it's interesting but it's a bit hard to read, also you need to be consistent on the names, also try to paragraph it better that's all if i can see more
Damn, Ash you need to run now she's a yandere in the making
"—That's wonderful! Master Ash! You can live for a long, long time! This way… we can be together forever!"
Frieren: Reincarnated As a Demon
Anime & Comics · ANelite
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Danmachi - Depthless Hunger
Anime & Comics · FangYuan1234
thanks for the chapter
thanks for the chapter
This message is mainly to see if there are still those who would continue to read my story because I will post 10 chapters along with this one. Depending on the number of people who leave a comment on this paragraph, it will tell me if they want me to continue this story or not.
A special witcher
Video Games · Blax
Hi
Hearing Renault's words, Executioner's mind hadn't even turned a few circles before she realized that all the T-Dolls sitting beside her had already awakened, and all their eyes were fixed on her, as if they would tear her apart at Renault's command!
Transmigrator Commander of Girls Frontline must not be a Reckless man
Anime & Comics · Bismarck_Imperia