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"CRASH!" the last sound he heard; the last image being the smile of his friends.
Jotou Howllett, a twenty-one year old nobody who finds little to no purpose in his life, wants to be a freelancer to make it big whilst trying to avoid education. He spends his last day of freedom with his friends before he's forced by his parents to attend college. That last day became his true last day as a white light flashed and he opened his eyes in a coffin, suffocating. He, now she, found herself to be in the body of a woman who had recently passed away. Jotou comes to realize that she's no longer in her world and now is in some sort of fantasy world. The rampant problems in this world soon find themselves surrounding Jotou, from the magics to the monsters to the wars between kingdoms and cities. Jotou sets out to uncover how she got here, why is she here, is she stuck here? Alongside the companions she finds in her way.
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Follow along on her journey through this new world, an isekai anime style story written the way I would love to read myself. It's set in an industrial revolution-esque era with magics and inconsistent technologies as a result. From slice of life moments to dark moments; comedy, fantasy, darkness, romance, mystery and reincarnation all rolled up into one adventure and I do hope anyone reading this has fun and enjoys the journey that's crafted! I intend to go by arcs and chapters much like a light novel.
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Viết đánh giáSince I can review myself, lol. Thanks for reading! Lemme just say some things. Try reading these before making criticism I suppose: _ The words and phrasings used, or things that happen aren’t mistakes. One of the tags of this book is mystery, so there are most likely no ‘accidental’ words or sentences; those are intentional. Same goes for ‘plot holes’; things that aren’t discussed or don’t come into play will probably be explored in later chapters/arcs. Also, I'm only human. So, errors can occur but I’ve triple checked from chapters 1-100 and everything should be fine. The errors would come from me updating daily, so I’ll probably fix them at a later date when I catch them but obviously I will try not to make them in the first place. _ Character decisions aren’t mistakes. This is what a character would say or do in a said situation. What you think might happen may very well differ from what I have in mind. It can mean the characters did or said something wrong, or didn't do the best possible thing; that’s the point. They’re built with flaws, goals, dreams, traits and their own experiences. Boo me, not my precious, precious characters. _ The pacing I have for this story I think fits perfectly with the story I want to tell. There are reasons for slow moments and reasons for fast ones. It does have actions scenes in it but this is not a fast-paced action novel. It's about the characters, their own developments, mysteries and their journey. _ If on the off chance you find any spelling errors or anything, comment on it, I'll fix it asap. _ And last but not least, please, please, please, have a wonderful day, stay hydrated and get enough sleep. Happy readings~
A very well put together, enjoyable and amazing story. The first arc is a little slow and sets things up but by the second arc I was enraptured. The characters all fill a role and have a purpose, the setting seems like it has a lot of lore that’s going on and the style of writing flows smoothly. The callbacks and mystery is seeded in well, that in the later chapters you can pretty much see the plan unfold. I especially love how it handles the characters’ issues like suicide, momentary depressions and self-harm. The combination of how these characters interact with each other makes you care for them on a personal level and when faced with the main problem, they stay strong because they all depend on each other. Truly a wonderful story and the ending of the second arc is amazing is all I can say and I’ve been following it for a while. I can’t wait for what’s planned in the third arc.
Tiết lộ SpoilerThis book has a lot of potential from what I have read, but there are some parts that might confuse some readers, the reason for that is because on some parts in which I was reading there was a change in scenery without notice which threw me off a little bit, but the rest of the story is good. I recommend it
Tiết lộ Spoileri love this story wayyy too much i reread sometimes just to experience certain chapters again. amazing story plots, amazing fleshed out characters, fantastic world building with lore behind it and would definitely recommend reading and the amount of times i physicaly reacted to some scenes its just so good. its not some overpowered mc with cheat skills, no systems with level ups, not some harem with plastic characters, its serious when it needs to be, funny when it needs to be and so wholesome which can flip to grusome. its the adventure of these characters in a foreign world that has avatar the last airbender vibes but with isekai tones. the narration sometimes gets sassy and just mocks certain things in the story making it a really fun read. by far the best thing are the characters. the main four are so entertaining to watch interact. fumekos the cutest tsundere istg , Jotou the protag whos flawed yet perfect. hotaru the moral compass. And then, my favourite main character asobi, is utter chaos in every sense of the word. the fight scenes in this are just, chef's kiss. there is not TOO many since the writing is more suited for a longterm adventure and places importance on the characters and the plot but when they happen, omg its satisfying. the little details, the way each person fights differently, you can really feel the pain when someone gets injured or the WATCH OUT feeling when someone is about to get hit. its an amazing read imo and an experience. it dips to depression and trauma and then suddenly there are ducks shooting beams of light, some gory fight scene with practical magic and elements then theres a cute wholesome yuri scene that makes my heart flutter. idk what else to say except, fantastic job.
One of the best stories I have ever read. Thank you for this amazing story! Well made characters with deep personalities and an entertaining mystery.
One of my favorite stories on here. The party dynamic is fun, the characters themselves have their goofy moments but at the same time feel fully realized, and Jotou is wonderful as a protagonist. She’s flawed but can use those flaws as a strength, struggles with growth in an interesting and engaging way and it’s just wonderful how those struggles play off of the rest of the party. Plus, as a trans woman, her utter nonchalance at the genderbending tickles me. The relationships between characters is probably my favorite part of the story. The characters rib eachother to express their care and play off of eachother while still getting serious if the situation calls for it. Overall, wonderful, the story does an amazing job balancing serious and severe situations with comedic and playful ones without it seeming out of place or one overwhelming the other. I’ll immediately eating up anything this author writes, and keep up the great work.
definitely worth the read, very fun and well put together story with dark themes and very interesting characters. sets up to be a good adventure, has a good mystery and really has a fantasy adventure vibe i was not expecting based on the title. pleasantly surprised, really good work, keep it up!
The first two arcs (the free ones), are definitely worth reading. At first I thought that this was going to be one of the usual gender-bender novels. Boy was I wrong. I enjoyed it. A lot.
Best book I have read in years, the characters are well polished. Please continue with publishing fabulous chapters for us to indulge in. I would say, though, to add more humanoid characters in the story as well
It’s amazing, I love it❤️ The story and the writing was captivating. I really loved this writer’s style of writing. Will definitely recommend to my friends.
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Hey there, apparently I can leave a second review! So, sadly didn't win anything in the recent WSA 2022 winners announcements but that's okay and this story'll continue for much longer with our beloved characters since we're also reaching 200 chapters! My other review has some guidelines and whatnot, so this is will be, an AMA! (Ask me anything) That is to do with the story, what's planned, anything extra about it, have you slept in the past 24hrs and all that, if you wanna ask, this will be here! I just wanna thank everyone who's reading so much! More interactions are always appreciated, comments, likes, etc. It puts a smile on my face and motivates me to write more and more; on top of the story I'm already going through in Arc 4. Gonna be some fun stuff coming up, even if the pacing is a little slower, there's a good reason for it! In any case, hope you have a good day, take care of yourself and happy readings~!