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The Path of RWBY
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Welp this is my first novel , I just want to see how this little experiment will go.
A 18 year old guy follows his path , building his future with the help of a system.
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It is an enjoyable read. slice of life vibe is nice and it is satisfying. things could be better with the writing but I think my main concern is how you mix up dialogue in the body of narration. it makes it difficult to read. of course sometimes yoj can power through but some people can not. place Dialogues on separate lines from the narration of the story and it will read so much better.
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Chapter 84: Not a chapter 3 years ago Âm lượng 1
- 1 Let the Krewsade start! 3 years ago
- 2 The system and the new settlement 3 years ago
- 3 Magic Weapons and Mecha Weapons 3 years ago
- 4 Grinding more and forward to Salem 3 years ago
- 5 Salem and Ozma 3 years ago
- 6 The plans and memories 3 years ago
- 7 Assimilation and a talk 3 years ago
- 8 The pools , corruption and experiment 3 years ago
- 9 A King and a Queen 3 years ago
- 10 Ideas and the plan 3 years ago
- 11 Revolution 3 years ago
- 12 Update and shit it was too fast 3 years ago
- 13 A message to the world and skills progress 3 years ago
- 14 The answer from the others 3 years ago
- 15 A chance for development and Regis 3 years ago
- 16 The world's progress and development 3 years ago
- 17 Time for expansion 3 years ago
- 18 Beacon and Scrolls 3 years ago
- 19 Beacon Entrance and The Tower 3 years ago
- 20 Feel so Lazy and Theodore 3 years ago
- 21 Huh who would have thought that fighting is this fun? 3 years ago
- 22 A new alliance 3 years ago
- 23 A relaxing time and more grinding 3 years ago
- 24 The Long Memory and Upgrade 3 years ago
- 25 A message from the last one 3 years ago
- 26 Shit it's too much stuff for just one guy 3 years ago
- 27 Huh neat but how are they the same?! 3 years ago
- 28 Surprise , luck and by now there is a big pile of plans 3 years ago
- 29 Why wait for the future if you can imagine it 3 years ago
- 30 I guess you can't be friends with everyone 3 years ago
- 31 Anger and ending slavery in 20 minutes 3 years ago
- 32 Terraforming Menagerie 3 years ago
- 33 Finally Humanity United 3 years ago
- 34 Relaxing and The meeting is scheduled 3 years ago
- 35 A small upgrade 3 years ago
- 36 I feel so dumb right now 3 years ago
- 37 Taking over the Dark Lands 3 years ago
- 38 The main pools 3 years ago
- 39 Splitting the loot 3 years ago
- 40 Unexpected result 3 years ago
- 41 Slight divergence on the way 3 years ago
- 42 Parenting is kinda easy 3 years ago
- 43 Testing the Arc of Embodiment 3 years ago
- 44 Luckiest man alive and finally a Gacha 3 years ago
- 45 Meeting Dumbledore and the other schools 3 years ago
- 46 Time Skip no Jutsu 3 years ago
- 47 Welp I'm blocked so yeah I'll try 3 years ago
- 48 Time 3 years ago
- 49 Meeting Hermione 3 years ago
- 50 Trolls have lives too 3 years ago
- 51 Infinity Stones 3 years ago
- 52 Attack 3 years ago
- 53 Snake Boi appears 3 years ago
- 54 MFBI 3 years ago
- 55 End of first year 3 years ago
- 56 Enjoying the holidays 3 years ago
- 57 A day with the Grangers 3 years ago
- 58 The SCP's 3 years ago
- 59 The Guardian 3 years ago
- 60 The third gift 3 years ago
- 61 Finishing the job 3 years ago
- 62 Power up baby 3 years ago
- 63 What it means to be Immortal 3 years ago
- 64 What lies beyond the gate 3 years ago
- 65 Once again I'm out of ideas 3 years ago
- 66 Grinding like a madman 3 years ago
- 67 Rising in rank 3 years ago
- 68 Only in dreams 3 years ago
- 69 SCP-343 3 years ago
- 70 Meeting the Basilisk 3 years ago
- 71 Sun 3 years ago
- 72 Intervention 3 years ago
- 73 End of second year 3 years ago
- 74 Creation 3 years ago
- 75 Primis 3 years ago
- 76 Crumple-Horned Snorkack 3 years ago
- 77 The Guardian is chill 3 years ago
- 78 Death energy 3 years ago
- 79 Let the games begin 3 years ago
- 80 Guess who's back? Back again? Sha-Voldy's back?! 3 years ago
- 81 Death Law 3 years ago
- 82 Problems with the soul fixed 3 years ago
- 83 Welp that was anticlimactic 3 years ago
- 84 Not a chapter 3 years ago
It was bad, It is bad, it will be bad, the chapters is too short bad grammar used has instead of as many time the author didn't care to fix it so no future development in this book