use them the exact same way as the original character and fail to progress, then the MC loses all identity and just sublimates under the original characters personality. The MC is completely bleh.

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AkashicLibrary

Pretty much average overall. Not much to the story. An average writing quality. Average idiot mc that wants a harem and talks about how he wants a harem. The story quality isnt the. Best but its somewhat readable. The way author writes some parts sound monotone and emotionless.

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MARLENE_ANGEL

THIS NOVEL MC IS JxAxCxKxAsZS OP WITH NO HEART WENT HE GET TO THE TOP,..KILLING WOMEN AND CHILDREN FOR POWER IN LATER CHAPTERS,,.HE LOSES HIS HUMAN HALF WENT IS ON TOP AND THAT MAKES THE NOVEL FEEL EMPTY

LV 13

Kono_Dio_na

went downhill in dxd volume. mc got a lot of things from gacha since the first world. but the mc completely has no creativity in using them. he just accepted the items and equipment as they were, not intending to develop something new. (noting that i didn't see kurohitsugi as a gacha reward) so if he can learn kido, he should be able to learn more, right? other than that, the mc became more trashy started from dxd volume

LV 14

Ram800

It’s alright I enjoyed it until the dxd arc, the power levels started to make little sense to me because dxd is vastly stronger then danmachi the author decided to balance it out which isn’t really something I enjoy. On a side note a lot of people don’t realize this is a translation.

LV 4

Dimas_Stream

After entering the world of DXD, the MC character turned very annoying and the quality of the story dropped drastically. And for new readers who want to read this novel, don't expect too much from the translated novel story from a Chinese novel.

LV 2

World_of_Songs

The novel start off good in danmichi world. As soon as it arrive at dxd it go down hill. Mc develop a superiority complex and take women left and right. I know this is a harem and have no problem until he start taking his friend's wife. The author go braindead like abt 20 chap mc mention 'bro before hoe' and now start lusting over his friend's wife. I swear bro gotta have cuck fetishes to write something like this

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Rocky_sequeira

Kindly start with high school dxd again it was good

LV 5

Lordmoonlight

Yea it was ok before world travel that’s all I got to say

LV 4

RS_1

I mostly skimmed through the chapter, it doesn't catch my interes or do I feel entertain reading it. but don't let my review prevent you from reading, maybe you'll like it maybe you don't ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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LutfiOii

I won't write much, in the end this is just a translated version, where this novel was not written directly and was only translated, I don't have much to say, the translator did a good job, while the creator of the original story should pay more attention to the plot.

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Spielar

I have to say that this story is fairly good when compared to other Chinese novels. The mc is overbearing, but at least the author tries to keep him using reason behind his actions. One of the biggest issues for me is that the author writes one segs scene and then never writes one again while constantly teasing about the mc having segs with others. The battle scenes are basic wuxia fighting style (without imagination.) The women are also not very imaginative and follow China's belief on how women should behave. (Doormats that spread their legs whenever their man asks.) While this book has a lot to be desired it also isn't the worst read. It could however have been much better if the author had more imagination and had a better understanding on actual human interaction.

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ACHILLES

It was good for about 180 chps and then he started bringing an oc to help him with another oc not related to dxd you just dragging it now and he just got with someone before he just felt like it i don't know why its pointless....

LV 14

Luohuo

this review is strictly based off the danmachi arc before mc used his world travel card and went to dxd verse. overall it was a good read. Mc is quite self centered and encapsulate his existence as the successor of gilgamesh. he is also the embodiment of Lust itself. Mc doesn't hesitate to grow his harem and is very honest as well. he grows stronger as he absorb desire of lust from his surrounding. he has also fkd freya too but he makes it clear that she would just be a casual segs friend type of thing rather then her joining the harem. freya here is pretty much depicted as a pretty high order hoe so if you like freya just beware. Mc got ais and tsubaki in the harem and also has fkd them too. Bell in the story is actually a female and Mc is protecting her a little till she becomes a hero. I think bell's LF is actually targeting Mc for her heroic growth here so she should still have the fast growth Bell canonical had. the Mc here is already stronger then Otter and is a Level 6. tbh Mc here is super OP and expect the power scaling to go wild. I just feel disappointed how many op skills Mc got in danmachi world and pretty much make the entire world a joke. for context he got so many bleach and seven deadly sins and the chess piece of dxd skills and bro even has weapons loke the signature weapon of kirito in sao then bleach weapons and even muramasa tho idk if that one is from fgo or other verse that it's not even funny. and the world is only danmachi at that time. it's a CN fanfic so expect the obvious. I think at this point imma take my leave from this one since I only started this one for danmachi verse and there isn't all that much for me to look forward to at this point.

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Trouxa_157

Thanks for the interesting story! I'm giving it five stars because I'm biased, as Gilgamesh is one of my favorite characters and I really like the Loki family too! May every day be mass chapter release day! Amen!

LV 11

alperen_baylan

the story at first was good, the MC had progressive strength development and it seemed interesting, but the stronger the MC got, the worse he felt to me as a reader, typical Chinese author, arrogant MC that thinks he has the right to do whatever he wants, at the beginning it was alright, but as i said it got worse with the MC being OP, after DXD world it just was bad how the MC behaved not caring for anyone, only for woman and just straight up a monster at the newest chapters, the author should have ended the story. the story should progress with a world that is much stronger for the MC to also not feel like he nothing import to do.

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MapleHinataSyrup

You made me get excited after reading this, I hope that this continues since I ran out of things to read that interest me so pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ngl I'm starting to feel dumb now should I start writing myself?

LV 1

HaremIsLifeDAO

The MC had a normal personality at the beginning. But as it goes on, it becomes more and more unpleasant to read. The MC is living proof that power corrupts the weak of character. Or as Batman said: "Either you die a hero, or you live long enough to become a villain"... And this MC from this time jump is just that. He is worse than Esdeath. There are no more interactions with the heroines from the beginning, 'since they have already fulfilled their purpose of being a sex for power or fuck for power'. It is very disappointing to read each chapter now. I wonder if there will be any character development or if I just saw this MC getting more and more evil!?? I read it twice, once before he left dxd, and now up to 400. And I was left with a bad taste in my mouth seeing this development, or deconstruction.[img=sad][img=sad][img=sad]