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摘要
Reborn as a Uchiha; only one year left until the night of the clan's massacre?
It's over, I'm done for. With Uchiha Itachi taking action, there's no way to survive!
However, fortunately, I have a life simulator.
Initial simulation begins...
[After half a month, you enroll in the Ninja Academy and learn basic knowledge!]
[After three months, you have mastered the method of chakra extraction and have been influenced by the Will of Fire!]
[After nine months, you successfully master the Clone Technique.]
[After twelve months, on the night of the clan's massacre, you watch as your friends and family are all killed before your eyes. In fear and anger, you successfully awaken your eyes, but then, you are killed!]
[Please choose an item to retain after the simulation!]
[Option 1: All the knowledge and skills you have learned!]
[Option 2: The increased amount of chakra!]
[Option 3: The awakened bloodline state!]
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Original Author: 作者:静静小花
RAW NAME: 忍界:我有人生模拟器
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寫檢討Honestly this fanfic will makes your brain's rot, but most Webnovel readers are veteran of MTL so their poison resistance is kinda high. But I'll read it anyway
The translation isn't bad, but the MC has such bad talent that it's hard to read. Like despite being a transmigration and Uchiha, he has talent equal to the worst among non crippled civilians. Like we are talking a year of study for an adult in a child's body to learn transformation jutsu. He couldnt even use chakra without the system. Even with the sharingan, it takes him months to learn the simplest of techniques. He might get super strong eventually, but it'll feel fake. Most system MC in these kinds of novels rely heavily one the system but once they get going, they gain a lot of momentum and the system loses a bit of relevance and the MC sheds his training wheels and uses the system mostly as a way to obtain things he couldn't get otherwise, like an Uchiha gaining the byakugan or something along those lines. But in this one, so far at least, the MC is so utterly incompetent that he literally can't gain any power at all without entirely relying on the system for it. Want to learn body flicker? Either a year of training or the system. Want to learn basic academy jutsu? At least a year of training or the system. The Mc literally can't do anything for himself and that makes the novel very unappealing.
揭示劇透The story seems good, it just seems like it, it's tiring and the protagonist's talent never seems to increase, speaking of talent, the protagonist has none of that, seriously, he depends entirely on the system, I don't even know how the talent system is calculated here, the protagonist has a sharingan, but it's useless, it takes months to learn a low-level jutsu, for high-level jutsus like shunshin no jutsu, they are entire simulations, it simply doesn't make sense, the protagonist (with sharingan) is worse than Obito before the sharingan. The translators are screwing themselves over to translate this, lol. Conclusion: unlike other fanfics in the webnovel, the system is not a crutch for the protagonist, it's his arms and legs.
揭示劇透"Absolutely enjoying this fanfic after a long time! It's engaging and well-written. Keep up the great work, and please don't drop it—looking forward to more!"👍😊
I like simulation type system, so I have no complaint about the story. There are very few grammatical mistakes and the translator has done his job well. I just hope that our mc will not stop using the system because of his rapidly increasing strength.
Probably one of the only well written Chinese novels. The MC is pretty smart and the (cheat) is pretty unique and interesting. It quiet enjoyable so if i was you i would give it a read
I think its a fun crack fic, but of all the powers why the eight gates. the MC is only 7 years old and can open 7 gates? the entire point of the eight gates is to build a body that can withstand it, something a 7 year old wouldn't be able to do no matter how talented, even for the first few gates. rock lee didnt even have the 7th gate in Shippuden.
writing quality(5/5): Is very good. Translator is not using mtl. story design(2/5): had a good potential, but got destroyed by chinese propaganda character design(1/5): If I could I would give this 0 stars. The mc is dumbest character i have seen in a while. It wouldn't have been so bad, if author didn't present his mc as smart and cunning. Let me give you an example (Our Mc is going to meet onoki after their little war and he is allowed to take 2 people with him as bodyguars. Well guess what. He took 7 year old naruto there. Naruto got captured and mc got killed. Lucky for mc it happened in simulation). The other characters are totally different characters from naruto original characters. They are more like chinese cultivators with the same names as naruto characters. *insert meme "having eyes, but can't see mt.Tai" updating stability(5/5): Translator is doing here a very good job. Even giving his readers powerstone goals. world backgdoung(5/5): It's naruto overall (3.6/5): Don't read if you don't like chinese cultivation novels, etc.
揭示劇透enjoyable crack fic, but your usual 7 yo Kage lvl MC. It's a shame that time mostly passes on the simulation, MC's real time barely 7 months passed. It reached a point that turning off your brain to tolerate the ridiculousness of the events will ran out.
The story is good but MC's lack of talent is buzzing to me. Dude does Life Simulator average 1+ year but his talent is below average. It's not your fault as it was already written and this is just Translation. But this is just My opinion. BTW Translation is Good xD :)
I'm quite impressed with this author ( Chinese author) ( never happened before for a fanfic) The story was extremely satisfying - 1. Danzo's dead at right time 2. hokage's death at right time 3. this all happened before uchiha massacre 4. it didn't feel weird in anyway, story was smooth and interesting. 5. revealed hokage's seven deadly sins ( crime ) and published it 👍 6. Itachi's outcome was satisfying ( of course he joined AKATSUKI but it was to redeem himself for raising the blade against his own family) 7. MC compares many things to the real world ( memes, jokes etc.) mentioned Russian as well - I'm not Russian but i like this comparison most somehow. - still this wasn't annoying at all , story was smooth 8. MC doesn't hide his talent 👍( but didn't mentioned his system) 9. MC has a clear mind, his thoughts are clear and explained properly but briefly. 10. The author seems knowledgeable enough. 11. i can't really find any problems and that's my inner problem. even in power level and MC's progress. 12. of course lack of chapter is a issue but guys is posting them quickly. if it's slow we might lose the touch 13. it's lacking a bit of something but i can't figure it out. only conclusion is i need more of it . because the fun was short ( too short for me)
Не думаю, что меня кто-то поймёт, но это из лучших наруто фанфиков из тех которые я читал. Великолепный перевод, я использую автоперевод гугл
Yea, so im not even gonna talk about tranlations since i read it on mtl but the story is really good if kinda repetitive sometimes but with changes in MC strength his simulation result also changes so its very intresesting to see. I really recommend it, the only downside is its stop updating after 66 chapters so there's that. If you like this novel i do recommend author's other book too.
Quite interesting. Giving him a junk talent so that in only two simulations he can't reach jounin level is a logical idea. I don't understand why people criticize that. I'll be rooting for it.
There comes a point where all you need to do is read the chapter titles to know more or less how this goes. It's pulling that deeply from a certain genre that there is no suspense. As a translation though, this is A+
It's a good story; I don't know why people complain about his talent when his system is very broken. I think his level is perfect so that fights or problems can't be resolved with just one punch. But I hope his power is controlled at this stage of the story, as it's too strong for his age.
Way too OP MC and the MC is too Young, personally if the author starts with the character being older then having the life simulator work for once a week the the progress would feel more natural as we could see the growth.
作者 Emik01
About this fanfic, from the first time I read this fanfic when it first uploaded more than a week ago, I already knew that the thing that's gonna be the main complaints of a lot of people is the MC's abysmal talent. It's important to note that this Fic is a Life Simulator System fic, one of the many subgenre of the more usual System fic. And like most other Life simulator fics, the author will have to impose a restriction upon the mechanics of the system, usually by limiting the times of possible simulation, simulation rewards, limiting the MC's talent so that he can only grow with simulation rewards, etc. This is important thing that's necessary to be done so that an actual story could take place, without restrictions to the Simulator System the MC could possibly spends time training for thousands of years in just a matter of 1 real time years. This would trivialize everything and destroy any hope of writing an action or adventure type story because the MC became so strong that nothing would matter. This of course did not matter if it's intended to be more focused on a slice of life or even a story that revolves around the side characters more than the MC, like Onepunch-Man for example. But it's clear that's not what this story specifically intended to be. So, with all that been said, it's a good fanfic in my opinion, is it a masterpiece without flaw? No it is not. But is it good enough that it can be enjoyable despite the flaw? I certainly think it is.