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A guy died, met god, got wishes and live his new life.
Everything I write is for fun. I don’t own any of the work except for the oc.
It will be harem based. He will have a lots of girls for his harem. Also many of them will be milf.
Everything I write doesn’t have any connection to the real world. Everything is in AU of Earth. If you find any character similar then that is just a coincidence.
1) one piece
2) solo levelling
3) teen wolf
4) Bleach
5) TVD/TO
6) Naruto
7) .
8).
Also English is not my first language. So please ignore the writing mistakes.
Also you can suggest anything. I may add them.
I will not spend too much time on same world. So there maybe time skip some time.
Thank you

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leonel551

people getting mad because the novel is harem wth? dont they read the tags? why even bother to read something you dislike and leave bad reviews and mess up the author rating for no reason

2yr
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Negan_5785

1-Writting is decent. It has mistakes but, as i said, is decent. 3/5 2-Stability is good but not perfect. 4/5 3-The story is forced and stupid. MC joined Luffy without reason. 2/5 4-The MC, as i said, joined Luffy crew without reason, he dont use future knowledge and he is very nerfed. I mean, he asked for Majin Buu powers, and he fought equal with East Blue Luffy... That is stupid. 2/5 5-Background decent. Is the world of OP so... But nothing new, or a new point of view of the world. Just a coppy of canon. 3/5

3yr
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ObamaUchiha

choose a cool character and made it a harem. no respect ...........................................................................................

3yr
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Weirdo

Well, chapter 5 where the cringe start is the end point for me. I know you want to have shounen moment, and I do agree it's your own freedom to write how you like it. So I wouldn't say or write anything negative about it apart from saying I don't like it. Others may.. Good luck with your fanfic mate..

3yr
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Bierbart

Writing quality is ok, but there is still a lot of room to improve. The concept and preset of the story is very interesting but sadly not well executed. There is also a lot of discrepancy with things mentioned in earlier chapters and then its randomly different. E.g. it was said MC is physically as strong as an vice admiral or admiral in beginning but has the same strength as luffy in the starting point... makes not much sense with what was mentioned earlier. Its like saying someone is as strong as kaido in the purely physical aspect and then said person looses a fistfight with starting ussop

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3yr
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Divine_Onahole

luffy folower,,whats the point making ff if still leech on luffy .

3yr
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AuthorISan

I like the idea behind it, but the quality of the writing is bad. I like the idea of the MC having Majin Buu's ability's, but the fact that there isn't a limit or a way for the MC to unlock them is really terrible. The MC could just straight up go to whitebeard, kaido, big mom, garp or any of the OP characters, turn them into candy then gain there strength. There is also a problem with the actually writing fluidity. The fluidity of the writing along with the grammar mistakes (which i looked passes as the authors first language isn't English) makes for the story to be un-enjoyable and difficult to understand what's happening in the plot. Some advise I have for the author is to either set some limitations on the MC's ability or through the journey make him do challenges that he would have to complete from the ROB to unlock more of his potential powers. I also recommend using a writing tool like read and write gold or Grammarly to help with the fluidity and grammar for the writing.

3yr
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Copy and paste Cannonnnnnnn 😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😮😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴[][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr
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p0sitv3s

Pretty trash novel, I won't lie. Author says "English isn't my first language, but the grammar will be better than MTL" and then proceeds to, in my opinion, write much worse than MTL. -Writing quality is terrible, story development is terrible, it literally just follows OP canon, character design is trash, and world background is terrible.-Honestly not worth reading unless you have absolutely nothing else to read.

3yr
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ThisNovelSucksBro

Can't even call the MC a beta he's just a complete moron, suppose he's like the author in that regard. ---------------------------------------------

2yr
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UnholyMorning

Remind for all new readers! Poor writing, aimless and stupid MC too. The author is too fond of Chinese novels, because some words and sentences are in the story. For example, Conqueror Haki was changed to Royal Haki. OK, that's all my review. Here I want to give some spoilers to new readers, be careful reading this ff. Because the MC has the personality of a child, has matured from his old life, but still acts like a teenager who is still a fanboy. His wish seems useless, meaning that you can read this ff while you are eating or kill your boredom (didn't find a good novel or a good novel update).

2yr
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ProSpect

Had an good idea going for himself, sadly he ruined it with his terrible grammar .....................................................................

3yr
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AoMaEr

ok... so far this is one of the best fanfic that i read so I hope for more... the story/plot is good the development is also good... I can't wait for him to travel to other world or universe... I wonder if he can absorb the longinus and the infinity stones huehuehuehue.... so PLEASE DON'T EVEN THINK OF DROPPING THIS AND PLEASE MORE MORE MORE CHAPTERS...

3yr
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MorningWood_Dao

the writing quality is bad. sudden change of pov, typos here and there made it hard to stay focused on the story. it's just not fun. it has potential and fun to read if author fix it

2yr
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Dr_Chad
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Meh, Need new plot outline to read, I've basically memorized all plots of one piece(most fics in translation just follow the plot while some didn't but those are rare) because of constant reading of OP fan fiction. Still good luck in your side. Just write more and expand your horizons by branching out to the plot and that will make you advanced as a good author. Keep up.

3yr
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JOKER_JAY

this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.

3yr
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OVERKILL

no charcter, no story ,no plot, no aim , just a good catchy start. waste of boo's power

1yr
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JA_03
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Ragib_Mahtab

well........ since it is a heram fanfriction i you should add Naruto in it in that world there are some very pretty girls in that world well just my Opinion rather you add or not It's up to you......and by the nice Fan friction

3yr
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Deathsreh

This is pretty good by my standards since english isn't my first language. You can ignore one piece world but you will have some struggles understanding some of his powers and his harem members. All is good I just want so suggest that make the story longer like some arcs and worlds. Going to diff world and just speedblitzing it feels wrong to me afterall he is not exploring and making use of his time with his girls all he cares about is powering up and not enjoying time with them. I hope they are already pregnant tho it can increase his character development by a lot. His character is pretty decent not too shabby but can be improved in the future. The only problem i personally have is the story is too fast and it can destroy the development of his character and his wives are becoming side charac the only good thing i can see is that to not have a hard time he doesnt include all girls in his adventure like in solo levelling when they got there only ulti and yamato go first I understand that but atleast they should go together u know

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