Naruto : Back to the Past

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Dark_PersonJJ

Oh Naruto story,whare he travels to the past,I will give it my support. And Hinata in bikini pic for you as my thanks.

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QuiteSarcastic

-I honestly looked forward to reading a proper and decently rated Naruto fanfic, but in all honesty, this was as far from that as it could have been. -Writing quality is decent, and the flow and explanations are well put together. -Story Development... This is where things start to go downhill. It's not that its... bad. It's more like it lacks reasoning and logic whenever the MC is given something, his reactions are unnatural as if a Chinese cultivator suddenly takes his place. Naruto suddenly will kill 12-15-year-olds to defend the "loved" ones he so conveniently forgets about who is left behind for his crush on Sasuke. -Character Design... kinda went ham on the Story Development and added tidbits there, but all I can say is that if you are looking for a "Naruto" fic, then don't expect one here. He is as far from a "Naruto-like" character as humanly possible. -World Background, nothing to say about that one. The fact that the prologue was a convoluted mess of epic proportions kind of set a bad example: "Sasuke kills himself to end whatever dream-like conflict between him and Naruto for some gods' forsaken reason. All that being said, give it a shot; it's not bad fan fiction by any means. It's just that you have to perhaps skim over certain details to enjoy it like proper reading material.

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Dark_PersonJJ

Great Naruto series story who is about, What If Naruto had his Mother, Kushina in his life.

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Daoist66W4wt

Is good but this novel is similar to naruto hagoromo: rinnegan no kami

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Dark_PersonJJ

New Review,I realy like this New VERSION of Naruto and im glad thare is no Genderbend Sasuke but is just Sarada who take his place.

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UnenlightenedOne

i cant't...there are too many typos. it feel like MTL Chinese fic with little bit of human correction..sometime the way they talk feel too wuxia style while other time it's completely normal

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Marcus_Hembree

While it is a well used premises of a time-travel Fix-it, I do enjoy the writing narrative, just try and for a little authenticity of the MC personality. Even though Naruto has matured, I still expect to see some #1 unpredictable hyperactive knucklehead ninja inspired shenanigans. Because Naruto, pranking his opponents before whether accidental or purposeful is still a cliche that doesn't grow tiresome if it's done tastefully.

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Azure_warrior

NIce novel has a ton of potential to become one of the best Naruto fanfic on this platform. For now, I am loving the story. The writing is decent and very enjoyable story

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Dark_PersonJJ

Im glad you are back, i just Hope you will again update reguraly from now on, it would be great shame if you would drop this great FF.

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Kono_Timoda

I would recommend the author reread the original and observe the words that are used, specifically, the way dialogues and monologues flow, punctuation and the time the author takes to flesh out each characters expressions. Imo, the idea is good but the writing style is lacking compared to the original. Although this was the first 8 chapters, but I think you shushed too much in those chapters.

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Maycon_Henrique_10

Cara é raro encontrar boas fanfics de Naruto você está fazendo um trabalho incrível com essa fanfic espero que não pare de escrever de novo já que essa história é incrível não liga os comentários negativos sobre a história ela é ótima 🤔🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍

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Asura69s

this is a op novel with good English and many more just please don't add Naruto mother to his harem that will be disastrous

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Zenos_Maxima2611

For God's sake!! I couldn't even stand reading more than 5 chapters, and the language you use is kind of cringy. Apart from that, the decision to remove the souls of Ashura and Kurama from Naruto is a bit stupid, I kind of hate it because Naruto doesn't feel like the Naruto I know.

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NetoXIII

The story is very good, with excellent potential, it would be interesting to put other points of view, the only point of criticism is the harem, but many people love it and there are many stories like that, I have to accept it lol, just don't exaggerate the number of harem members.

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Rose_BloodKill

I'm giving it a chance, well it's only the start so let's give it five star for now as it is nice to see it unfold to a great fanfic good luck author-san

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Dark_PersonJJ

I was afraid this will happen, another story dead before it even started.

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Geno_hunter

interesting plot, it keeps wanting to read more and more. I truly hope this keeps going and does not get dropped.

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Luizz_Ricardo

never give up on fanfic...................never give up on fanfic...................never give up on fanfic...................never give up on fanfic...................never give up on fanfic...................never give up on fanfic...................

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James_Schultis

keep up the good work. You already have me hooked to see how it evolves. Thank you

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Leegeeon81

Nice......................................... Nice......................................... Nice......................................... Nice.........................................