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I don't own Star Wars. Disney owns Star Wars.

This Fanfiction is something I have played around with for a very long time. In my head at least and I want to write some stuff about star wars. This is a wish fulfillment and I don't expect that to get through some of the thick skulls of readers.

I won't be updating this regularly, and I wont be giving it a schedule. It's just something I'll write and update when I feel like it. This story isn't set in the skywalker saga, I don't want to get within a light year of that radioactive waste dump. While the original trilogy, clone wars, and mandolorian were excellent that's where the list ends.

I don't want people writing reviews for this story, but I won't say you cant. I just want people to read a star wars fanfiction that is better then most out there. I wont lie I'm inspired by A New Player In The Force. However, my story wont be anything like that fanfiction though I really suggest you people read it. Its actually written by an educated teacher whos fighting leukemia.

I won't bore you guys with anymore talk so I'll get right into the synopsis now.
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A young boy, no older then 15 lies dying in his hospital bed. The reason he is here is because of the illness he inherited from his mother. He doesn't resent anything about his mother or what he got from her, only that his death be as quick.

Before he rested his diseased body on this bed, he would comfort his mother while he could still be considered healthy. His mother passed fast compared to the rate he is going. The Opal family dies with him, and nothing can stop that.

One of the things the two did was watch movies and T.V. shows, and their favorite was everything star wars. With Nathan Opal on his last day he is happy that his painful torment shall end. This is where the story begins.

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easyread

I've been a fan of Star Wars a long time, and most of what I have to say is in the synopsis. So I wont be giving this story a schedule, but it won't be THAT LONG between updates. I hope this is cool with all you guys. Let me know anything about the lore that might be useful.

3yr
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AnotherAtlas

I think the book is really good, but it's not for me. It's a very emotional story and I'm not a big fan of those. Another personal gripe I have is that he will, based on his talks with god or whoever that was, only remember his memories with his mother + only when the 'time is right'.

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Rubi_Stone

very high votes for such a fast going story that has no core. mcs power is too boring for well known reason, and that with lots of dumb time skips. wont number all mistakes, this story is litered by them in every chapter

9mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Morgriff

Was pretty good at first. writing is decent for web novel. the pov transitions are kinda bad but it's not a big deal. then mc becomes the world's biggest emo cry b*tc* you can imagine. it's like anakin from the prequel movies only a thousand times worse. he finds out the jedi kept his parents death a secret from him and he proceeds to go on a rampage killing allies, women, children, and anyone even slightly in his way. he also acts like he's some how morally superior to the sith while monologing to himself how he doesn't even care about the thousands of innocents he's killing. it just gets completely ridiculous and annoying all at once and I eventually dropped.

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2yr
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Will_Caruso

Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about.

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3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
WalterHeisenberg

Just started reading and I’ve read that the Mc doesn’t have his memories? What’s up with that? It’ll just be a OC with the highest potential with the force.

2yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
FadeKnight

i like the start. i like the time period. i like star wars. I don't know how to rate this with only the chapters I've read but I'll rate it 5 stars as a place holder because i like the promise and whats happened so for

3yr
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Will_Caruso

Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. img

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3yr
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Werph
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Story so far is great. Grammer is great. Backstory of the mc has great potential. The start of the story is in the old republic timeline, which is the best timeline. The comments explain everything you need to know about the lore so dont worry just sit back and enjoy the story.

3yr
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CP_Strats

You really need to work on pov changes, it's happens randomly with 0 warning, one moment you are reading from the main character perspective, the next it's the moms, it's just sudden and can get confusing

1yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
Kurosis

Don’t like the fact this doesn’t have a 5 rating so here full marks. ……………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
srevdar
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Ok, so this will just be a preliminary review. First of all, I like the story and KOTOR timeline is my favorite, so I really enjoy this. Second, the grammar is quite good so another plus. Now I only have one problem with this, and that is the POV changes. You change the POV without warning, and sometimes it's not that obvious and it can get confusing by the time you realize. A prompt at the beginning of the new paragrapth when the POV changes will make this a whole lot better. [Character Name POV]

3yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
dozkiller07

I don't know anything about star wars.can I read it too???? do u explain the situations of what happening around so I can get an idea what happening there

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
ReaderVult

I shouldn't be surprised because I'm a fan of The Ancients World, but this fan fict is really good. So now I'm fan of this one too, because the author seems to always do a great job. I love your writing style author-sama, don't change ;) I wish you succes

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starking

Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you

3yr
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fouidea
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good read .,..,,..,.,.,.,.,..,..,.,.,.,.,

4mth
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Azazel_0919

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SpookierSapling

This is amazing and I love this story. Rarely do I see a Star Wars fanfic and usually it’s just mid or really subpar, but this is great. I enjoyed all 122 chapters that I’ve read and I binged it through one night. That doesn’t mean the chapters are short by the way, I just decided to read it all at once because I was so invested in the story and I liked it that much. Thank you author for the chapters and story!

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Morrisw
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I absolutely love this time period and I'm really enjoying the story. Very excited to see where it goes. --------------------------------------------------------------------------

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จำนวน 1

  1. 1
    Death and Wish 3 years ago
  2. 2
    The Mother 3 years ago
  3. 3
    Choosing The Home 3 years ago
  4. 4
    Tatooine 3 years ago
  5. 5
    Little Nathan 3 years ago
  6. 6
    Escape 3 years ago
  7. 7
    Awakened Power 3 years ago
  8. 8
    Meeting People 3 years ago
  9. 9
    Learning I'm special 3 years ago
  10. 10
    Full Invasion of Alderaan 3 years ago
  11. 11
    Tython 3 years ago
  12. 12
    Change of life 3 years ago
  13. 13
    Becoming a Padawan 3 years ago
  14. 14
    Satele's Role 3 years ago
  15. 15
    The Caves of Ilum I 3 years ago
  16. 16
    The Caves of Ilum II 3 years ago
  17. 17
    The Republic Fleet 3 years ago
  18. 18
    Sateles Question 3 years ago
  19. 19
    Instruction from the Grandmaster 3 years ago
  20. 20
    Training Precognition 3 years ago
  21. 21
    A mission on Taris 3 years ago
  22. 22
    Only option I 3 years ago
  23. 23
    Only option II 3 years ago
  24. 24
    Only option III 3 years ago
  25. 25
    Results of training two weeks straight 3 years ago
  26. 26
    The conflict on Hoth I 3 years ago
  27. 27
    The conflict on Hoth II 3 years ago
  28. 28
    A new mission on Hoth I 3 years ago
  29. 29
    A new mission on Hoth II 3 years ago
  30. 30
    Leaving Hoth, Alone 3 years ago
  31. 31
    Training in Solitude 3 years ago
  32. 32
    Putting Myself Through Torture 3 years ago
  33. 33
    Coruscant, The Dying World 3 years ago
  34. 34
    The Underworld of Coruscant 3 years ago
  35. 35
    Assaulting a Republic Military Base I 3 years ago
  36. 36
    Assaulting a Republic Military Base II 3 years ago
  37. 37
    A Battle Against One 3 years ago
  38. 38
    Burned out 3 years ago
  39. 39
    Story resuming on P-a-t-r-e-o-n 3 years ago
  40. 40
    Nar Shaddaa, The Hutt's World 3 years ago
  41. 41
    Kemro, The Fat Slug 3 years ago
  42. 42
    7 years later 3 years ago
  43. 43
    Arriving on Nal Hutta 3 years ago
  44. 44
    Business talks 3 years ago
  45. 45
    Confrontation 3 years ago
  46. 46
    Demonstration 3 years ago
  47. 47
    Escalation 2 years ago
  48. 48
    Leaving for Tatooine 2 years ago
  49. 49
    My Home... 2 years ago
  50. 50
    Republic's Attempts 2 years ago
  51. 51
    Conflict Sparks 2 years ago
  52. 52
    Master and Apprentice 2 years ago
  53. 53
    Two Masters vs The Force Incarnate 2 years ago
  54. 54
    Intimidation 2 years ago
  55. 55
    Dark Council Meeting 2 years ago
  56. 56
    Belsavis, Republic Prison World 2 years ago
  57. 57
    Jedi Council Meeting 2 years ago
  58. 58
    Heading to Balmorra 2 years ago
  59. 59
    Landing on Balmorra 2 years ago
  60. 60
    Meditation Training (Flashback Chapter) 2 years ago
  61. 61
    Easily Handled 2 years ago
  62. 62
    Unknown Motives 2 years ago
  63. 63
    Considering the Offer 2 years ago
  64. 64
    Helping Balmorra 2 years ago
  65. 65
    The Honorable Lord Morris 2 years ago
  66. 66
    Lord Morris Fights 2 years ago
  67. 67
    A Good Sith, Dead 2 years ago
  68. 68
    A lesson in Control (Flashback Chapter) 2 years ago
  69. 69
    Landing on Ilum 2 years ago
  70. 70
    Pushing Towards The Caves of Ilum 2 years ago
  71. 71
    Lightsaber Battle in a Snowstorm 2 years ago
  72. 72
    Outpost Guardian 2 years ago
  73. 73
    Cursed with Knowledge 2 years ago
  74. 74
    Meeting Mother... 2 years ago
  75. 75
    The Mother, Abeloth (Flashback Chapter) 2 years ago
  76. 76
    An Explanation... 2 years ago
  77. 77
    Further Escalation in War 2 years ago
  78. 78
    Restoring A World 2 years ago
  79. 79
    Tatooine, Now a Paradise 2 years ago
  80. 80
    Relaying The Message 2 years ago
  81. 81
    A Talk with My Old Master 2 years ago
  82. 82
    An Abandoned Son 2 years ago
  83. 83
    Landing on Ord Mantell 2 years ago
  84. 84
    Fort Garnik Cantina 2 years ago
  85. 85
    First to Arrive 2 years ago
  86. 86
    The Final Arrival 2 years ago
  87. 87
    The Story of The Star Cabal 2 years ago
  88. 88
    Assaulting A Military Compound 2 years ago
  89. 89
    Military Outpost Deep Crystal 2 years ago
  90. 90
    Infiltrating Military Outpost Deep Crystal 2 years ago
  91. 91
    Buying Theron Time 2 years ago
  92. 92
    Getting the Information I need 1 years ago
  93. 93
    Final Talks Before Departure 1 years ago
  94. 94
    The Spy Makes a Move 1 years ago
  95. 95
    The Next Destination 1 years ago
  96. 96
    Belsavis, The Prison World 1 years ago
  97. 97
    Mega-Security Ward-23 1 years ago
  98. 98
    Answers, and More Questions 1 years ago
  99. 99
    SCORPIO, The Guide Droid 1 years ago
  100. 100
    Two Dark Lords 1 years ago
  101. 101
    An Overwhelming Power 1 years ago
  102. 102
    Battle with Darth Marr I 1 years ago
  103. 103
    Battle with Darth Marr II 1 years ago
  104. 104
    Making A Pivotal Decision 1 years ago
  105. 105
    Heading to The Star Cabal HQ 1 years ago
  106. 106
    Siege on The Star Cabal I 1 years ago
  107. 107
    Siege on The Star Cabal II 1 years ago
  108. 108
    The Torture Begins 1 years ago
  109. 109
    Freedom 1 years ago
  110. 110
    The Star Cabal Revealed 1 years ago
  111. 111
    Galaxy In Chaos 1 years ago
  112. 112
    Seeing Marisa After 12 Years 1 years ago
  113. 113
    Catching Up I 1 years ago
  114. 114
    Catching Up II 1 years ago
  115. 115
    Interruptions 1 years ago
  116. 116
    Head First 1 years ago
  117. 117
    The Wild Mountains 1 years ago
  118. 118
    Entering The Killiks Hive 1 years ago
  119. 119
    Diving Deep Into The Killik's Hive 1 years ago
  120. 120
    An Important Story I 1 years ago
  121. 121
    An Important Story II 1 years ago
  122. 122
    Saying Our Goodbyes 1 years ago
  123. 123
    Declaration Of War 1 years ago
  124. 124
    Escalation 1 years ago
  125. 125
    Political Warfare 1 years ago
  126. 126
    Old Recordings 1 years ago
  127. 127
    Making It To The Palace 1 years ago
  128. 128
    Fleets Move And Campaigns Begin 1 years ago
  129. 129
    Intimidation Display 1 years ago
  130. 130
    A Dark Day For The Hutts 1 years ago
  131. 131
    A Simple Time I (Flashback Chapter) 1 years ago
  132. 132
    A Simple Time II (Flashback Chapter) 1 years ago
  133. 133
    A Simple Time III (Flashback Chapter) 1 years ago
  134. 134
    A Simple Time IV (Flashback Chapter) 1 years ago
  135. 135
    Nella's Questions 11 months ago
  136. 136
    War Begins To Rage 11 months ago
  137. 137
    Arrival On Lothal 10 months ago
  138. 138
    The Village Elder 10 months ago
  139. 139
    On Our Own Here 9 months ago
  140. 140
    Ancient Temple of Lothal I 9 months ago
  141. 141
    Ancient Temple of Lothal II 9 months ago
  142. 142
    My Sister 9 months ago
  143. 143
    A Way Off Lothal 9 months ago
  144. 144
    Back On Coruscant 9 months ago
  145. 145
    Marisa Meeting Us 8 months ago
  146. 146
    Nella Meets Satele 8 months ago
  147. 147
    Satele's Request 8 months ago
  148. 148
    Old Conversations 8 months ago
  149. 149
    Tour Of The Senate Chambers 8 months ago
  150. 150
    A Tour Of The Ruined Jedi Temple I 8 months ago
  151. 151
    A Tour Of The Ruined Jedi Temple II 8 months ago
  152. 152
    A Tour Of The Ruined Jedi Temple III 8 months ago
  153. 153
    A Tour Of The Ruined Jedi Temple IV 8 months ago
  154. 154
    Eassa And I, Through Time 8 months ago
  155. 155
    Free Fall, Rough Landing 8 months ago
  156. 156
    Old Prophecies... 8 months ago
  157. 157
    A Grandmaster And An Opal 8 months ago
  158. 158
    A Duel 7 months ago
  159. 159
    Not So Old After All 7 months ago
  160. 160
    Finding The Old Library 7 months ago
  161. 161
    Going Deeper 7 months ago
  162. 162
    Abomination 7 months ago
  163. 163
    Reality Has No Bounds... Or Is It Imagination... 7 months ago
  164. 164
    Secondary Power Source And Shown A Hint Of The Past 7 months ago
  165. 165
    To An Old Library 7 months ago
  166. 166
    Damaged Report 7 months ago
  167. 167
    [Classified Report: The Mortis Gods] 7 months ago
  168. 168
    Back At The Senate Building And Questions Asked 7 months ago
  169. 169
    A Truth Revealed 7 months ago
  170. 170
    Leaving Coruscant 7 months ago
  171. 171
    A Needed Lesson 7 months ago
  172. 172
    The Dagobah System 7 months ago
  173. 173
    The Tragedy Of The Dawnrider 7 months ago
  174. 174
    An Artifact Of House Opal 7 months ago
  175. 175
    Next Step 7 months ago
  176. 176
    Diving Into The Force 7 months ago
  177. 177
    A Cave Of Dagobah 7 months ago
  178. 178
    Nightmares Of Ryloth I 7 months ago
  179. 179
    Nightmares Of Ryloth II 7 months ago
  180. 180
    The Northern End Of Dagobah 7 months ago
  181. 181
    More Than A Monument 6 months ago
  182. 182
    A New Mission 6 months ago
  183. 183
    The Ancient History Of Dantooine 6 months ago
  184. 184
    Arriving On Dantooine 6 months ago
  185. 185
    Wendy And Garlen 6 months ago
  186. 186
    Partition Major, Dantooine Settlement 6 months ago
  187. 187
    Major Riley 5 months ago
  188. 188
    An Exchange 5 months ago
  189. 189
    Hunting Two Targets I 4 months ago
  190. 190
    Hunting Two Targets II 4 months ago
  191. 191
    Taste Of Darkness 4 months ago
  192. 192
    Sisters Reunite 4 months ago
  193. 193
    An End To This Journey 4 months ago
  194. 194
    Reydoth & Ruins 4 months ago
  195. 195
    A New Problem 4 months ago
  196. 196
    Dark Below 4 months ago
  197. 197
    Light Above 4 months ago

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