Old Valyria: House Baelaeron

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Jasonenrick

After 75k words I'd like to have my say, so that any new readers might have a bit of an overview. I wouldn't say it's special or impressive, but interesting enough if are bored at the moment and need something to pass time. I wrote the first 10-20 chapters way before the other chapters and they weren't good in terms of content, nor were they very sophisticated, so I understand if most people are put off when they read the first chapters, but I guess there's nothing I can do about that. I try my best to incorporate people's ideas and suggestions into my story and listen to what the readers want and that's how my story is. A mix of chaos and creativity coming together. Hope you like it :D

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TheImmortal25

This book is just the thing I was looking for something that goes beyond the available characters in the media, and doesn't stop to challenge what could have been. I like these books especially. I also like this because I read a similar book to this kind but that book never went past the introduction, so this is a blessing. Keep it up Author, and take my stones.

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Kavindu_Ruwanara

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💟💟💟💟💟 so far so good. It was a nice and enjoyable reading for me. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks.

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Epic_Lam

Excellent story so far, I always dreamed of a story taking place in Old Valyria. Keep on with the good work. Jdjdjdhdjjdbsbsjs sisbksbsusbsjsbsjjshshsjsjshqhsjsjsjsbshjshwhshshshshwh

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JayFireblood

By far, one of the best ASOIAF/GOT fanfics out their. I really hope the author carries on the story. I could see this story blowing up in the future. WQ: 5 SD: 5 CD: 5 US: 5 WB: 4

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Mr_Chess

it's great author let's see we're this story shall head to.

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BSK_Kappo

One thing i really do fw bodut this book isthat its a nice pace and he really builds the background just enough to the point you aren't wondering to much about certain things but your also not able to guess everything thats going to happen. Please please dont let the targaryens rule over westeros or anything for that matter let the MCs house do that with tha other surving dragonlords be vassals

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DarlingNico

Great story all around. The characters have depth and their own POV which is nice and the MC is fun to read about. The hypocrisy in the this novel is a little much but it makes sense in its own way. All around a great story that I would love to keep reading.

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xsailos

its pretty good, adds lore and is fun to read

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Aaron_Seddon_0599

Updated often and the story has me hooked read until chapter 24 as of now and Author Great work so far .

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_DEKIM_

The novel is good, but Yuri, no thanks. And the protagonist falls in love with a prostitute, nothing against prostitutes, but I personally found it kind of meh. But the novel is good.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Melshan

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Unhonored

I really enjoy this story. It's one of the best fanfictions I've read so far, and believe me, I have over 911 hours of reading time on this app alone and have finished 913 books. I hope you continue uploading chapters until the story's conclusion.

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DaoistkxGQYF

Found this a couple of days ago and have really enjoyed it so far. The concept the author is using of the setting and time period being in old valariya is unique and don’t think I’ve really seen used before. The update schedule and grammar are all pretty good as well, the one thing I would slightly like to see a little more of would be the application of magic itself. Overall this has been a great story and hope author keeps up the good work

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Devastator_21

It's good, the writing is brilliant as well and the world-building is very good as well, the characters are well written I can't wait to see how this story progresses.

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Truth_Only_Reader

Writing Quality: 5 Stars Grammar is good, very few mistakes and it's a good story in general. I like the idea of someone being from a Valyrian household and how the political structure of Old Valyria in your stories works. Overall it is a very nice story and I will keep reading it with this quality. Story Development: 4 Stars The reason why I gave it this, is because it didn't make sense how the MC, went to the Free Cities, and the North without reasoning and the timeskips and all of his relationships were rushed. There was little to no buildup. There really wasn't a cause or good transition in my personal opinion. Especially how we were randomly put into a spot where a Magister Daughter got killed and an all put war in Lys is happening. You gave us little to no context in that part and I was confuse if I was reading the same story. I feel like you need more build up in those parts and then hit us with the consequences or the significance of it. Character Design: 5 Stars It was descriptive and very nice. You were perfect in this regard. Updating Stability: 5 Stars Good updates so far from what I've seen. World Background: 5 Stars Very descriptive on the world and how everything worked in the world of ASOIAF, keep doing what you are doing with this part. Conclusion: Good story overall, just work on your transition and it'll be perfect.

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scott_binder

Honestly love that there’s a story before the fall of Valeria. The wold building and characters are great, it just splits the story’s attention away from the MC and trys to tell the story from a random person’s perspective. Otherwise love that the story opens up at the very end (chp.72so far) and really look forward to it continuing!

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Eruvadhor

The author said that he didn't put much effort in researching to write this fic, but I have to say, the quality is very good, the characters feels alive and he's adept to "show not tell"

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Haroon_Patel

Good stuff! Thanks for sharing this with us.