Naruto: Betrayed From The Start

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R0B

I don't know why reviews are so high. This is garbage, it's like reading a fanfic written by an author who didn't watch Naruto to begin with. It's not even realistic, author had to use speculation after speculation after speculation just to make leaf village go against him. Evidence or at the very least probing? No such thing exists.

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Transhumanist

Holy moly it is exhausting to read this story. 11 chapters full of nothing. All of them could be summarized to 3 paragraphs. There are many far fetched theories and assumptions made to make the plot holes seem smaller. 6 year old Minato is the best Chakra sensor in the Narutoverse, apparently. And it is understandable to report classmates as spies because a 6 year old thought their Chakra changed.

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Prince_Arsalan

i read upto chapter 35.too boring ,too depressing ,mc doesn't take any action , story is all about cruelty of hiruzen and danzo theres's no plot development . i am dropping it.

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Fraisier

Boring and slow, a lot of bs. Don't waste your time.

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Unwept_Writer

Nothing is happening no plot is developing it’s just useless whining and nothing happens

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moonlitsummer

I felt lied to by reviews. The story wanders away for the mc in increasingly stupid ways then hyper focuses on conversations that have nothing to do with mc ( I think it’s to remind us it’s a Naruto fic). Anyways I found myself speed scrolling through chapters to find anything with mc and was dissatisfied.

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Lucius_DeAth

De los peores fanfic de Naruto que le leído, una basura china con nombres asquerosos y sin sentido, no lo recomiendo aléjese de esta obra y no pierdan su tiempo!!

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M_Zero

If there was a lower rating I would have given it. Literally whoever wants to read this nonsense needs to turn off all their brain cells since whoever wrote this novel doesn't know anything about Naruto. Just imagine that Minato who is six years old is the best chakra sensor and can feel that the chakra changes and the story only revolves around the cruelty of Danzo and the Hokage and the torture of the main character.

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LastGod

LAME BORING NOT ABOUT MC. This is more about the imoral crimes of 3rd hokage and danzo then anything else. MC is weak and usless 40+ chapter he still hasnt escaped from root. This is not an OVERPOWERED MC story.

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Cevahir_Gezer

It is a really nice concept that differences and changes can be noticed immediately in a ninja village, but such stupid speculations are really ridiculous. It is ridiculous to assume that his body has been taken over by a ninja who has perfected his soul transformation technique because he has no chakra in his hair. For example, he could be wearing a wig.d?? Or he may have awakened a special Kekkai genkai. Ninjas don't speculate without the necessary intelligence. And he doesn't act as if he really does. This fiction is definitely Chinese fiction because he turned a good concept into shit by writing it with disgusting stupidity.

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Keith_Cline

-20* concept is good but 40 chapters and the story hasn't even started yet... 8 or so chapters on the mc.. 32 on insignificant ppl.. waste of a time.

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7CigarettePuffs

It's a waste that could've been silver, at least . Author just took pleasure in writing torture scenes and barely made any progress from chapter 10 to chapter 40. Had potential, now- not worth it.

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Lence_Laplace

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i want chinese name plz want to see how MC react to situation minato palanoid too much ......................................................................................................[img=recommend]

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Hellish_Rabbit

Author, delete similar 1-star comments. These are either ignorant people used to reading machine-translated stories where the protagonist is overpowered and omniscient, or people who don't want your work to reach the top. For those who haven't read it yet and are checking the comments to decide if it's worth reading: It definitely is. The world is well-built, and the relationships between the characters are well explained. The supernatural element in the form of chakra is described exceptionally well. All the techniques and the logic behind them that the protagonist learns always have a proper origin, rather than being granted by some "golden finger" pulled out of thin air like in some Chinese stories. The characters are well-developed, and the text is enjoyable to read. Regarding the excessive cruelty, I can only say that it's quite realistic. In a world of endless war, betrayal, and violence, it's hard to imagine kind-hearted people willing to help you. Everyone pursues their own goals or desires. Hiruzen is no exception here; he's portrayed very realistically. There’s none of that typical dynamic between Hiruzen and Danzo found in 99% of fanfics: "I’m the Hokage!" "You’ll regret this!" Sometimes characters are depicted a bit naively, such as Mito when she trusted Hiruzen, but overall, I’m satisfied and eagerly awaiting new chapters.

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DaoistbNiRsr

I don't want to spoil it for people who want to read this but I will say IMO that all the good parts of this novel has already passed. I haven't read the entire novel but I read enough to feel like its super monotonous.

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Raja_Sihir

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prvcx_00

the sub 2k words per chapter is making this feel like a drag. it didnt even make me read it properly. i just skimmed and i was still able to follow the plot. finished it under 30 minutes as of currently theres 22 chapters released. chapter 10+ is where he'll get betrayed. chapter 20+ is where he'll get tortured. between all those theres lotsa exposition and pov changes. if u wanna read this, wait until theres 50 chapters out maybe. webnovel format being trickle feeding is such bullshit