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I died but got a second chance in a new world. This was a cruel world full of pirates, marines and world nobles. This was the world of One Piece. I'm just a normal guy and I did not get a cheat like a system or a special bloodline. How could I survive in a word like this? I couldn't even defeat the bullies in my high school times and this world is full of bad*sses. But one day changed everything...
(I do not own One Piece and the cover)
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OG logia fruit that has more weaknesses than yami yami no mi and comes with sh1ttier powers.... at least yami yami no mi can cancel out other devil fruits MC can't even use his fruit's power easily.....
And Extremely good Novel. Good Character Development, Good Plot Idea, Good Plot Progression (tho that needs a but more chapters to confirm). But Most Importantly, The Writing Quality Isn't Shit! Its Good! (A little bit of Grammatical errors here and there, but not really that prominent). Im Sick of Bad Quality Novels! Even though some of the stories are really good, It Feels like im gonna Die of Cancer! This Novel Deserves 5 stars. One of the best One Piece Fanfics ive seen in a while.
Fantastically written...............................i love it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Great author!!!................................... I‘m curious what‘s to come....i will support you!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍.................................................
i love everything about this story. I love his grandfather and the way they interact. I love how he acts like hes the mc of a eastern fantasy. I love his devil fruit ability(s) and how he has to actually train unlike some stupid devil fruits. Its almost like hes luffy that has to train to make his devil fruit useful. I cant wait to see his adventures and how he interacts with pirates marines and other celestial dragons. PLEASE DONT DROP AUTHOR THIS STORY IS AMAZING.
Extremely good ☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️☢️
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I love the start of the story and how the grandpa spoiled the mc... dont drop this... ******************wweeewe ******************wweeewe ******************wweeewe ******************wweeewe ******************wweeewe ******************wweeewe
Weird MC that's all i can say i don't understand any reason to some of the MC decision. couldn't read past chapter 14. It was pretty interesting in the beginning until he met BOA HANCOCK, in from there it start going down hill.. got 2 star because of writing quality and story was quite interesting in the beginning
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Keep up the good work i love it!!!!! There is nothing that i really want to say the update rate is great the character build up is awesome story is also good hope that author makes this harem story with 3 girls and mc has a lot of children later on the story
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I must say that you should give it a try. I don't know about others but I recommend this because of the writing, which is nice and neat. At least you can see that the author giving his best to write this down.
Hahaha i really like your novel and how the story goes on. Please don’t disappoint me by suddenly dropping the novel. I will keep supporting you!!!
First of all, this fan-fic is well written and I enjoy it so far. From my perspective, Author is unique one. Many fan-fic with reincarnation filled with MC who afraid to change the original story. But this author seems like make a huge turn in story. I hope this will not be dropped. Keep it up Author.
Don't Drop it! Don't Drop it! Don't Drop it! Don't Drop it!Don't Drop it! Don't Drop it! Don't Drop it! Don't Drop it!Don't Drop it! Don't Drop it! Don't Drop it! Don't Drop it!
interesting story before he met boa hancock and her sister.. mc become pathetic loser after meet them.. he always trashtalk to his grandfather even after he use his authority to give mc df he desire, but mc become idiot pathetic loser who act like servant and let her abuse him.. for what reason you make him become idiot like that? i don't understand why this stupid story have high rating
This is one the best one piece fanfic ive ever read .I really recomend this story for those who are looking for an original one piece fanfic.the best part for me is the devil fruit (no gonna spoil it for you but im gonna give u hint . Its a mystical type devil fruit)
Wow, it os a nice fan fic of one piece, please don't drop this, it has so many originality in it and it is so damn GOOD!!! And yeah he need Harem, but don't make it too much please too many women in Harem sometimes bring the quality down. Ok the writing is nice, little mistake here and there but still very good.
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卷 1
- 1 Prolog 5 years ago
- 2 Mary Geoise 5 years ago
- 3 Grandfather 5 years ago
- 4 My new teacher 5 years ago
- 5 That's a good catch... 5 years ago
- 6 Time skip 5 years ago
- 7 Blackflame family 5 years ago
- 8 New power 5 years ago
- 9 Hancocks new power 5 years ago
- 10 New crew members 5 years ago
- 11 The calm before the storm 5 years ago
- 12 A shocking secret 5 years ago
- 13 Old man's last gift 5 years ago
- 14 The ship arrived at the sea 5 years ago
- 15 Vinsmoke family 5 years ago
- 16 Crew meeting 5 years ago
- 17 You have to spoil your kids 5 years ago
- 18 I'm the boss of your boss 5 years ago
- 19 The first enemy 5 years ago
- 20 Mysterious Island 5 years ago
- 21 Merchant 5 years ago
- 22 Shichibukai 5 years ago
- 23 Paradise Island 5 years ago
- 24 Sarazar Sid 5 years ago
- 25 Sid's deal with the devil 5 years ago
- 26 Bonney vs Gloria 5 years ago
- 27 Hachi's troubled past 5 years ago
- 28 Reiju 5 years ago
- 29 Power of the New World 5 years ago
- 30 Demon Fox Hancock 5 years ago
- 31 The heir of the Blackflame House 5 years ago
- 32 A deal with a true devil 5 years ago
- 33 Epilogue 5 years ago
卷 2
- 34 Prolog 5 years ago
- 35 Future plans 5 years ago
- 36 Walter Benson 5 years ago
- 37 Recruitment (1) 5 years ago
- 38 Recruitment (2) 5 years ago
- 39 Alabasta (1) 5 years ago
- 40 Alabasta (2) 5 years ago
- 41 Headquarter 5 years ago
- 42 The sorrow of a young man 5 years ago
- 43 Sky Island 5 years ago
- 44 Date 5 years ago
- 45 A flawless plan 5 years ago
- 46 Sabaody is in danger 5 years ago
- 47 New participants for the Battle Royal 5 years ago
- 48 Team one is ready for the fight 5 years ago
- 49 The Blackflame's 5 years ago
- 50 History of the Blackflame Family 5 years ago
- 51 The legendary One Piece character 5 years ago
- 52 Pandaman in trouble 5 years ago
- 53 A present for you 5 years ago
- 54 Lilly's anger 5 years ago
- 55 Blackflame D. Lilly 5 years ago
- 56 The true heir of the Blackflame Family 5 years ago
- 57 The crazy family 5 years ago
- 58 After the battle 5 years ago
- 59 Black Dragons 5 years ago
- 60 Dressrosa 5 years ago
- 61 The Hero and his Sidekick 5 years ago
- 62 Joker 5 years ago
- 63 Epilogue 5 years ago
No one would be able to read it after MC shows he is a pathetic loser for boa hancock pu*ssy. I read this story some time before, but didn't leave a review then. Doing it now. He saves boa hancock from slavery, and she's absolute bi*tch to him. She hates him because he's celestial, and unconcerned of her fate(which she should for her sisters sake even if she hates him) she keeps on abusing him and being a bi*tch to him. But MC let's it all go over his basic pride and dignity and grovels in front of her to give him a way to let her stay with him. I have never ever seen such a pathetic display. It's like the auhtor wanted the MC to be as pathetic as possible. All for to make her stay with him and then somehow this loser MC will gain her "love" aka pu*ssy. Congrat for getting your waifu!!! 👏 Now i was not expecting her to su*ck MC. Her position is perfectly reasonable. It's the MC pathetic attempts to desperately make boa stay with him. The sheer amount of grovelling, spinelessness, and patheticness was tangible. It looked like he'll die if she didn't stay with him. I don't know what kind of readers can keep on reading the fic after this, but looks like many did and keep on highly rating it. All i can say for them is, good you got your waifu one way or another. The OC fruit, and the "twist" of having the loser celestial family being actually competent and all the time they were just pretending to be retarded is distasteful as well. And MC will go pirate route as well. Nothing original.