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A guy gets a system.
He goes to other worlds.
He wants to build a harem.
He becomes a god?
Join Alex as he joins a game to determine the next God as he travels to new worlds and builds a harem to help him in battle
Note- I do not own ANYTHING that is part of an already existing franchise
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เขียนรีวิวIve read till the point where the beings in the mc realise something/someone is limiting him in his power when i dropped it.Dont know if anyone of you can spoil me what or who it is since i really dont like the whole dark enemy hiding thing troupe.Also the fact there are other potential people that are basically the same as him just turns him into a "normal mc" instead of a guy with a system.Invest at your own risk.
The grammar is surprisingly good, well compared to other novels on THIS site. The characters at least have some level of individuality, but still feel somewhat plain, and the plot holes are frustrating. The author updates quite frequently, and I can see he has put a lot of effort. The plot doesn't really derail from the command in the beginning, which I found quite frustrating. Don't bother reading the other reviews, they're all from mindless fangirls who don't have their own opinion.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Didn't go further than chapter 3 since author seems obsseded with issei and seems to want the mc stick with him, i don't even understand how people can like this character, it's beyond me... Maybe i'm not stupid enough to "appreciate" this character?
Weak mc ,saiyan bloodline?!! maybe it's fake can turn into Ss, and still getting trash by weakling, just ruined the image of a saiyan getting trashed by and earth god and weak ass devil ,only good when its thinking about his dick, shame on you
NTR VIBES warning 1, MC has transmigrated to DXD world but even with all his power advantage, ANd knowing that Riser will fondle and kiss Rias in the rating game, doesnt prevent it at all. He lets it happen then uses it as an trigger to let him grow stronger. What fucking bullshit: He might as well repeat that since it granted him so much power?!? Just another fucking excuse from an author to include ntr vibe scenes. 2. MC has system, Saiyan powers, Sacred Gear, all that but still getting beaten left right despite ALSO knowing his opponents powers, personalities, etc. This MC is outright incapable. 3. Novel is poorly written in a “tell” rather than “show” since most things are summarized rather than described. In fact all the while they are in DXD, there is almost no deviation from the original story line except small changes eg harem members and the MC is Alex instead...might as well go read the original work its 10000x better.
I can't help but start hating your novel now that to love ru girls will be raped. this novel go from my most loved of this site to the most hated I ever read in my life I'm even trying to think of ways to forget the existence of this fic
Dropped after chapter 67, due to the large number of lessbian scenes. Like if there was just one kiss there and all then I would not feel strong disgust, but **** there are a lot of such scenes where they eat each other, double penetration, **** disgusting. And about the strength of the Sayan bloodline, he is weak as a cunt, he was defeated by the Fenrir in his super Saiyan, the super Saiyan power amplification x50 ??? And also buffs from work in the system. This fic disgraces the proud name of the Sayan race!!! Writing Quality - 2 stars, because of the lesbian theme Stability of Updates - 3 stars, I don't know, I read it when 350+ chapters were already published Story Development - 2 stars, While I read very little training here, the description of the combat is not very good, mostly *** scenes and just the interaction of mc with the characters Character Design - 1 star, Weak, catches girls like Pokemon, stupid, does not use his potential, since there are many strong characters around him and he can ask for sparring with them and get zenkai boost, combat experience, and build relationships with them World Background - 1 star, some god, a test, other transmigators, and observer angels, why is this, what is the point? idk
After chapter 100 the mc became someone that only thinks with his dick 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
Honestly, I do not see how this chapter get such a high rating... chapter 2 level increase, chapter 3 level increase, etc... he just sit there and **** and his level still increase... wow
Rias does not deserve more than 1 star. 凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄凸( ̄ヘ ̄
The MC only takes virgin girls and there are a lot of fulfilling hentai scene in this novel. I love it, the MC make effort to get girls and i suggest the potential reader to try to read this first until this day's chapter.
There is a ntr(netorare not netori) I dropped it because it should’ve had a #ntr tag but it didn’t so it was very disappointing thing. Everything else was okay. He also had it because it was meant for a big emotion yk so that he can get stronger😪 he could’ve just killed off his parents but yk he ended up going after the mc’s harem member. It wasn’t that bad but it was disappointing that he said it was meant for mc to level up.
Ntr warning!!! MC let his girlfriend go to her fisnce(yes she is engaged and didnt tell him about it) Who is a pervert who played with her body while kissing her..
Currently chapters 4, and I can say the way the system works and his wishes caugh me completely off guard, I never seen this type of start and it's really intresting and I like it a lot better than other novel, especially the main theme of the novel :D
I’ve read to the current chapter as of 9/24/2021, and I have to say: it keeps getting better. A lot of people drop at the mention of other isekai’d characters and even vote bad for it having so, to them I say: stop being a special snowflake. Outside of special circumstances a single person being reincarnated for whatever reason to live out their dreams is unrealistic. Sure those make great stories for more unrealistic circumstances but this ain’t that kind of story. Stop voting bad just because the premise doesn’t suit you delicate sensibilities, and try to be more fair to the story itself. The story gets remarkably good as the author gets better and better at writing. Do the other reincarnators mess things up? Yes, but they also typically get obliterated shortly after while pretty much gifting Alex more girls he doesn’t have to visit their worlds for. The author does a amazing job keeping all the girls actually involved as well, ofc he has his favorites, as we all do, but that is to be expected. My only real complaint is having to wait a long time for the next chapter, but that is more then made up for with how long the chapters are each time. TL;DR: Stories good, just gotta stomach some unpleasentness first. Also come with the mindset that just like in the real world not every woman worth loving is going to be a virgin when you meet/meat them. Virgin purists can go suck on eggs.
i just feel like giving it one star i just feel like giving it one star i just feel like giving it one star i just feel like giving it one star i just feel like giving it one star
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์complete trash . you will lose brain cells by reading this ------------------------------ ---------------------------------------------------
So there is ntr, even if it's a girl it doesn't matter that it's ntr, I already don't like yuri in the harem, but here it's even worse the mc is clearly a certified cuckold and I'm not even talking about the scene with Rias and Riser which is also too much 😤😤
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Why I stopped reading.... Sorry for the low rating but when you introduced other world travellers than mc, I dropped the novel because of the direction it is headed. Nothing personal.. (I only like op mc with his harem and nobody daring to touch his girls... And hence this is not the novel for me..) Bye